Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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*Sees you mention the White Death*
Nice little nod to Simo.
This was good. I like it that the changeling that he saved decided to defect to the American side of the battle. Also are there other changeling hives? Because if there are and if you want to, you can use my changeling hive.
Loving this story can't wait for the next update!!!
Love the chapter! The way you write the fight scenes is awesome! Keep up the great work!
Amazing chapter! By the way, Merry Christmas to all!!
Oh mah gosh, he literally 'bit the bullet', I am in tears of laughter!
6762389 Suomi mainittu, torilla tavataan!
6763308 you realize that's where the expression was thought to originate, combat medics having soldiers bite a bullet to cope with pain, right?
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Nope! But now i know!!!!!!1one!
6772441 dear god, gir + discord, were doomed.
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Nyeeheheheheh!!! You haven't even heard my doom song yet!
6773470 lets sing the doom song, doom doomy doom... DOOM!
Zim: gir please shut up
Gir: no, and is that a moose?
Zim: NO not the moose, anything but the moose
Looks like Dominic... bit the bullet on that one
HAHA! PUNS! *slaps thigh*
NIce job!
6772284 your griffon, my good sir, looks very interesting. Good job.
This sounds like the exact opposite of a good idea.
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He ain’t gonna bite his tongue at least
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I’m more curious where he got the 9mm bullet. His revolver is a .357 and then the shotgun... how much plot ammo does he have anyway?
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At the time of writing this I was a lot less knowledgeable about handguns, I was at the local range with a family friend whom had a revolver, and he told me that it was possible to change the caliber it fired between .38, .357, and 9mm. I was not smart enough to look into it beyond that, and by the time a realized that likely wasn't accurate, it was a bit late to go back and retcon what was already down.
As for the plot ammo, yeah, that's something I definitely would change if I ever go back and rework this series. Again, I vastly overestimated the carrying capacity of the average backpack.
I appreciate the comment, I'm actually working on another story right now and it reminded me to go back and check how much ammunition I gave to the characters. Sure enough, I miscounted. So... Thanks for helping me catch that!
I really dislike that they pull this shit up without any consequences but Dominic almost died because he publicly disliked Celestia, I think this is stupid. I was on the edge when you brought tmdoes two but this is just too much. They attacked, beat, mutilate and shot but they get a happy ending??? That’s bullshit and your making Luna an Celestia looked like idiots
I'm surprised about the fact that the supremacist changelings still wanted to fight, I only assume because most of them are supremacists or the new commanding officer made the decision to continue the assault than rethink something else