Edit: Start at 1:07. Fits the promise breaking Will review after reading.

EDIT 2: In order to avoid cluttering the comments, I'll just edit this post.
This is incredibly well done, one of the best two-shot stories I have ever read, especially if you are going to write a sequel. Not writing one after that ending will not be allowed, so get cracking...Now. Yes, now stop reading this comment as it is keeping you from writing that sequel.

So stop reading.

No, really, stop it.

Why are you still reading this? Stop! Write the s sequel already!

Stop reading this pointless comment. Hurry up and write the sequel!

Absolutely amazing. That's all I know to tell you.

Ysyesyesyes

Se-fukin-quel

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I hereby demand more.

Beautiful.
We need more.

Very nice.

BUCK YES! it was beautiful!

"Nothing is set in stone Alex...

Annnnnnnnnnnd there's the title!

absolutely awesome I it such a great ending to a amazing story

that was adorable, and allows one to continue with an alternate universe setting! i approve greatly

I have found gold among pyrite. I am satisfied yet want more at the same time. I feel a little greedy now and cant wait for the future. This. Was. Amazing.

Brilliant, original, creative, emotional, well-finished, comprehensive, decisive, inspiring, bold, lovable. One word for each of the 10 stars you have recieved. Well done!

Please do a sequel!

bravo bravo fucking bravo that was beautiful two things:
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We demand more! That ending promises more! GIVE US MORE!!!!!!
No, really, in all honesty this is a fantastic Fic that deserves its place in the top stories box. Why? Because it's fan-fucking-tastic! I, personally, would love to see what happens with the timeline and what will happen between Alex and Cadence in the future. Please, I implore you, continue this goldmine of awesome!

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"Nothing is set in stone Alex...

Annnnnnnnnnnd there's the title!

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Another entertaining and compelling story, whether it stays a one shot or you continue the story later I'll be happy

*slow clap* bravo bravo!

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Now, i await for the sequel...

I only have this to say...
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Dude, thank you so much for making the story conclude with them getting together. I know it would probably be right in some cases to keep the timeline secure, but I know I'm not the only one who really wanted Alex and Cadence to finally confess their feelings.

And the end... for now, huh? I await to see your expansion on this amazing tale. Keep up the good work.

I loved it.

I see myself as insane, maybe even clinically so. But anyone who downvotes this story is obviously more so than me. And all i have to say to those people is, i pity your mental illness.

"Nothing is set in stone

Just managed to squeeze that in there didn'tcha?

So aside from that here is kinda a short version of a long set of words dictating what i did and did not like and that shit

The start of an adventure that I would never ever forget.
And maybe one day...I'll tell you.
The End...For Now.

THE MOARS ARE YOURS NOW FEED US TEH JUICY BITS!!!!!!
Also, one day? well i'd like to see you tell that story in one day

My comment is simple; more.

You've got an entire universe to play around in, because of this divergence point.

Alternate episode plotlines, new plotlines due to the changes, etc.

Go for it.

Loved it. Great ending, man.

YOU ARE A GOD. I WORSHIP YOU. I WANT MORE!

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and my fav

Brilliant! If you do make a sequel, be ABSOLUTELY sure to do chapters involving the wedding, the trip to the CE, as well as Sombra. Also, going by your other stories, she was able to use magic while touching him because they had sex. MOAR!!! I demand a sequel to this before the Luna story in the other universe.

Sequel plz.

2752855 that gif sums up my whole reaction to this chapter.

i cant wait for more! once you get the chance of writing! xP wooo

I will cry of happiness if there is a sequel to this...

that.....that was glorious. and i see so much more that could come from this.....now i cant decide what i want to read more, Immortal Lovers or this. o well, ill just stick to my personal continuation for now

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What do you think team fortress?
*All clapping*
Medic: Erstaunlich!
Scout: Un-freakin-touchable!
Soldier: That was amazing!
Heavy: I am very happy!
Spy: Excellent!
Sniper: Good job mate!
Engineer: Yooooeeehhhh!!!
Demo man: I'll drink to that!
Pyro: Mmmm hmmmm mmmm!!!

PLS MAKE MOAR!!

Words are your specialty you should never give up on them even if you stop doing pony fics. Cause this, this is a master piece.

2752890 now you must tell me of this NTR sir /maam.

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and now I'm going to be waiting for whatever possible sequel will come thanks to that ending

At the beginning of this, listening to the Song Of Healing
(4 minutes later, when things get hot)
... *switches to his Marvin Gaye playlist*

An amazing story, if I do say so myself. You didn't make it mindless sex, and you didn't quite make it a cliche romance either. I did notice a few mistakes, like Cadence saying she's a different race rather than a different species, but mistakes are to be expected. I would say this is easily in my top 5, which is a bit odd considering Cadence isn't necessarily my first choice when it comes to clopfics; i'll attribute it to your superb writing 5/5 Applejacks, a thumbs up, and a favorite.

What happened to the part of Alex's mind that didn't want to change the future when he heard this quote:

...but I won't because I don't and won't ever feel anything other than friendship towards him."

I love Cadance's character development in this story it's so delightfully original and makes me want to see more of her personality in the show. Also, is it ironic that this chapter was posted on the same day when the Canterlot Wedding episode was repeated?

aw man, I really wanted now what the candy was that tasted like cadance also im surprised there were no wingboners

also, this is the first think that came to mind as i was reading this. just replace Shining with Alex

Celestia bursts in "GOOD NEWS! I found a way back to..... Oh, never mind."

I played this while reading this awesome story.

Definitely one of the best stories I've ever read. I need to check out your other stories, if you have any more.