Dominic is the last living human within 200 miles of his hometown of Evergreen Colorado. On a trip to find supplies he finds himself ensnared by some unknown force and ripped from his world. Where is he now? What will he do? Only time will tell.
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Ha. Looks like the common folk are turning on the douchey snobs.
About damn time
Viva La Revolucion!!
(against the nobles, not the princesses.)
It's Winter where I am and it's goddamn cold! Very nice chapter! I hope to see the royal guards try and claim it was them but they get shot down by the princess or the townsponies!
Read the whole story before and loving it bro. Keep it up.
How's my summer? Auctions, auctions, everywhere. I go to auctions with my dad 3 times a week. If i do say so we make a pretty good team, him being a old man with a lot of knowledge of tools and me being a business student we make at least $200 dollars profit each auction.
On the point of the 4th of July, make it canon. I do so enjoy confusing the ponies with are random human traditions.
So... will of the people vs. will of those in power.
Great writing and great story! I can't wait to see what comes next.
Lastly, that for asking about our summer, I will be traversing the border to visit my grandfather. Hopefully we will get there before July 4th, the date where the entire family meets (as opposed to Thanksgiving). I guess that all depends on flight prices...
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Aw, well you have my sympathy! I live in Colorado where it's possible to get snow from September till May, I hope you stay warm and cozy.
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Those are some pretty valuable skills my friend, it's good to see the entrepreneurial spirit is still alive and kicking! Good luck in your endeavors!
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Family is a very important thing, I hope you make it in time. Depending on which border you're going to be traversing, I hope that the weather isn't A) Blisteringly Cold or B) Insanely 'Holy Shit I'm gonna die' Hot. Good hunting in finding flights, and may luck be with you in your quest!
I really like talking to you people.
No one shouted " Off with her head!" ? . Hmmm, pity.
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I figured pitchforks and torches were enough, guess I was wrong.
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A general call for pitchforks and torches seems in line with Equestria’s oft‐ridiculous herd mentality (primarily because I can see the populace using them to merely run her out of town) whereas their demanding the Duchess face the guillotine would seem excessive and out of character.
Nice...good damn work!!
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Karma's a bitch.
4620240 why thank you, good sir. It hell of a lot fun, with about zero down sides. My only gripe would be my dads bad habit of buying appliances, that weigh 100- 200 pounds. *sigh* Well at least I can pick up those bloody things by myself, good exercise.
Thank you for this greate chapter ! But that ending ... PERFECT !!!
Keep up the good work and good luck !
Looking forward the the next chapter as I always do and to your question...well...my summer could honestly be a bit better. Had a incident where my mother fell, got a bad gash in her head, fractured several parts of her body and got a bad infection. She had to be in the hospital for nearly a month and is now in physical rehab because she was already weak before that and got even worse. Will probably be in there for several more weeks and then is going to rehab for her addiction to alcohol too. So like I said...could be better...
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I hope everything works out for you in the end, I'll say a prayer for you.
Viva la Revolucion!!
Nice that Dominic has some positive backing now. Curious to see how that develops.
Also nice reveal with Luna about her burgeoning feelings.
Eagerly awaiting future updates!
Good chapter can't wait for the next one.
Keep up the good work.
And for your question my summer is going well visiting family in Cali I'm really starting to miss them weather back in Colorado though.
Fun to see the arrogant to get knock down a few pegs. And it seems dear Luna is in love. Why does it remind me of the song from hercules? The one where Meg deny her love?
Time for those in power to realize their power is only afforded to them by virtue of the people under them, it seems. Or at least one of them. Baby steps.
Luna, yes do it.
Grab the pitchforks
OH THANK GOD. I thought the love interest was going to be Twilek Sparklebutt for a while....
Nice to see the nobles brought down a few...hundred pegs
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Just it turns out he says something like "it wouldn't work." Or something and it is shifted to sparkle.
Interesting choice for a backup hideout... Now how long until the CMC find him?
THAT'S What I wanted to see, THIS Is the chapter I've been WAITING for. And not the whole thing, but the last quarter of it! For a pony, even ONE to see he wasn't some evil monster hell bent on destroying them all, and for other's to realize it. And even better, for a Noble to be put in their place without being beat half to death. Don't get me wrong, I loved what happened to Blueblood, but I think the more interesting, more powerful impacts of justice are when many stand up to one to speak out against the one's abuse of power. THIS here... just earned you a fave and thumb sir.
DOWN WHIT THE NOBLES HURRAY FOR FREEDOM OF SPEECH
Even though he did not mean to, dominic has spread democracy. + 3000 xp
7017395 level up! Hold Y/∆ to open the perk menu in your pip-buck/pip-boy and select the new available perks.
The time scale of events in this story is getting really confusing. There's all kinds of time that's unaccounted for. So far, we've seen... what, five or six actual days that had events in them? When so much time is skipped, at least a paragraph or so of commentary on what happened is helpful.
That contributes to the excessively fast pace of the character interactions. As far as we can tell from reading it, Luna fell in love with Dominic in the course of a few days' worth of total interaction, and Twilight became close friends with him even sooner. If anything significant happened in the rest of those months, we don't really know.
It winds up feeling like an old-school video game style "CHARACTER has joined your party!"
(Yes, I'm aware, you're probably not going to make edits to this story. Just something to keep in mind in the future.)
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Fucking love that game.
Murica bringing you freedom and democracy since 1776
The romance part is a... questionable choice, but I can't see how the plot would progress without it. I don't say this enough, but I really am enjoying this!
say hello to president Tiger Lilly.
(Man walks into a donut shop with a banana in his hand) “EVERYBODY ON THE GROUND!!! I’m two fries short of a happy meal and I haven’t had my coffee yet!! Get me a donut and nobody gets hurt!!!!”
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Sir, you should be at the checkpoint!
I thought Castle November, should have been their first choice.
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Ah sheeeeet
Some one just got thir class 8 dwelling privileges revoked