Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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It was totally up to snuff.
Oh man I can't wait to see her trial. Wonder what they'll do for an execution. Considering what happened to Blue just for starting a riot.... I can't wait!
Love when this story updates.
Quality is great as always so worry not sir/madam.
Looking forward to the next one.
~8chill
Ooohoohoohoo, wow, that was intense.
Those work camps tho.
FUCK DUE PROCESS! ... not that one pony I read about though, he's aight.
If this were the wasteland, that chicka would have been strung up on a cross //cackles evilly
AVE, TRUE TO CAESAR!
Nice job.
Ooh the ways she could possibly be executed.
Oh the gruesome, brutal, absolutely inhumane ways.
Oh now my mind is all warm and fuzzy, thinking about possibilities!
So many feels!!!!
Burn the witch! Burn the witch!
I vote for a slow process of disintegration that she can feel every bit of and takes one week before she dies of it
they should take her cutie mark and leave her in a cage somewhere, see how she likes it.
The trial should be an interesting chapter, though I wonder if they'll give her the death penalty. I'm assuming the princesses are going to be the ones to pass down the sentence, and only one of the four have seen the town first hand. I imagine a scenario where Celestia gives an unfavorable sentence, driving the wedge further between her and Dominic
I really like this story, but for us not from the US do you could tone down the MURICA a little bit?
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most likely.
Good job keep it up
You used season 5 material for this. My hype level was over 9000!
Alright, finally caught up. I love this story so far, one of the best fanfics I've read in awhile. Also love the patriotism you show in the story, love the way you put the U.S. in Equestria. Well, keep on writing! I'll be here reading.
Death by cutiemark removal, please.
Who needs Tv when you can read this?
5868282 why not that and cupcakes? (Not the removal through magic, but with a scalpel)
I'm just going to imagine they make this with pedals from Dream Bicycles.
Huh.. interesting alternate scenario to the cutiemunist town
Will our hero ever run out of ammo? The world may never know.
7689184 disccord used "bottomless clip" cheat code on him
ALTERNATE UNIVERSE !!!! I was going to ask...if this is Starlight Village, then how can Twilight be an Alicorn already ? Answered my own question...duh.
I guess this is the darker outcome to Starlight's actions, I mean in the show it might seem alright, but if something like this happened in real life, I can list a few major crimes - manipulation, kidnapping, attempted murder, assaulting a member of a foreign nation, and more.
I have mix feelings of what the outcome for Starlight will be; death? Will Twilight somehow intervene, or will Celestia will put herself in the middle, not fully comprehending the situation? So many things could happen
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Uhhhh, The Village - that's what Starlight's village is called - takes place after S4, during the beginning of S5. Twilight became an alicorn all the way back S3 finale, that and the story takes place between S4 and S5
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The question I'm wondering is where he gets fresh new ammunition? I mean, did he already tell or manage to get help to make more ammo, and if so, how come we weren't shown this, and if not... THEN WHERE IS THE FREAKIN AMMO COMING FROM, we are not doing video-game logic here people.
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Bruh he got that max ammo drop from zombies
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Or he is related to the doom marine
Having now reread this story for the third time and now rereading this chapter, I'm seeing a more clearer sign that it would been impossible to redeem Starlight, both now and prior to her appearance in the story, mostly because it is implied that her removal of ponies cutie-marks have been going on for years - resulting in the at first unintentional deaths, to intentional murders of many lives.
It could been possible for her to plea for insanity, but the one issue I see with this is the fact she willingly knew what would happen to a thestral by leaving them under direct sunlight longer than an hour. The closest state that Starlight was under would have to be, consciously insane, her mind-state wasn't in the right place, but she could clearly think enough that she knew purposely what her actions would do... the only sad part about all this she did these actions for a misled reasons... my only problem I have with the later on point in this story is that Sunburst is never mentioned if he even exists in this series (I've only read halfway through the second story so I have no idea what other characters from the show are introduced or not).
Besides that, Starlight is one of the few characters from the show I wished stayed longer in this story series...
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Yeah, one of my big regrets looking back is making Starlight's magic so potent/deadly, I think I could've used her a lot better here. As for the other stories in the series, I'd say the second one's probably the best of the sequels. Actually there's a lot of stuff I'd do differently now if I ever went back to redo the series, which I don't really have plans to do to be honest. Not trying to sell myself short, but with this series I was just kind of throwing things at the wall to see what worked and what didn't. My more recent stuff's a lot less... Messy. I kinda worry it's lost something in that respect, but it's not like I could just keep doing stuff the same for ever. I'm glad you still enjoy reading my early stuff! It's always good to see a comment from you!