Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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Wouldn't mind it
I'd go for it, so long as you release a chapter along with it. Great chapter by the way. Stupid nobles. Dominic outta go all Monte Cristo on their asses
I'm actually not a big fan of the whole Q and A thing. I like not knowing every single little thing, just seems like a waste of time and creative energy that could probably have gone towards a new chapter. I'd say just do a special chapter, maybe something a bit longer then usual with a nice bit of plot development. Still it's always best to go with whatever feels best, as for me, I can definitely say that if a Q and A were to come out, I wouldn't read it.
HOLY SHIT! AN UPDATE!!!
P.S I fucking love this story!
wouldn't mind a Q&A, but I feel that it would be most appropriate much later in the story, at least get out 10 more chapters before doing so.
Q and A are a waste of time in my book. I'd rather see a 1k word chapter update than a 10k word Q and A.
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389! thats my bet! 50 bits
And then the zergling invades Equestria and kills all the "Indecent" noble houses then leave. The end!
The lunar princess has learnt the art of trolling!
The fun has been doubled! Huzzah!
Oh sun damit! The U.S ain't even in the same universe and were getting blamed for shit.
4545739 What? Did you expect them to accept the blame themselves?
Great chapter. I can't wait for more
4544704 This. Definately this.
Wow, I really hate this fic, but never let it be said I hate from ignorance. I read this fic for all 20 chapters, so I really tried, because I really liked the initial concept and as I continued reading it felt like I was trying to force enjoyment out of it, like trying to squeeze water from a stone. The grammar and syntax are the high points
Let's break it down:
- The pacing is too slow, like molasses in an igloo crammed up the ass of Subzero exiled to the surface of Pluto while somehow watching the 7 hour director's cut of Dune while listening to Progressive Rock.
- So far what we've established is that Dom has seen some shit, loves a country that no longer exist (I'll go into that later in this critique), treats everything with a level of deep hostility despite it being clear as crystal that they aren't zombies, it's because of this hostility that the denizens of Canterlot rioted well that and apparently no can say anything bad about Celestia and for some reason they gave him a position of power within the military. From there the plot sorta meanders around like a guide dog chasing a squirrel into traffic.
-The super-patriotism sorta irks me. Dom is all like USA this and USA that, you half expect him to crap out stars and stripes and piss sparklers and hum America the Beautiful everywhere he goes and that patriotism means nothing to the other characters. Even Steve Rogers would tell him to tone it down a notch.
-The genuine unpleasantness of everything. Dominic is like "I ain't takin' off my helmet and stuff, who knows I might be ambushed by a talking dinner roll." Then there was everyone not acting like Blueblood's actions against the mean, aggressive, ape-creature with weapons that can make heads explode like salsa filled pinata were even a little justified. Everyone had the right to be scared shitless, especially how he acted when he met the dignitaries and could have caused an international incident. Also who thought it was good idea to bring Dominic to the meeting in the first place.
-This is made of stupid. characters either act OCC or like complete morons and make ass backwards decisions.
Peace Out.
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I appreciate your comment, and your hatred has been noted.
You don't like it, fine. At least you left a comment, which gives me ideas on ways to improve the story. Have a nice evening, and may you find luck in your endeavors.
Yes, just yes. Loving it all. But question, how does the mail get to the alicorns?
4935256 If I had to guess, with the help of the only pony who would remain neutral in this debate concerning the human: Derpy.
Either that of carrier birds.
TrolLuna is best Luna!
God dammit
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I'd teleport any pony that has a beef with Dominic's United States right into the middle of the Oval Office. Let them take it up with Zombie Obama.
'Huzzah! The trolling has been doubled!'
Dude... fucking brilliant! You just made my day! You deserve a mustache fine sir.
Troll Luna?
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You have my undivided attention now sir.
Lol
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yes, lol indeed
6797460 it was at that moment that Iteration died laughing.
5739944 why not zombie McDonald trump? "Small loan of a million bits!"
It occurs to me that this isn't entirely out of the question, if they can get the spell to make something like a stable portal. Just step right in and loot, loot, loot! Free zombie apocalypse with every shipment.
This is one of the best fanfics I've read in a while!
7378082 I second that notion
Lol, blacked out everything because it was classified. That’s amazing!
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Well, you could say they'd get a head of state's undivided attention, at the very least... ;>
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How appropriate.
TROLLING LUNA...IS BEST LUNA !!! HHHUUUZZAAHH !!!!!!
How do they even have SHARPIES in Equestria ? Unless Dom had his own with him on his arrival.
Ok I've gotta say this, I fucking love how you're having the ponies curse a lot hahaha just imagining it in their voices makes it 10x better
When you abuse the fact that the US has one citizen so you name him recognized head of state because nobody can say differently
I love the new image for THE BOSS !!!!!