Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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Little overkill on blue blood but I wholeheartedly agree with it
NOoooooooes! You left them!
Welcome back btw:)
I will not deny, I feel the bit with Blueblood was largely excessive. Robbing him of his money and home? Fine. His title? Fine. But his horn and just...torture? A bit much for anyone methinks.
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No such thing as overkill. Besides, Dominic could've castrated him :)
Overall another great chapter, I'm really looking forwar to the next one! I think that the part with Blueblood was pretty badass and it'll be interesting to see Dominic's relationships with the guards (not that kind you perv) that have been assigned to protect him.
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Then he'd be even more of an unlikable character. We GET it. He had a tough life. Y'know what? So has everybody else at some point. I quote Reel Big Fish. "LIFE SUCKS! What ELSE is new? THAT'S TOUGH! There's not much you can do! You're not the ONLY one! Not having any fun!"
Nor am I having fun reading about this guy. He does nothing but angst, yell at other people, and beat them up. If I wanted to see that, I'd watch EVANGELION! He's more whiny and emo than Shinji.
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It's been EIGHTEEN CHAPTERS and he is NO DIFFERENT than when he first started out. Real character development is needed for a story like this. But he hasn't shown any. He's just a jerk whom can't be sympathized with because he doesn't do anything noble to excuse his poor behavior. Having a sympathetic backstory alone does not cut it. Hannibal ate people alive because his sister was killed. But he was at least charming and affable. This guy is brutish, cynical, dickish, unlikable, psychotic, selfish, bratty and whiny. Grow the hell up, you're a grown ass man in a totally different dimension away from the zombie apocalypse! You LUCKED OUT. Does he act grateful? No, because the author has to throw in contrived nonsense to make other characters look bad so he can look good. It's called "bad writing". Or "pulling a Frank Miller". Much like how Miller makes superman look bad to make batman look good.
This story so far has kicked me right in the feels, helped get them back up again just to mess with them and confuse them. I dont even know how I feel about this anymore
4247909 If you don't like how this story or the main protagonist are written, then why the hell are you still reading it? It's like finding a pile of dog shit, rolling in it, then bitching about the smell. The only one that will get annoyed about it is you, everyone else is just going to laugh at how stupid you look/sound.
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If you hate it so much then why did you read it all instead of moving along and reading other things you'd prefer?
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By your logic, then nobody should ever post a critique of anything because if they don't like, don't buy or don't read or don't watch. How are we going to inform others who might be reading this about hear is wrong with a work and where it needs improving if we don't complain? Picture a world in which only positive reviews of things were allowed to be heard. You'd end up buying crap and wouldn't realize it until it was too late!
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Because as we all know, if you want to see something changed, you stay absolutely silent and never criticize at all. Can you imagine a world in which ANY negative feedback was ignored and destroyed? Without it, nobody would know when to stay away from something!
Retribution
Nice chapter :D
4248307 Well while you are entitled to your own thoughts and opinions on things such as this story I have to disagree and that if you dislike I story you should just try to find something else that you DO like instead of continuing to monitor it just to keep complaining. Not to mention that most of those read the comments are disagreeing with your views as well.
As a business student i support taking his Assets however as a human the torture was a bit much for my tast, it's just reinforcing what the ponies think of him. This stated i understand why he did it, i just don't support it.
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Most people who read my comments on "Malideus" down voted those comments too, even though I was pointing out how the story was badly written, casting an unlikable character who is meant to be deliberately offensive and flat, because the author of the story is a troll. But they downloaded my comments anyway because, for starters, they didn't want to believe that, two, the rest of them want to see terrible things happene to the my little pony cast because they're jerks.
The point I'm trying to get across is just because a majority of people hold an opinion, that does not mean the opinion is always right.
A fitting punishment
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Alright, then say your piece and move on. You cannot control the world, nor will people always listen to you. Fact of life. Don't just keep keep reading it if you don't find it to your liking. There is critiquing, and then there's complaining. I find comparing this to Neo Genesis Evangelion discusting by the way. However, I do find that bit with Blueblood poorly thought out on Dominic's part, but I don't know if I would have done any different. He seems to be more of the impusive type.
I, personally, enjoy this fic, but I will admit I was pretty stand off-ish at first due to the entire zombie thing. Then, it was explained in a way that it seemed more like a non-lethal rabies that destroyed your cognitive functions. I do find this enjoyable, and have you ever met someone with a high degree of PTSD? I think he's doing fairly well, and he was working to better himself. He was trying to find a job before he figured out no pony would take him. He even tried to help further the Equestrian military (abit was a little cornered into doing so) responsibly. He could have just told them about all of our technologies (i.e. mustard gas, rockets, etc.) and didn't. You're not really putting yourself in the shoes of the character here. How would you feel like if all that happened to you? No, don't answer. You can't possibly know until it happens. I doubt you have ever killed someone, I doubt you have been the lowest person on the social totem poll, and I highly doubt you know how PTSD actually affects someone.
Thank you for listening.
edit: I do agree with you on "Malideus" though. However, I do not classify this story anywhere near that.
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All I see is this:
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"I will change the world because I hate it so!"
I can imagine it actually. A world where everyone would just acknowledge that's what people like and move on to what they like instead of trying to stomp it away forever.
(No more replies from me after this post btw)
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The constant complaining is starting to bug me. You had 17 chapters before to decide that this story wasn't to your liking and move on, you didn't and decided to stick around. Now, you're entitled to your own opinion, but when you've had all that time to decide to leave a story behind, well it makes me think your complaining just to complain. This story was published in August, you've had until now to decide you don't like it.
I understand you dislike my work, thank you for telling me. Now, if there's nothing more aside from complaints, please move on.
