Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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This story no longer excites me and barely has my attention after you split Luna and Dominic. Really the only thing that's keeping me reading is my own stubbornness to finish this fix since I've come so far but I probably won't read the sequel
Damn man, you are a machine pumping out these chapters. Keep up the great work.
Wait, Johnny is a mod boss, and Dominic knows but won't do anything?
6833590 If you're asking about the differences between the one overseas vs the one in the U.S., then I believe one was originally an offshoot of the other. I'll let you figure out which.
p.s.- They might also be referencing Vito Corleone. You know, the Don from the Godfather.
6835459 ....why?
It's funny how I just mentioned this exact scenario in a previous comment.
Also, Svengallop getting a verbal smackdown from the Don=win.
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Johnny's a mob boss, but he's also sort of like the Pinkertons, which is why Dominic let's him operate.
6836700 Meh, I think the scenario is OK, although you're right, the breakup scene just felt... off, I guess, like it came out of nowhere, you know? Sure there was talk about choosing one over the other, but they had only just started to build that point up, and then BAM! they break up, which may seem even more jarring due to the contrast with the usual slow pacing.
...Plus the fact that they only seemed to be growing closer to one another before hand made it seem contradictory to the previously establish flow of events.
*Thumbs Up* good chapter!
The scene between Johnny and Jen just great! But even as Johnny these Snop of a stallion straightened calibration times great.
(now something personal: Thanks "The Boss" You've chosen the Königsgränzer march for Thestrals thank you.
My family and I have our roots in Prussia, my grandfather was a Prussian officer.
I hate what this NAZI's from the virtues and teachings of Prussia have done and what they have abused. It dishonors everything for what the kingdom and later the Republic of Prussia has stand.
That is why I thank you that you have this march used in your Story and how you've written about his origins. )
Furthermore, a lot of inspiration and new ideas for you!
Bye now! And Thanks again! *Salutes*
Heeheehee, awesome chapter!
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Sequel? I was wondering if there was going to be one, hehehe eue
Selfish part of me wanted to know for another reaason >.>
NIce work, nice work.
What was that all about? The stallion just wanted to get paid. What's wrong with that?
...Why haven't you written that story?
65 chapter, not a single clop chapter and in the end the relation died. You are making really hard not to throw my phone to the wall
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Uhhhh, there was one clop chapter, so unless you referring to a different couple...
OHHHHHH WE ARE GETTING CLOSER TO THE FINALE, AND SOON THE SEQUEL!
Thestral matching tune "removed for hate speech". Since the thestrals are similar to Germans, I can guess the one you linked was a Nazi tune, which is why it was removed. Made me laugh.
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If you're interested it was Der Konnigratzer Marsch, a Prussian song dating from the late 1800s.
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Thestrels start singing Erika