Jack Sladen, a 19 year old boy knows exactly what it means to suffer and live a miserable life. He has a dark childhood and he learned to live on the streets. Only the show called My little pony keeps his last bits of sanity together, but what would you do if a stranger offered you to make your dreams and hopes come true? Would you accept the offer, or would you rather turn it down and walk away to continue your meaningless life, as a stranger, not important to anyone?
All ponies in the story are anthro, also this is my first real fanfiction, so i'll appreciate any comment and critique you want to give.
These are my own fantasy themed ideas added to the original MLP world, i hope you guys like it.
Have fun reading! :)
Okay, I got fed up with the negative comments about the cover art, I've made my own. I hope you guys like this one. (From this point I won't change it again.)
Nice intro! I'll fav now and like if the quality of your next few chapters stick to this standard.
2629238 Thanks! I really appriciate any feedback I'll try to keep the quality up
I'd have to say that this story has a lot of potential in it just make sure to find all the little tid-bits of errors within to make it look even better.
2629259 Thanks I try to do my best at it. I reworked the intro more than one time, but I still have much to learn in writing
(considering I am not writing in my native language)
Hey nice start hope you continue oh and I give you a like and fav. Just hope you keep it up. (Dont go Haitis on me)
2630641 Thank you! My original plans were to release one chapter / week but if there's demand for it, i can try to work a bit faster
Really good
I want to see more of it, please proceed 
2631307 Thanks! I never thought my first writing would get so much feedback and likes so quickly
2631406 wow I just realized you posted this today didnt you? It is a good read though so that's why
Nice story. Keep up the amazing work.
2631713 Thank you very much for the kind words!
A brony's dream come true... but I do have one question, how did he find out about the show and watch it?
Okay why did Applejack's name become messed up near the end?
2632008 I did not really define this, but considering he still sleeps home and stuff like that, i thought people would guess he watched it there.
2632024 Thank you for pointing out this mistake, i corrected it.
i'm willing to give this a shot, but be careful so you don't go all cliche on us.
2633321 I'll try not to
Good to see an update
I'll look forward to where you decide to take this story of yours 
2648906 Thanks, I really appreciate the interest
Excellent chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
2649925 Thank you very much, I 'll start writing the next one today, we'll see how fast I can get it done.
2650904 Please take your time there no rush. I can wait..
Please proceed
2650936 Oh don't worry I will still put the quality before speed so no worries
2651852 YEA
am I the only one who checked this out simply because of the Riku cover picture? and then sighed when I discovered it was just another cliché HiE fic
Well, I'm sorry if I have disappointed you. As I mentioned in the descrition, I picked the picture from google as it seemed fitting for the story. If you don't like my story then don't read it, that's all I can say.
Lol I found a typo in your story which instead of expression it was sexpression
2662489 Oh god x) Thanks for mentioning, I'll check through and correct it. Yea sometimes I miss little things like this even when I'm double checking my work.
2631193 Holy! One chapter per week? Alright, I made an account JUST so I can fav and like this. This story is amazing and awesome. Can't wait to see where this is going. Don't rush it though. This story has all the elements of a good story. But if you can update it every WEEK and have great story quality, you are the most amazing writer of all time. I'm glad I didn't overlook this story because of the totally unrelated picture. LOL
I must say, I am a bit dissaponted that so much information has been revealed already. That keeper could've waited a few chapters.
2662541 Well I'm only revealing as much information as I have to. If I need to reveal a bit more than originally intended to do so in order to continue my work, then I will. But rest assured, I'm not rushing anything in the plot.
This... interests me. I will continue.
2664609 I am glad to hear that.
2662518 Thank you for the flattering words. Although I have to admit I don't work with the time I mentioned. It depends on how much ideas I have planned out already and how easily I can put them in the story. For example the latest chapter took about 1,5-2 days to write (with all reworks included). If I have the chance to surprise you guys with new chapters, then I'll gladly do so. Although as I stated in one of the comments before, I always put quality before speed. And I'm really glad you like my work
(I just realised my last comment wasn't tagged as a reply for yours so I just recommented, silly me 
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Daaaaaaaaaamn that was good! Eagerly waiting for more Novexx!
2706813 Thank you very much for the kind words and the favourite!
Also, I won't be working on it for a few days, I have many artwork to complete (promised them long ago, and as well for myself too), but when I'm done with those, I'm back to writing. Thank you for your patience in advance everyone!
Novexx
That was awesome! Never heard of shadow/darkness arrows before, nice job!
2732629 Glad you like my writing! Also, that wasn't really an arrow, just a projection of his mind. His thougths can give shape to the energies he controls, and thus he formed an arrow like dark lance.
2733823 Fair enough, still awesome as hell though.
2819094 I'm glad you like it
So....is he like a paladin death knight, or a paladin warlock mix?
2912121 I'd say neither, but if you want to see it like that, then probably paladin/necromancer mix.
I like this twist on the story. hope the next chapter comes out soon.
3085489 Thanks. To be honest, I've been having idea problems for quite some time, but I will try my hardest to get a new chapter out a soon as possible.
cool but don't rush too much I've seen artists and authors fall that way
3087013 I don't rush. That's why i didn't post a new chapter for a long time now. I don't want to post any new content you guys might not like.
Dud, te Riku ert wuz awesome.