Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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It's sweet.
I really liked the "Take the ball away" comparison. I hope Luna actually does that.
Alternatively if it is two islands the princesses should be powerful enough to pull them apart form one another, you know, cause they can move celestial bodies around.
it's d'awww and paced right so far.
Blow up the island or sink it, make it uninhabitable and blame mother nature in some way that way the princess can get away with it.
The ending of the chapter was sweet and heartwarming. I think the pace overal is fine, just the pace of the scenes near the end seemed a little sped up. Other than that it was alright :)
Pace is good, don't worry.
Your description.... TO FRICKIN GOOD
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unless the nations have a way of detecting magic and are all "wtf celestia!?"
Let Dom have the island. Build a house on it.
Honestly, the romance is moving at an adequate pace. Any faster or slowerid be worried that you were tryin to push things.
So he's an conservative? As long as he ain't one of the far right types it'll be good. I've grown to like this over these many chapters.
The romance is going at a nice steady pace. So you've got that part done for now.
The island issue is a tricky one to deal with. I feel that Equestria should either, A: Take it away and keep it for itself, B: Have it destroyed, C: give to someone else, or D: Have some kinda tournament that that will award the winning side the island.
What kinda game could it be though?
Hmmm. . . .
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Yeah, for a while there he was wobbling into D-Bag territory but looks like he might pull out just yet.
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Heh, Luna said she's fat... Heh.
Another great chapter. Romance is on a good steady pace. Not too fast and not too slow :D
I suppose noone ever just drew a little green line over the island to split it have they? I recall it worked wonders the last time it happened here.
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I can neither confirm or deny what has happened, what is happening, and what may happen, with Mr. Discord. Hey may, or may not, make an appearance at one point or another.
Translation from Legalese to Common Speak: He's in limbo at the moment, I haven't decided where, or if, I should put him in.
The romance... is awesome. The pace your going at seems very appropriate for this story. Well done.
I like your pace of the romance not too fast and not too slow
I think you could probably speed it up a bit at this point. They're plenty acquainted and comfortable with each other, there isn't much left to be done except pussyfoot around the issue, which is kinda boring.
Well so far all we've got is a one sided crush. Dom hasn't yet even entertained the thought of being with a pony, let alone Luna
Stuff's gettin real good!!!
(Minus a couple typos....)
Destroy everything on the island, salt the earth, and then sink the whole thing into the sea. Problem solved.
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: Oooooooohhhh! 'Sodom and Gomorrah' action, that'd be one heck of a party! Especially the big fire cracker at the beginning! :D
TB: ... Pinkie, how do you know about that?
: What? Everyone knows about that. It's an old pony's tale after all!
TB: Pony ta--!? Pinkie that's a human story...
: Yeah, it--
TB: From the Bible!..
: I was gonna say the Old Testament, but that works too! :D *squee*
TB: ... *groan* Pinkie being Pinkie...
I honestly don't see how anyone could keep superstitious beliefs after all this guy has been through. the world was destroyed by a zombie apocalypse, and he was pulled into Equestria. for most it would open my idea's to many possibilities, hell maybe that the now proven multiverse thing that their might be a universe that was unfortunate enough to have the blood drenched monster called God in the bible, but anyone who believes in myth such as the bible, would either see everything there as an "evil made by Saten" that needed to be destroyed, or drop their faith within a few months. course you would still have a few that stick to their faith in the face of something like this, but then they would just be unreasonable.
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To be fair, you have to have a VERY high IQ to understand Rick and Morty. The humour is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of theoretical physics most of the jokes will go over a typical viewer’s head. There’s also Rick’s nihilistic outlook, which is deftly woven into his characterisation- his personal philosophy draws heavily from Narodnaya Volya literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realize that they’re not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike Rick & Morty truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn’t appreciate, for instance, the humour in Rick’s existential catchphrase “Wubba Lubba Dub Dub,” which itself is a cryptic reference to Turgenev’s Russian epic Fathers and Sons. I’m smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as Dan Harmon’s genius wit unfolds itself on their television screens. What fools.. how I pity them.
And yes, by the way, i DO have a Rick & Morty tattoo. And no, you cannot see it. It’s for the ladies’ eyes only- and even then they have to demonstrate that they’re within 5 IQ points of my own (preferably lower) beforehand. Nothing personnel kid.
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I love and hate you for this.
GOOD LUCK LUNA !!!
God I hate world policing Americans
Three weeks later ? Does it really take that long to get a supply train going ?