good conflict between his upbringing and his heritage... and it's a good question of how his growth will be seen by the ponies close to him... and yeah, I wish he embraced his badass side, even if he has to conceal that he requires the consumption of meat (reminds me of the first chapter of a story my friend's writing: "Out of the Pan, Into the Forest")
This is awesome. Spike won't be able to suppress his dragon side for long.
3006297 I love that story. It's only a matter of time before ponies find out about ' s diet. Let just say it won't be pretty, if they try to bring harm to him.
It's interesting, and I like the story, but fix these grammar and punctuation errors, Jesus Christ. You should also split up Spike's thoughts,the things in italics.
Make it like this
"Right."
So do I.
Instead of like this
"Right" So do I
Make sure to add periods and commas, too. It's really annoying to read a chapter like this ;-;
It shouldn't be this surprising. Celestia should have known this is going to happen at one point or another and if Spike keeps chaining up his instinct it is going to explode and it won't be pretty.
Does anyone know of any more spike X dragoness story's besides this one, it takes a village and loves a dragon, it's my favorite pairing and it's really hard finding story's where it happens, so if any one knows about any others please tell me.
I wish spike would embrace his true nature.
It's very good. Spike must is going to embrace your nature dragon . I am waiting for more.
good conflict between his upbringing and his heritage... and it's a good question of how his growth will be seen by the ponies close to him... and yeah, I wish he embraced his badass side, even if he has to conceal that he requires the consumption of meat (reminds me of the first chapter of a story my friend's writing: "Out of the Pan, Into the Forest")
This is awesome.
Spike won't be able to suppress his dragon side for long.
3006297 I love that story.
It's only a matter of time before ponies find out about ' s diet.
Let just say it won't be pretty, if they try to bring harm to him.
Meh, I'm waiting until Spike gets Blaze as a mate. Oh, and I agree with the others about his nature thing.
It's interesting, and I like the story, but fix these grammar and punctuation errors, Jesus Christ. You should also split up Spike's thoughts,the things in italics.
Make it like this
"Right."
So do I.
Instead of like this
"Right" So do I
Make sure to add periods and commas, too. It's really annoying to read a chapter like this ;-;
It'd probably be good for you to get a beta.
So far, I can't see this being rated mature for sex. Unless you plan on adding that on later
It shouldn't be this surprising. Celestia should have known this is going to happen at one point or another and if Spike keeps chaining up his instinct it is going to explode and it won't be pretty.
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I get the feeling Twilight is going to disown Spike.
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3011035 If she does I hope she burns in hell.
3012181 Damn straight.
Equestria is going to hell in a hand basket.
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Does anyone know of any more spike X dragoness story's besides this one, it takes a village and loves a dragon, it's my favorite pairing and it's really hard finding story's where it happens, so if any one knows about any others please tell me.
3257071 if you want a dragoness x spike story http://www.fimfiction.net/story/52435/loves-a-dragon here and it has a sequel