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Some people LIKED Twilight and War Z. Didn't mean they didn't stink and people did not need to know what was wrong with them.
yes! a new chapter i cant wait to read it keep it up my friend
4247909 you have to realize that he went to hell and back being in the Apocalypse so he's most likely thraumatized to no end and does not want to form relationships with anyone should the Zombies attack
I'm probably overthinking this but...
Naaaa. He couldn't......could he?
Meh, probably not.
Great chapter. Though I prefer Blueblood to have some semblance of humility in fics I also don't mind see things such as this. Odd.
4249956 What? What is it?!? Come say it, the anticipation is killing me
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Not enough
4250779 Well usually when it comes to humans and interaction with magical objects (i.e: Bluebloods horn) they tend to have some odd effects or none at all. Just had a thought that maybe it was more than just slight discomfort when he crushed it.
As I said though, probably overthinking this.
4251538 Oh, phew; you nearly had me think he was about to shoot lighting out of his hands
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Zombies attack HOW? They are in ANOTHER DIMENSION ENTIRELY, in a land with people who have super strength, magic and flight. It would make absolutely no sense to have zombies show up. No sense at ALL.
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Can we PLEASE stop arguing? You both have your opinions, which is fine! But do not turn the comments section into a flame war. You've both said your piece about the story, if you want to keep fighting I ask you do so via private message. I appreciate all comments, but I will not tolerate this sort of fighting with meaningless comments.
4254367 Okay sorry i was explaining to this other user why i think he is an asshole (no offense to the author)
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I just don't want people to get the wrong Idea when they look at the Comment section. I really don't like having to come down on people like this.
4258318 okay Boss
4248575 How do you download comments? Or is the option not on mobile?
Bluebutt's punishment was in a bit of a fuzzy, grey area for me. Stopped just a bit short of excessive, but went further than was strictly necessary. Personally, I have no problems with it, but mostly because of the fact that Blueblood's actions likely have affected far more than just Canterlot's opinion of monsieur Dominic.
Now, probably off to ponyville I presume? In most fics when the human gets to decide what to do to a prisoner who has caused them pain, they just let them go, see I totally agree with the way you chose to do it instead, I would've done the same.
After a couple years of reading fics on this site, mostly HiEs, you have no idea how satisfying the first few paragraphs of this chapter were to me.
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Your name and the picture make me feel like you're a literal god of this world. Directing and dictating everything, which is true, but then you start whooping butt in the comments too! Glorious.
And, as for him being an ass and all twitchy, it'll take more than a couple months to get used to the land he's in being relatively peaceful. It WAS stated that he'd been alone for quite a while, and he had to kill all those that he loved. That'd do permanent damage that only a miracle could get even near gone, and the apocalypse had been going on for YEARS. Years of having to worry that staying alert, even when sleeping, would be the difference between seeing another day rather than getting a large chunk of himself ripped off before becoming a ghoul. Not only does he have those memories ingrained into him, but the "peaceful" land of Equestria has already accidentally almost killed him once, and almost killed him purposefully once. That, and the entire nation is breaking into factions that want him killed, imprisoned, banished to the moon, chunked in a zoo, or shoved into a forest to live with other 'monkeys'. It's not hard to see why he's such a dick.
If you consider this just, you must be thrilled by new modern methods of punishments ISIL has. Did you know that you can cut of only ONE HAND and still send a message!
Now i do know this might seem like a liberal nonsense but consider it! You could just take a lesser appendix from someone and it would not ruin them fully cut them off from something that many see as defining point of a critter.
How to torture someone, or at least how i would do it. Strap their arm to a table, and slowly pull back the skin. Then, pour something like lemon juic4e on it. Then make them watch you cut it off. Rinse, repeat.
So Celestia, because she's feeling guilty for her mistakes, lets the damaged, unstable man who was wronged decide on the punishment. Rather than, y'know, due process and all that. Also, she has allowed a system to exist where certain lineages are normally exempt from due process.
She also makes a public statement where she not only explains the facts of her errors, but also rather excessively berates herself-- which, while not entirely unwarranted on a personal level, will only serve to further undermine her rule in the aftermath of a full-scale riot in the capital city.
She really is not very good at this, is she?
Also, Dominic takes such pride in being American, while personally meting out cruel and unusual punishment. Seems like that flag is more important than, y'know, any of the ideals.
4341223 4935159 4248607 4247521 I'm going to go out on a limb here and assume that you're all Americans like myself and - I hate saying this now - Dominic. 7273310 Is right, for all the pride that Dominic seems to have for being an American, he doesn't seem to be very American. One of the tenants that are dear to our hearts is the Eighth Amendment of the Bill of Rights...
I think most any sane, rational person will be forced to admit that snapping Blueblood's horn off is certainly cruel - he has maimed him for life. For Dominic, this act is understandable and it is why victims are not allowed to sentence their offenders. However, for all of you who have not been wronged by Blueblood, who can look at this objectively, it is shameful that you say that Dominic was in the right. He was not. This punishment was cruel and barbaric in the extreme; it would be akin to amputating your arm without anesthesia for a crime.
Seems the discussions here were quite heated at the time. That being said, claiming his money and properties was insult enough. A magic blocking ring might've been the furthest needed punishment in addition.
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Dom is an American civilian, not the government
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Your point being? We are [supposed to be] a government of the people, ergo, we Americans should follow the ideals laid forth in our constitution.
Regardless, I think I made my thoughts clear on the punishment in the last paragraph of my response; him being a civilian has no bearing on the morality of his actions.
My my my, Dominic is unoriginal. Also, are we just going to pretend we somehow know that he's the last human alive or something?
Robot peen? ( ͡☉ ͜ʖ ͡☉)
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Is there exposed piping in your pants, or are you just happy to see me?
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The last human in equestria.