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10/10 for proper gun safety.

I'm glad someone noticed!

Side note, your method of Hal being transported is eerily similar to some daydreams I've had during long drives, I reread that part in disbelief after I saw it!

Heh, I've done a lot of my thinking about how the story would go on long drives of my own. Which of course sometimes leads to, "well, what if this happened right now, what would I do?"

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No problem, It's been a solid read so far, and am looking forward to seeing what happens. 10/10 for proper gun safety.

Side note, your method of Hal being transported is eerily similar to some daydreams I've had during long drives, I reread that part in disbelief after I saw it!

Thanks for the favorite on The Right Man in the Wrong Place

I hope you continue to enjoy it as I release more chapters.

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No problem, I'm excited to see where you take it from here.

Hi!

Thank you for the favorite on the story! I'm glad the story has gotten your attention so far .