Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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Kind of short and not a lot of progression in the story.
But I suppose that he doesn't really want to do anything right now, the day prior was tough on him.
3733091 I suppose that's true.
Hopefully they can help him remember wat he had before the virus and recover.
The thing I like the most about this story is the realism. He wouldn't just be fine after zombies and it makes sense that they have him under watch in the castle and not left alone or something in the town. This story keeps it real unlike most stories.
3735882 He also seems just the wee bit quick to react.....Which actually makes a bit of sense
3743768 Yes well when you spend 3 years under the constant threat on having ur throat ripped out if you let ur guard for even a second u would probably tend to be a bit quick to react
And he never got his coffee...
3735882 the reactions in the other stories are "oh his got PTSD! Send him to ponyville and demand favours that will screw him/make him snap at some point.
In addition to my last comment here is an example,
It should be, 'Nay. Twilight Sparkle wished to speak with thee,'
Alright, how does Luna know who the Soviets or Nazis were? And was that in this chapter, or the last? All these seem to be blending together!
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she doesn't know, although she has a ... referance?.... to how they would act based on what celestia did.
The last paragraph should have been more explanatory, telling him that Twilights' freinds now know of his background.