Spike should have smacked twilight; he told her he didn't want to take off the necklace yet she tried to take it anyway? I would have fucked her up... But that's just me. And screw the ponies spike, go to the female dragon.

3078949 I agree. Screw the ponies, be with the dragoness.

3078949 The nerve.
3079072 Dragoness superior, Mares inferior.

3079170 List of female races that are best for Spike ( best to worst)
Dragoness
Changeling... Queen!
A female Draconequus ( why hasn't this been done before?)
Minotaur female (Breast and hands; again, this should be done)
Gryphon ( I bet I spelled it wrong and I don't care)
And the very last... Mare.

3079228 Damn straight.
Ponies are too close minded, fragile, racist, fools,
and inferior.
That list is pretty much the pecking order... of suitable mates for Dragons.
Only backwards.

Twilight doesn't what is going on in front of her and it will come back to bite her. Though that pocket dimension will definitely come in handy.

3079258

Ponies are too close minded, fragile, racist, fools,
and inferior.

I truly hope the irony is intentional^^

Also: A lot of Spike's unhappiness is his own fault. Twilight didn't expect him to stay behind and clean the whole day. She didn't make him. There are enough ponies in Ponyville who would like to be his friend: after all, during "Secret of my Excess" everypony was happy to give him a gift.

He'd just need to go out and look.

3079170 Indeed.

the only thing I can guess as to why you didn't have Spike say, "what friends?" to Twilight is that you couldn't think of the conversation... or at least one that didn't end with him storming off... shame

3079228 That's a good question. Why not a female Draconequus? Haven't seen that shipping yet.

3079339 It is.

3079343

3079357 That makes sense. It is a shame.

3079313 It will come back to bite her in the ass.
Pocket dimension, best escape route.

3079369
colour me relieved^^

My apologies for the (dumb) question, just wanted to make sure^^

3079365 ... Then I will write one; what is r63 discords name?!

The only thing I don't like about this story is the terrible grammar/punctuation, and the placement of commas and things like that. It's really annoying. It'd be good if you got a beta, honestly. Besides that, the premise is great, and I'm interested in reading it. Not going to stop, but I'm not going to lie when I say that it's really, really annoying to have all those errors in a story.

3079258 my computer fuckin up; I cant see your video... Could you tell me what's in it?

3079407 No idea...But, kudos to you for writing a shipping that hasn't existed until you decided to write it.

I will stay here, for you work.

3079476 why thank you good sir.

3079434 Popo: "Alright maggots, listen up. Popo's about to teach you the Pecking Order. It goes: you, the dirt, the worms inside of the dirt, Popo's stool , Kami, then Popo. Any questions?"

Krillin: "Um... Yeah I... AAAAGH!" [Krillin Owned Count: 3]

Popo: "Enjoy the climb back up, bitch! ..Now any more questions?"

Yajirobe, Tien Shinhan, Chiaotzu , Yamcha : *SILENCE*

Popo: "Good. Then we can begin."

3079407
Eris, usually- as in Eris, the Greek Goddess of discord, chaos and strife.

3079556 I fuckin love DBZ!

3079561 thanks, you help out big time.

3079566 I love Dragon Ball Z and Dragon Ball Z abridged.

3079552 Your welcome.

3079556 "Enjoy the climb back up, bitch!"

3080281

Twi you ignorant brownnosing inconsiderate bitch

3079376 Or catch attacks and send them right back.

3083506 He send right back at you!

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Spike needs to tell everypony the entire truth. If Twilight would put her ego out of her plot, she could see that there is trouble brewing. Spike needs to tell them that they ran into a dragoness that told them plenty of useful information about their species. He also needs to let Twilight know that he has to eat meat, similar to when Fluttershy gives otters and other animals fish in their diet.

He also needs to tell them that Zecora knows about Spike's issue, and that she is actually helping him, unlike everyone else. One more thing that has to be done is that Spike needs to go off on Twilight about how he's just a slave/assistant to Twilight, that thanks to her neligence (I think) Spike has no other social associates other than the mane 6, and that she basically is throwing it in his face that he doesn't belong in so many words.

I predict that the cat will be out of the bag (thanks Fluttershy, I have a feeling she's going to be a snitch), and because of it, they are going to banish Spike from Ponyville at least, if not Equestria. They (the mane 6) are going to see his physical maturity and like the fact that he's up to their version of adult size. Hell, I can also see that Rarity (who does has some sort of affection for Spike) start seeing more of him, and the others wanting to use him more since they now don't see him as a kid. Great, right? Wrong! Spike will know that he doesn't belong, he will leave, the Mane 6 are sorrowful because of what they FINALLY realize what they done, and as a final FUCK YOU!, Spike gets close to Blaze the dragoness and leaves with her for the Badlands or whatever other dragon civilization there is, never to be seen again.

Off topic--is it just me, or has there been an uptick in the number of Spike bashing/abuse/abandonment fics lately? Has there been a shift where Spike is no longer a significant part of Equestrian society, or is it just that I've whining like a baby about Spike not being respected?

Here's a little more: How is the Tartarus is Twilight so clueless? Rarity picked up on that almost instantly, but not Twilight? I know she's socially awkward, and less so since she has friends her own gender (and assuming similar age), but how is she able to forget her first friend and leave him by the wayside?? It's just downright cruel!

3083534 More or less yeah

3084320 That comment is so spot on.
You summed up how I felt.

3084401 .

Can't wait for the next chapter!