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At Rarity and Fluttershys behest Twilight agrees to swap their talents for a day, the plan goes awry when Twilight accidentally ends up switching their minds between their bodies. The effect, fortunately not permanent, allows both ponies to proceed with their original plans unfazed. Rarity however, gets quickly carried away with her newfound self...
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Oh, Oh no. I can just see this playing out in my head, the whole "Rarity 'helping' Fluttershy's love life". Oh. No.
Now I need to find out.
Appleblossom? Really?
Her name is Applebloom, not Appleblossom......
Pretty good story though.
This is a great start to a story! Your treatment for Rarity-as-Fluttershy is touching: both spot-on for Rarity, and deeply sympathetic to both characters' weaknesses.
I look forward to the rest of the story!
Very enjoyable to read!
This was finished elsewhere, wasn't it? Swear I remember reading and enjoying it to its completion...
its...nice
This looks like it could be fun. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
*LAUGH*
You've done one thing that most characterizes MLP:FIM.
You've found a character's weakness... and you've directly zoomed in on it.
I really appreciate the thought of Rainbow Dash running off to Rarity's house for advice... and a tired Fluttershy having to give Rainbow a makeover.
Bravo!
Aside from possibly needing to go through spellcheck again, this is great. Keep it coming.
omg another rainbow lesbian story...
This is not going to end well
All i have to say is i think
is behind EVERYTHING XD
oh god
Rarity trying to help Fluttershy's love life?
When Fluttershy gets back into her own body, she'll be PISSED
This is delightful. There's just one minor thing that struck me as being completely out of place. I'm fairly certain ponies don't eat seafood and absolutely certain Fluttershy doesn't eat seafood.
is this the end :(
An enjoyable ending to the story. Thank you!
Very touching
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Naw, she'll just faint like a goat as usual.
There was only one part of this story that I don't like. The end, because it means there's nothing more to read of this. 12/5, my friend.
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the girl yelled at a dragon and snapped a bears neck. I'd say Flutterrage is pretty close to canon
Don't you just love these kind of stories? They practically write themselves. What could possibly be more entertaining than swapping out minds? Sure, it's been done before to death, but that doesn't make it any less fun.
The romance part was of course was a bit trite. However, it still managed to work for 2 reasons: 1) It was a fresh couple. I can't say I've ever read a FlutterWhooves story before. And 2) the progression was done quite well.
Part of me wished you had established the conflict a bit earlier in the story. It wasn't until towards the end of the first chapter that I started to see the problems with Fluttershy and Rarity that were resolved at the end of the story. That's not the say it wasn't solidly plotted. I just wish those problems demonstrated themselves a little earlier in the story, so we have an idea of where things are going. Perhaps you could have a scene just prior to Twilight's spell, showing Fluttershy and Rarity going about a typical day, just as some nice setup. You can be subtle about it. Just enough to drop some hints.
There's also some extremely small stuff I noticed as well. Really nothing more than nitpicking. Spelling and grammar were fine, for the most part. It was mostly the "delivery" in some places that felt a little confusing sometimes. I had a go back a time or two and ask myself what was happening. If you'd like examples, I'd be glad to comb through it again and show you some of the places I think could be touched up. Again, just nitpicking.
The one other thing was the ending. It felt a bit like a cobbled-together epilogue, rather than an official "ending". I'd like to see the characters perform some satisfying actions at the end that "infer" what you summarize at the end, rather than simply hitting us over the head with it. Again, a small thing. It would just be a shame to have such an entertaining and well-written story end with little more than a simple list of everything that changed.
So, again, very entertaining. I could honestly read stuff like this all day if I had the time. Keep it up!
Great story! Loved it and hope to read more from you.
That was actually a Nice story, thank you!
I needed that after some of the nasty texts I have come across lately.
Damn.
Lol.
Damn.
Great fic... Really great... But needs to be much longer... I don't want this one to end lol
this..... this is not going to end well
did i mention this wasn't going to end well ? i stand corrected.... this is probably going to end horrendously
This story has a daaaawwwwwing capacity of 7.
that's on a scale of 1 through 5, so you know it's good. 
Love the story and I hate that A) I kept ignoring it and having it just sit in my tracked list and B) it's over
Fluttershy will end up with The Doctor, and Rarity will end up with Rainbow Dash.
“Fluttershy I didn’t know you also had a pension for the romantic.”
Penchant. Getting paid a pension for romance would just be silly ;)
"Please let Dash be joking me."
Missing 'with'. or possibly 'joking' should be 'kidding'.
Never sen FluttershyxDoctor Whooves before. Should be good.
Awesome story!
Here. Have a Rarity of approval.
Make that two.
Good story and enjoyed the originality, its official, 5/5 chefs liked this story
uh... ponies don't eat fish
really entertaining story.. had some great laughs and wasn't quite what i expected.. 8/10 i would say
This was a great story. I really like Dash's confession to Twilight and her little kiss goodbye after it. I really enjoyed getting to read this. I look forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great writing!
While I was reading this, I had the Autarch of Troll playing in another tab.
Poor RD.
7/10
1058344 They also don't come in a variety of pastel colors with pictures on their butts an the occasional horn or wings. Just go with it
Awesome
Sweet
Best story evah
Awesome
Nice story. Even though things turned out well, Rarity was kind of a... well...
I guess this proves why they have long necks, though. It's so they can more efficiently stick their noses in other ponies' business.
Damn son, 10/10
Good story, however, I can't help but dislike the ending.
Mostly because of this:
I still think Rarity deserves more repercussions for her actions. She's learned absolutely nothing and shouldn't have done this to Fluttershy in the first place. It just ruins the ending for me.
This was really cute and not bad for a first story. Doctor Whooves and Fluttershy would make a great couple.
Rarity needs to calm down she's more excited than that lego when he had permission to build a space ship!
Cute ending