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The Howling Behemoth


The beast, whether it's tamed or let free, it will always lurk within.

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This is amazing! I can't wait to see how Spike will do in basic.

Comment posted by the parasprite deleted Jan 29th, 2015

Great start cant wait to read more :moustache:

Okay you have my interest.:pinkiehappy: There are very few Spike war story and most of them are either dead or at a stand still.:fluttercry: I hope you bring new inspiration in that area.:raritystarry:

I immediately had to favorite this after reading it, while not signed on. I am rooting for you Spike, but also I am worried for you. :fluttershysad: I hope you don't lose yourself as you go to war, and will eventually have to give into your true instinct.

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: cant wait to see Spike ancetray kick in at training and give him a dragoic hormone bost in other words THIS

OH YES! I know that this will be fun to read

Captivating chapter. This reminds me of a war movie I've watched, and the General in it was such an ass, just like this general in this story. I forgot the name of the movie though. Also, Surprise is just the splitting image of Pinkie Pie:pinkiehappy:, just a Pegasus. I at least hope Gilda will warm up to Spike.:fluttershysad:

not bad but seems a little jercky with flow

Not bad but you could do more with Spike. Since his flames can teleport stuff, have fun with it.

Well, it looks like Spike has made a friend... I guess in Gilda. :unsuresweetie: Also, that very ending reminds me of Damon Wayans in Major Payne. :pinkiehappy:

Pretty good stuff,
but keep the pacing as smooth and readable as possible

good stuff god stuff :moustache:I can not wait to see the rest of it:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I got to admit, I have read alot of Spike war stories. And you are rite many of them don't end or ever give us a proper pay off. Hell some don't even make me care for the characters involved. I feel that you are doing a great job of doing those thing so far:pinkiehappy:. I am invested in this Spike and the struggles he is going through, as well as Gilda. I get the feeling that there is alot more to her then meets the eye, and Spike might be able to relate to her and form a bond with her that even his feeling for Rarity can't match.:duck: I know everyone wants this but I would like to see Spike grow alittle, even if it was him thinking about protecting his hoard (under the advise of Discord) or from something our Master of Chocolate Milk does. Anyway great chapter can't wait to see else you come up with.

3298754 I do agree I've always thought about that and wanted to see someone really play with that aspect. I want to see what happens if he really trained that ability, He could change a battle just by showing up by being a major reinforcement or resupply drop. He could get rid of a enemy heavy weaponry but still keep intact to be used. A master of recon. And a beast on the battlefield with the ability to teleport easier then any unicorn, A infinite arsenal at his disposal,and could get wounded out of there fast to be helped. He would kill in a war.:moustache:

Game of Thrones quote, gotta love the show. :pinkiehappy:

Not much to say, I've seen and read many stories in my life. Novels, One Shots, or just simple stories. I have a feeling that you, author, have a goal. I've known people like you, and they've created the best damn stories I've ever read. I am a story writer myself, and my stories may not have such goals like you, but people enjoy them. You, my good friend, are going to have a great story, I can tell. You're gonna go far. There's a reason why they call me Prophet.

oh dude best Discord and Spike yet

Comment posted by Truly Luminous deleted Feb 28th, 2015

Now he was in the bunker

It should be barracks, not bunker.

Why wouldn't Spike be given a sword? his claws are like hands so he could use one.

This is just for awesome.

Alright, I could barely get halfway into this chapter. There is no fucking way this is how an actual military would work. It all just feels... half-assed. I'm sure you are putting real effort into this. But just from reading I can tell that you have had no real dealings with the military in any sort of way.

FUCK YOU, SHINNING! I HATE YOU!:twilightangry2:
Good bye, Twi. I love you...:moustache:
Spike... goodbye...:facehoof:

Comment posted by The Howling Behemoth deleted Feb 28th, 2015
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Comment posted by Truly Luminous deleted Feb 28th, 2015

4155884
It's still training.
None of the ponies have experienced the battle, give it time.

4158798 Take a look at Manifest Destiny. It starts off with training and is a very accurate portrayal of military training.

Comment posted by Truly Luminous deleted Feb 28th, 2015

I extremly enjoy this and I hope you keep up the great work in writing it!

That was interesting, I hope Scales and Feathers here can still work together. (Still hoping for a love connection here lol:pinkiehappy:) Got to admit you through me off with the whole mole thing, alittle sad Discord left. He is the only one that will help Spike, well him and being on the battlefield. Seeing him get his kill and death cherry popped will be very interesting to see. Can't wait to see what happens next.:moustache::moustache:

Comment posted by DragonPony deleted Apr 5th, 2014

Looks like Spike is getting some action, lets see how he handles a real life or death battles.

This is turning out great so far.

Oh, boy. It begins

"Chaos isn't a pit, it's a ladder." Discord corrected.

Petyr: Hey!

3135654 Also, surprise is a wonderbolt.

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