Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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As an re-enactor, I NEVER object to people learning the ways of old.
Overall I'd say you have little to worry about, some decent charector development and a subtle plot progression.
The hayflick limit should fuck over Dominic even if he gets a healing factor.
Even if his aging is slowed or halted, the lack of proper cell division will end his life in one of two ways.
1. Zero immune system left to protect from the millions of germs he is exposed to daily due to lack of white blood cells.
2. Rampant and widespread cancer due to improper cell division from lack of telomeres.
I give him to 160 years of age with magic healing factor aiding him.
Don't trust Discords lies, he's a chaos god, not a biologist.
Chapter seemed great as usual. Get out from under that desk, I have a cookie for ya.
Cool chapter! Can we see the other changeling hive please?
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I'll come out after I post the next chapter, if you folks haven't come after me with torches and pitchforks...
6827932 There you go, bringing real world physics and biology into it. We're talking a world where magic is a thing, as well as Immortality.
Good chapter and is like to say that I hope that it's true feelings that Luna has for Dominic they deserve each other and I'm not opposed to Maria joining them for a small herd
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I'll agree with that
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Technically not immortality, since, ya know, bullet to the chest = dead.
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Uh...
*continues to hide under his desk*
6828091 We wouldn't do that.....we would send in Freddy.......
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He's an animatronic though, so... This should do the job.
6828252 I'd worry about Technicals' and militias. Replace torches and pitchforks with hunting rifles and pistols. Unless your California.
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Or New Jersey...
6828355 Or Texas
6828477 I thought Texas had guns? We can't use a PUBLIC SHOOTING RANGE AT BASS PRO SHOP in LOS VEGAS. WITH CA ID, NO ONE WILL. God bless Arizona. They don't have to worry about mini-bears (racoons and other annoying mammals.)
Lunas love is just motherly? FUUUUU-
6828121 i know of 2 seacreatures that could live forever here on earth. Unlike us who literally have a time-till-death clock in our biological makeup.
6829304 Yes, but Earth doesn't have 2 pobny princesses that move the Sun Moon and stars. My poiny remains that the laws of physics and other scientific constants don't necessarily apply on Equestria
Awesome awesome chapter, swords! Swords are always fun~ :D
hehehehehe~
MIZU IS BEST!
Nicely done.
Awesome awesome chapter, swords! Swords are always fun~ :D
hehehehehe~
MIZU IS BEST!
Nicely done.
"root out any remaining traitors"
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Here's the working vid for you.
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6828643 well, Texas has no laws against fully automatic weapons here, you can own a RPK or a AK47 with a drum mag and a underbarrel grenade launcher and it's perfectly legal to get some grenades for it.
7566831 federal law still requires permits for the automatic weapons if im not mistaken
SSSOOOO.....Discord did bring Jen, and John to Equestria.
This chapter literally answer all the important questions:
How did Johnny and Jen get to Equestria?
Why is Dominic smoking when he should know how bad it can effect him in the future?
How the the three have such clear clarity with their memories, even though these events have been years? I mean surviving in apocalyptic world, you expect these kind of things not come up as often as you imagine.
And importantly, how all three managed to survive near-impossible scenarios with only some scratches?
First off, while I was semi-correct that Discord wasn't involved, him randomly pulling random humans - Jen and John - means he is going to play a major role about how Dominic is getting back to Earth.
Secondly, I assume because of Equestria's innate magic, it's affecting Dom, Jen, and John, meaning they won't get drunk easily, drugs and cigars won't affect their body as badly anymore, and their life-expectancy are extended, so their not immortal but they'll probably be around longer, as well as the rest of humanity.
And finally, because of this strange abnormality that's going to have an effect on the entire human race, memories won't be a problem for anyone anymore, probably in a few years, humans who are in Equestria are affected by anything magical in nature, will have changes come to them other than extended life, better healing rate, but also possibly special abilities and using magic. We already seen each of the three using magic before - John seems to slow down time or have super reflexes, Dom is either strength or endurance, while I'm not certain about Jen yet.
Now the only question I want to know is, who else on Earth is still alive? I mean, we don't know if all the countries and big juggernaunts - China, Russia, Germany, England and so on - are gone, for all we know the infection has only spread to certain areas like most of North America.
I'm nearing the end of this story, and I can't wait when the perspective moves mostly to Earth next.
Ooooohhhhh fuck he's not gonna like that, when he discovers that he's pretty much ageless just like the princesses due to the healing factor he's gonna be pissed.