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The Howling Behemoth


The beast, whether it's tamed or let free, it will always lurk within.

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A Daring Do/Spike fic, Thu'ums, a Daring DoXSpike shipping, a great sex scene between the two, Spike joining DD on a life of adventure and coming into his own? You sir have a loyal fan out of me.

Look up Thu'um translator, or Dovah translator, you can find Thu'um's there.

Yes!!!! More please!! Love. This. So. Much. :pinkiehappy:

I am loving this Story and this is a epic pairing. Time goes on I can see Spike becoming more of a badass as he gets closer to Darling. I know he is going to end up taking her in some ruin somewhere and she will love it lol. This will be like Indiana Jones and Tomb Raider hooking up... Just. Plain. Epic :moustache::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

that last part came almost completely out of nowhere, but it was a good read none the less

Started off good. Possible raped scene with Celestia's personal sex monster, fight scene was good, if not a little rushed. You really started to make simple grammar errors around that part. The clop was good, rushed but good. Even for Spike's first time you could have made it longer, and you skipped the part where they landed, and explain how, Daring Do, was in a position to see, Spike's raging boner.:pinkiegasp:

And, Spike being the reincarnation of, Alduin, is a nice touch.
All in all, I give this chapter a 8/10!:twilightsmile:
Looking forward to more of Spike; Doing the Do!:rainbowlaugh: Yeah, I just did that!:pinkiehappy:

An amusing bit about Pinkies incredible (Possible edible, knowing Pinkie) mane, a nice bit of internal conflict for Twilight and Spike. A short chapter, but pretty good overall (Although Rainbow Dash was a bit creepy at the end of her bit there. I'd almost imagine if Pinkie didn't pull her out of her mane, since we didn't know exactly who all was pulled out, she bolted home after Spike's description for some private time:rainbowderp: )

I know ONE thing I hope U do include in this. and that is Spike learning more dragon language!

4501080 Maybe the author will include done rd clopping scenes.

This will be a great story. I wonder when Spike will notice the connection between him and one of the oldest dragons in history?

This shipping is just so awesome and cute! Loving this story bro!

My interest has been piqued!

I ship this. I ship this so hard.

Pretty good chapter for the most part, though there are some mistakes here and there.

Spike and Rarity froze, they didn't have a plan. They were to simply find the dragons and signal the soldiers if they couldn't convince them to leave. Spike knew from experience that Garble wouldn't negotiate with ponies.

"It came from over there."

One of the dragons made his way to the rock they were hiding behind. With barely any visible strain he heaved the boulder from the ground. He tossed it to the side leaving them exposed.

Spike and Rarity looked at the dragons. There was a large dragon with two grey horns. Next, there was a skinnier purple dragon with yellow hair. Finally there was Garble.

I'm pretty sure that it should be Daring, not Rarity.

love this story please continue

idaina Jones good bye

It's back!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Oh Shit. I knew Alduin would come into play, but I didn't think the actual Dragonborn would show up as well. I guess it's like Soul Edge and Soul Caliber. No matter where or when, the two will always meet.

Well, if anything that was a hell of a first chapter. A few grammar mistakes, but still good.

Don't tell me that Pegasus is the Dovahkiin. How can you hate all dragons with someone like Paarthy around? This Dovahkiin already sounds like a dick.

That's just one word of the Dragon Aspect? This World Eater is strong.
Soul Gems are a big moral issue isn't it? Personally I wouldn't use them, but they're such an essential part of the game that you can't go without them. It's a lot easier when you tell yourself it's just a game.

Well, are they gonna have a friendly chat now? Spike is seen as a saviour to both the Crystal Empire AND the buffaloes now. They'd be really pissed if someone attacked him for no good reason. I just hope Spike can keep enough control that he won't do the same.

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especially when the dovahkiin is dragonborn

A little fast paced mate, but overall a jolly good show.

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Thank you...unfortunately, it doesn't seem as though the author listened...

This Alicorn was non other than

looks like you’re missing an e after the n there.

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

It's good that Spike and Twilight parted on good terms.

Oof, I don't think this is gonna be updated.

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