Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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I need a drink aswell. Good thinking! Nice battle scene by the way.
Awww man... that was... rough...
Rest in Peace Errent.
Nice job man, nice job.
6223389 I have a drink right now!
well, that happened.
I can safely say I'd didn't enjoy this chapter. For more reasons then you lot think.
We could all use one after that
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I'd be interested in hearing them.
6224081 manily the plot bit with the Changelings, I found it unnecessary. How no one noticed a Changeling hive near. Shouldn't that be something you look, ya know if Changeling or Diamond dogs are under your feet? The fact Chrissy didn't feel the emotion of the sniper. Givin it was a battle and fear was rampant, but Chrissy is the oldest(maybe) and most powerful Changeling. More of a nitpick really that serves no purpose either way. The whole battle scene just doesn't fit Chrissy's style. She prefers infiltration and back room dealing... She's a schemer.
these two really arnt your fault, but more about my biases. The lack of diplomacy. Chrissy needs to feed her people ( ya fuck you evolution, what kind advantage is that eating love?) And the Americans need Allies. Could be a mutually beneficial relationship. War is primitive and childish.
When ever I see patriotism or nationalism I can't help but role my eyes, and it just sucks me right out of anything I'm doing.
Again these two arnt really so much your fault as my own personal biases.
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Eeyup. I can see where you're coming from. Personally I always viewed Chrysalis as a schemer with too much ambition. She comes up on a big intimidating pedestal thinking she has the upper hand, when in actuality she should have been scheming ways into New Liberty. She didn't know what she was getting into and as such lead her people into a slaughter.
As for the fear thing, I was going on the assumption that since pretty much everyone in New Liberty was probably radiating fear and anger beyond belief, Chipped Blade's emotions just sort of faded into the proverbial background radiation. That's something I intend to address in a later chapter, however.
I appreciate you bringing these things to my attention, it helps to know where my mistakes are so I can fix them as soon as possible. You have yourself a fine day, sir.
6224255 I'm just a peace loving hippie who'd rather seen my favorite character in the show be a bit more diplomatic. She's a smart one, diplomacy cna better fit her needs. But I understand the need for a villain, and she's the best choice. Tho noone ever seems to want to use diamond dogs as villains... Why is that? Anyhow, I'm happy to help.
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Who said the Diamond Dogs won't make an appearance here?
6224296 that's just my Chrissy bias seeping through, don't mind it. Chrissy can be a good guy! Just let happen! no bad bias! You have no place here!
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*tosses 'Bias' into a black unmarked van driven by shadowy individuals* Problem solved.
6224312 it'll be back! It always comes back. Queen Chrissy 2016!
“Fowl night demon!”
Foul. Fowl is a bird.
6225139 What else floats?
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Fun fact: Canada once captured a bunch of US land and burnt down the whitehouse. Canada then gave the land back. I learned some neat stuff in my old Social Studies class!
Love the quote from We Were Soldiers
I liked it good job keep it up see you next chapter
We now need Dominic to go in and interrogate Chrysalis himself, in the middle of the night, after tying her down, restraining her magic, and waking Chrysalis by way of waterboarding - just to help alleviate some of his newfound aggrevation, and to pretty early on set the tone that he is not one to be fucked with, and to show it is not a good idea to try and manipulate him or his society in no uncertain terms....
Plus, with him being a species that Chrysalis has never seen before, it would only add to the fear and intimidation factors, what with so many ways he could build up the creepiness factor..... you know he's gonna do some shit there, so why not try and do it in the most effective, psychologically-marking form possible, if nothing else than to show not to fuck with him and America....
Err...
I'm not 100% sure that those would be the best siege engines for launching that ammunition...
Also, the plural of 'ballista' is 'ballistae'. Also also the second instance that I quoted shouldn't be capitalized.
(action movie + America)^ponies = Coming Out Of It
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Coming out of it. A story about conflict, romance, and now featuring torture technique workshops... Interesting turn...
*sniffles*
Errent is best cute fanged demonic looking pony......I miss the damned stubborn mare already....
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I've noticed a recent influx of readers lately, I have no idea where they came from though. Would you mind telling me where you heard about this story?
6330561 seen a update and im always looking for new stories to read so... ya great chapter only thing is why not load the dead enemy into to things if anything could break a spirit its seeing your dead comrades being thrown at you. (then again my moral compass is a bit off center)
6486635 thats called being morally Grey.
6330561 I'm hoping that there is a few good Changelings in the future of this story and the sequel.
Originally, there were twenty and only twenty recruits for the new American army. I'm pretty sure more than that have died by now. Where did the rest come from? When did they join? More importantly, why did they join? Even for those first twenty, we don't really know what their motives were, other than "Princess Luna asked us to".
It kinda makes the whole "patriotism" angle fall flat for everyone that's not Dominic. Because it's not "we stand for this" or "we oppose that", it is (as far as we can see) a pure "us versus them" mentality. Red versus Blue. Yankees versus Red Sox.
They could have deeper reasons than that, of course. But you never really mention them, and instead lean entirely on the "America" bit. As though the important part of patriotism is which flag you happen to wave, and which songs you happen to play. Go, team!
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I guess I forgot to start adding bits of information regarding why the thestrals are so interested in the US, it's kinda got to do with latent racism that's persisted since the 'Nightmare Moon Rebellion'. I had only been toying with the idea at the time I was writing these, it's a lot more well covered in the sequel.
VERY nice reference! It was the verbal challenge and response for our 101st Airborne during Operation Overlord during WWII.
You kill likeable characters like Steven Moffat kills companions. How dare you make me like these ponies and then kill them
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Yes, damn that Steven Moffat. Too many times have I cried due to that man.
I can't get over errant being gone. She was one of the first batponys that Dom came to like.
I wonder how they have Chrissy restrained. Does she have a ring on her horn ? She is powerful as hell. How did they contain such a powerful being ? I would think, she would have bound up tight.
"Major Elbow Grease" lol that name kill'd me xD
Rip Errent. May you regroup with your brothers and sisters.
If you see my father in Valhalla tell him hi for me.
Ah fuck, not Errant.......
Damn, I forgot who dies in this chapter, you will be missed Errant
We lost a good one today, RIP Errent
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