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The Howling Behemoth
The beast, whether it's tamed or let free, it will always lurk within.
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A Dragoness x Spike tale?
All of my yes!
Their aren't enough good spike fics there really isn't
wow the female dragon is big as fuck, I hope spike hits a growth spurt before the sex happens.
Oh god. I can see where this is going. Spike may or may not feel bad for eating the Diamond Dog. And he may want more meat, but he wouldn't dare try to eat any of his friends or other ponies. And Fluttershy has an excess of small woodland animals that wouldn't be noticed if they went missing.
2962541 Very few.
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Shhhh *as river song* spoilers
plus just like how Pinkie knows every pony i bet flutters knows all of her animals and would notice if one went missing
WTF!
No more, I think that I will like this shipping: Spike x Dragoness.
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In my mind, I know that Dragoness must to think Spike is a hard dragon.
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Yeah, I know. I'm still undecided about reading this. I don't like the way that Spike just gave in so fast to eating meat. I was sure he'd put up more of a fight. What would happen if his friends or the princess found out what he did? I'm sure they would try to either stop him from eating meat or take more drastic measures.
Jolly good show! I hope you make more soon.
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I doubt that the princess or twilight would get mad at him they know he's a dragon and would eventually eat meat and they know it would be wrong to force their vegetarian pony ideals on him they'd probably just try to regulate his meat consumption
Meh, not badly written, but just another of those bizarre fics that want us to believe that there is some reason for Spike to be dissatisfied with life, or that Spike should have some desire to live as a dragon despite the fact we had that episode already in season two. Spike made his choice then, living like a dragon holds no appeal for him.
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Yeah, I agree. Fluttershy would probably help him with it. After all, she does take care of animals that eat meat. So it would be obvious that she would need to get meat somehow. Like fish, from the Everfree forest.
You don't see many dragoness x Spike fics. You have my interest. From one Spike fic writer to another welcome to the site.
It got good
I didn't even read this yet and it already like it.
2962987 Yeah a judgment made from observing a bunch of teenagers being teenagers and from invading another guy's turf while all the BS about dragons being "mean and scary" being the norm has been thrust at him all his life. Sure I wonder why he'd come to that.
Frankly there aren't enough Spike embraces his nature fics and most of the ones that exist are very poorly written.
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Not really. Dragons are fiercely territorial. And an aged dragon who's had his home for probably a long time see a younger one, a potential rival, in his home eating from his horde isn't just going to roll the red carpet out and say "Well shucks lil guy. Sure we'll share"
And the teenagers for the most part acted like that teens. Yes they crossed a line with the baby egg but most mature dragons wouldn't give two shits about stupid inane pranks (What it was to the teen dragons, what most teens are stereotyped as)
I think its more bizarre that Spike's draconic nature has to be suppressed just so he can fit in with the ponies
2964653 Except this isn't Poor abused Spike now is it? And I re-wtached the episode its not murder he was going for intimidation. Pretty sure Spike is fireproof so what would the Dragon fire fire at him for? To kill a fireproof being (a fact he'd know as a dragon) with FIRE!? Nope. And the claws and spiky tail he never uses.
And teenagers are dicks irregardless of species.
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Spike said himself he's fireproof. Singed =/= killed by fire
Yes because all the other Spike fics were he turns into a pseudo-pony and he's all gumdrops and sugar with his obsession over Rarity being his only character trait are soooooooooo much better
Yes because teenage pony's haven't tried murder (after all ponies are near infallible and can NEVER do wrong) and because what 5 teenage dragons tried to smash a Pheonix egg ALL teenagr dragons are that way and because a dragon aggressively defended his turf ALL dragons are that way. Have you considered why most foreign races don't get along with the ponies? Maybe its not because the ponies are all shining beacons of friendship and magic.
Spike is a dragon END OF. Maybe he should start trying to be one instead of a pony.
2964832 Yes the basic idea of a pony raised dragon learning to get in tune with his natural instincts is garbage but a dragon rejecting his natural instincts without even getting to truly know his kind is sooooooooo much better
I'm done here
2964870 I did unlike you with your faulty generalizations
I hope jake the drake blows a volatile arcane nova blast at your face....
Just kidding! But this fic needs work....
Apparently this is filed under clop. Just saying.
Also, unlike the haters, I do think there's some potential. You just need to write a believable reason as to why Rarity wanted Spike to go solo, and why Twilight didnt tag along to ensure his safety. Also, coupled with the fact why Diamond Dogs carry jewels with them, and why she feels so cold towards her savior... or wannabe-savior actually.
I like it! Keep up the good work
2964898 I think a lot of your views are too opinionated for this to be a good review, this is their first fic. And it's a good premise, don't chastise people for thinking outside the box. I give your critique 3/10
I'm liking what I see. :) For someones first story I'd say you have a good thing going here! While in general I can see room for improvement in punctuation and grammar, it is bad far not bad at all (maybe just get someone to check it over for you if you can). :D I have to say I'm definitely curious as to how this is going to progress and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! (Credit to you for thinking outside the box a little with this, there are far too many ideas that people just over use) Keep it up!
I wish spike would embrace his true nature.
It's very good. Spike must is going to embrace your nature dragon . I am waiting for more.
good conflict between his upbringing and his heritage... and it's a good question of how his growth will be seen by the ponies close to him... and yeah, I wish he embraced his badass side, even if he has to conceal that he requires the consumption of meat (reminds me of the first chapter of a story my friend's writing: "Out of the Pan, Into the Forest")
This is awesome.
Spike won't be able to suppress his dragon side for long.
3006297 I love that story.
' s diet.
It's only a matter of time before ponies find out about
Let just say it won't be pretty, if they try to bring harm to him.
Meh, I'm waiting until Spike gets Blaze as a mate. Oh, and I agree with the others about his nature thing.
It's interesting, and I like the story, but fix these grammar and punctuation errors, Jesus Christ. You should also split up Spike's thoughts,the things in italics.
Make it like this
"Right."
So do I.
Instead of like this
"Right" So do I
Make sure to add periods and commas, too. It's really annoying to read a chapter like this ;-;
It'd probably be good for you to get a beta.
So far, I can't see this being rated mature for sex. Unless you plan on adding that on later
It shouldn't be this surprising. Celestia should have known this is going to happen at one point or another and if Spike keeps chaining up his instinct it is going to explode and it won't be pretty.
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I get the feeling Twilight is going to disown Spike.
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3011035 If she does I hope she burns in hell.
3012181 Damn straight.
Equestria is going to hell in a hand basket.
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Spike should have smacked twilight; he told her he didn't want to take off the necklace yet she tried to take it anyway? I would have fucked her up... But that's just me. And screw the ponies spike, go to the female dragon.
3078949 I agree. Screw the ponies, be with the dragoness.
3078949 The nerve.
3079072 Dragoness superior, Mares inferior.
3079170 List of female races that are best for Spike ( best to worst)
Dragoness
Changeling... Queen!
A female Draconequus ( why hasn't this been done before?)
Minotaur female (Breast and hands; again, this should be done)
Gryphon ( I bet I spelled it wrong and I don't care)
And the very last... Mare.