You add me at Cadance x human
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not many Cadance x Human stories... i'm interested

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You have caught my attention my good sir.

The first chapter was awesome, can't wait for the next.

- T

Not bad. Really enjoyed it so far. Also now I got three Ideas you should do. Have an AU version where Alex fucks Celestia then another one where he fucks Luna/Nightmare Moon your choice and finally another one where he fucks a older version of Twilight. Be it before episode one or when she becomes a princess. But good job sir.

PLEASE FINISH!!!!!

I jinx that this will be in the feature box!

What if I ask really nicely.

FINISH THE STORY!

Will this be set in the same universe as your other human in equestria stories?

2728332 Oh god the nightmares! Be gone foul heathen!

Great story, can't say I've seen any Cadance/human ships before.

Finally, a GOOD Cadance x Human fic!

I normally don't do this, but since you asked so nicely.

*clears throat*
*inhales slowly*
MORE! GIMMIE MORE STORY! I WANT IT! I NEED IT! CAN'T STOP WITH THAT ENDING, THAT'S TOO CRUEL!
So if you wouldn't mind continuing, that'd be great.

YOU HAD BETTER FINISH OR I WILL FINISH IT FOR YOU!!!!

WAS THAT LOUD ENOUGH?!?!?!?!

IT!

well you did say to scream "it". #literaltakeonlife

Conclusion.... like NOW!!!
i won't be disappointed if you make this an actual story. continue the storyline, and hell make it so alex has some 'gut feelings' as to Cadences' wedding, discord being freed, and even as far as King Sombra. You have a good baseline of a story here, i'd hate for it to just stay as a one-shot because with just this chapter, it has quite a bit of potential.

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I AGREE

"Who knew bowties were so cool."

On a more serious note, MOAR FOR THE LOVE OF CELESTIA (or in this case Cadance ) MOAR! this is friggin great! Wish there was more Cadance x Human like this

2728301 Though I am not a big Cadance fan, that picture...dayum.

I agree with 2728705 . This needs to be a full story.

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I second that...or third, whatever

cause bow ties

THIS STORY IS

PLEASE FINISH.

Moar please

Holly guacamole dude! you're really good at writing these kind of histories, I can't literally wait for the next, please, bring to us more of your amazing story

well written. Epic cliffhanger. Not bad please continue good sir.

Screw the future!Not much would change anyways!
*Eyes go bloodshot*
Let Alex have CADENCE, you selfish author!
Sorry(actually I'm not) but you said to scream(like a banshee I did).
Alex and Cadence must be together (I'm a sap for romance).
Also bowties are cool(but I prefer neck-ties)

*scrolling around on fimfiction.* What is this? a human X Cadence story? sounds good. *one read later* WHY THE FUCK IS THIS NOT DONE YET!

Heh in all seriousness, THIS IDEA KICKS ASS! I usually don't much like Cadence since she is the girliest of them all, but the way you wrote her...DAAAAAMN, call me interested.

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I fourth(?) that! I WILL SCREAM FOR THIS TO BE A WHOLE STORY IN THE COMMENTS AS I WAS INSTRUCTED!!!

This is probably one of the best stories I've read in a long time. Kudos to you, good sir. I hope to see more of this in the future, should you decide to continue it further.

please, please, Please, PLEASE, PLEASE...

may I have some more?

Is it possible for you to write a story that I don't love?!? I THINK NOT!!!

Um... Wow. I did NOT expect that...

Ok right fucking the story needs a ending but a good bulid up to it this is just the begining

Yes please I will like to see the conclusion, and I want to see what Celestia will tell him. She is the one in the other side of the room right?

And men Alex really took one for the team, the doctor must be very proud of him right about know. You can do it Alex, you only have to bit the bullet just a little bit more

DAT CLIFFHANGER. OH GOD WHY?
I was listening to this music while reading.

PERFECT. JUST PERFECT.

GET YOUR CLIT TICKLERS OFF YOUR DICK AND WRITE ME SOME PONY SMUT, CUNTFLAP!
Please?

Finnish it!!!

if i dont get a conclusion i will make sure an army of changelings find you, oh they will find you!

He manned the fuck up and bit the bullet. FUCKING FINISH THIS STORY! I just want to see if Shining beats Alexanders ass for hurting Cadence.

I WANT A CONCLUSION or else the stank eye from deadpool[img]judging you[/img]

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MAKE THIS A REAL STORY! FOR THE LOVE OF FAUST/ALLAH/GOD/POWERS THAT BE MAKE THIS A STORY

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Nope :)

2729322 aw. FUCK YOU IN THE EYE!

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I gladly take that fuck

So...I take it some of you want me to continue this, whilst others want an ACTUAL STORY?!?!

Well fuck...if I wasn't busy enough already.

We shall see

Here is the dough: Great story and all that, um a little rushed but that's my opinion i love that Alexander know what will happend in the future and he kinda decided that he will not ruin it.
here is the chocolate chips: the prom and the dance the confession was too early and you broke Cadence heart a little harsh and made her ''sick'' in the first chapter and kinda blew it there so yeah.
that's the cookie

2729337Left or right socket.

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In the first chapter...you are aware that this is a one-shot right?

With a possible conclusion if I'm feeling happy enough

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Let's not be picky, BOTH!