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Man that was great. I don't know how many times I fell on the floor laugh at this chapter. I am happy to see your back to get this art in hilarity going again. I can't wait to see what happens in Chapt 2. I hope Spike have enough skills to get both Twi an Vel lol. I wonder what Can and Shinning will do know that they know. We all know Twi is going to flip out then run out crying over her crush bruising the back of her mom's throat lol.

ALIVE!

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Thw akwardness is strong in this secene.

"...Um...This isn't what it looks like..."

That's a hell of a note to leave off on

She froze and stared blankly at them, only letting a light ‘gag’ escape her mouth.
“…”
“…”
“…”

"...*POP*(gasp)...this is exactly what it looks like."

Did future Spilight just get snuffed out?
Did Velvet bite of more she could chew?
Will the dad give a shit?

Velvet did not ask the right question. "...or maybe you just want her instead~♥".

I am going to die!

Wow, this was absolutely amazing... I never laughed so much while reading
I really want this to be spilight btw

Possible answers to all of this:

"...Okay I know this looks bad, but there's a great reason for all of this she heard there was a city of gold in my crotch and she's explorin' it like Daring Do."

"Um...my dick cures throat cancer and she needs her medicine."

Spike is about to say something but Twilight Velvet interrupts him. "Okay, the truth is your father and I are sorta seeing other ponies...errr... in my case a dragon and we just happen to still be living together. End of Story." Then she continues getting her cough syrup with vitamin D.

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"...*POP*(gasp)...Well, Twilight, what are you waiting for? There's still one more and I got him all warmed up for you."

Now it's official: All hell has broken loose!!!!

Sparkle foursome inbound!
Spike must unleash all of his mighty dragon swag just to survive the oncoming storm!

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The last is good for the next chapter.

Damn it. I knew there was going to be a HUGH FUCKING CLIFF! I just knew it, and I still read this.

And damn if, Cadance isn't the "BIGGEST" cock breaker in the world!

Hurry Up with Part 2!

Wow, that animated short I watched after I finished reading this REALLY Recaped the whole chapter for a cheaply done animation!

Uh. Wow. Welp, this is gonna end... interestingly.

.......That was brilliant. That was pure epic win from beginning to end!

Most excellent.

You are so cruel. Please, continue.

mOAR

Surprised no one mentioned the bit before the chapter… HILARIOUS !!!

Dude you MUST continue with the fic. It is getting too damn good to remain incomplete... pls dear author give us some LOOOOVE😍😍😍😍