I love to write and im a huge fan of my little pony friendship is magic.
One day a mysterious dragon comes to town and tells Spike some interesting facts about his past before becoming Twilight's assistant but does she have ulterior motives . Link to sequel- http://www.fimfiction.net/story/124356/spikes-sister-2
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Where is the Spike tag?
2667917 Thank you i must have missed it when I was tagging
Oh boy this can't end well.
2668050 I guess you will find out if you keep reading it. Its going to be pretty interesting.
2668103 I will. Trust me.
Seems just a little rushed, try spacing things out.
I thought it was funny when Sarah just walks up to Spike and goes 'i'm your long lost sister'.
2668111 well im still new to writing at times and im glad that you had a good laugh
2668108 yay then ill post the next chapter when i have time
2668119 It wasn't an insult type laugh, more a 'awkward situation incoming' type laugh.
I don't like the sound of this, something terrible is brewing. Oh, poor Spike.
"before becoming Twilight's assistance but does she have alternative motives. "
Should be
"before becoming Twilight's assistant, but does she have ulterior motives?"
Maybe get an editor and not rely so much on Spell Check?
Sombra?
I feel so bad for Spike to know that Sarah is hiding a dark secret from him. Also, I am afraid to see who her master is.
I think it's Sombra.
2672683 well next chapter will show more about Sarah's master. I hope I dont scare you that much.
2672834 Oh, no, I like stuff like this, but it just scares me that I have a sinking feeling that something bad is going to happen with Spike.
*cough* .... *cough*
Excuse meh, my good sir but, I do believe I made a story similar to this one.
Oh, and I made it before you, my good sir or madame.
But I feel you did a much better job on this than I ever could, and for that, I am truly jelly.
2672959 Oh you did....I had no clue.
I dont really read much of fanfiction so I dont copy. I am completely sorry if I did, I hope you can forgive me 
I am also glad if you believe that I did well. 
I am still new to writing
2673060 I know that you are new to this and I think you did very well
I shall not resent you for this, seeing as you had no idea I had made a similar story
I wish you good luck on your way to being an awesome writer!
2673265 Alright then Thank you
Oh, no. Now I feel awful for Sarah, I feel like a mean meanie pants for thinking that she was willing to work for Sombra.
Oh, I have a terrible feeling of what Sombra is going to do with the CMC. Leave them alone Sombra, they are just little kids/fillies! 
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its ok it was all apart of my plan for the beginning. I guess you will just have to wait and see for what sombra might do to the cmc
It kinda needs some genre tags.
2684847 alright I added somes
Dumb question but ...
Dragons nest in trees? (I am trying but I can not imagine wind blowing an egg out of a cave or off a mountain ...)
Spike-Mom must have been tiny for a dragon ...though this does give hope for Spike growing wings... someday ...
If it is just the story that Master came up with then it has some ... holes ...
Very simple, in one bad form. You must re-writer it eventually: more descritions are necessary, like more feelings and asks for ach character.
2706217 Im still new to writing ok.
I do my best and thats all that matters to me 
A Sister?!
Giggles.
2747260 yes a sister, the story came to me one day. I hope take a few minutes and read the chapters I have written so far, if you have the time. So far I think people like it.
I'll read it soon, sorry I get busy. I was giggling cause my main story is about Spike's Brother (kind of it is in the title at least). 2747270
2747283 lol that is funny
Oh, I can't wait to find out Sarah's true origins and who hatched her maybe. Also, I hope Sombra haven't done to the CMC what I think he has done and brainwash them.
2747306 I guess you will find out. I also like the idea of brain washing
I did not think of that. That gives me an idea 
Oh, gosh. Sombra gave Sarah life, and now he has her life in his hands with her heart. I feel so bad for her, because the Mane Six and Spike is going to be so mad at her for what is about to happen.
2752622 Yep. just wait for what will happen next.
2752752 Oh, I can't wait. Getting suspenseful.
2752813 Then im glad you cant wait. I always know that your reading it cause you always comment.
2753115
Well, thank you for the shout out. Oh, no, I feel terribly bad now for what is fixing to happen. I really feel bad for Sarah at this point, because she has been nothing but a pawn in the sick demented Sombra's plans. Now, the Mane Six and Spike are going to be so mad at her.
I can't wait for the next chapter though.
Wow this is pretty good for your first fanfic. I can't wait to see what happens next!!! What does Sombra plan on doing to the main six?! I've never been this excited over a fanfic in a long time. Thank you for this amazing story, and hey, if its not much trouble, can u take a look at my fanfics. If you want to anyway. Keh heh heh heh heh.
2763346 This isnt my first. I have others but this is my first one that everyone likes.
2763246 just wait and see what will happen Remember Sombra still has the CMC somewhere
2765372 yes he does. Oh, no. That means Sarah will really feel the wrath of Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash.
2765367 Well I feel like an idiot now ... xD, but still, pretty good story you got here
2765611 Thank you Im just glad that everyone is liking it.
It makes me happy
2765475 Yes possibly just wait and see
2772689 there will be more
YES
Oh, no. Now the Mane Six and Spike, Cadence, and Shining Armor despise Sarah. Oh, I feel bad for Spike to know that it was all a lie, and especially I feel sorry for Sarah.