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TPantyhose Warrior
Equestria Girls
Dark
Comedy
Drama
Wallflower Blush finds herself in a tight spot.
Fetish
Human
Sunset Shimmer
Wallflower Blush
Bad Dragon · 6k words · 13 27 · 457 views
TNight of the Autumn Moon
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Horror
On Nightmare Night, then called the Festival of the Autumn Moon, two foals must venture into the Everfree Forest and confront a supernatural terror.
OC
DavidFosterWalrus · 10k words · 19 1 · 316 views
EThe Dark Truth
MLP Gen 5
Slice of Life
Izzy is smiling. This is a constant fact, a basic truth of the universe. The sun is warm, snow is cold, and Izzy is smiling. But there's a truth behind that cheerful mask. She smiles because she has to, or so she's sure.
OC
Other
Izzy Moonbow
David Silver · 6k words · 31 3 · 439 views
TBad Dragon's Short Stories
MLP: FiM
Anthology
Got a minute? It will take you even less to read one of these unrelated short stories designed for instant reader’s gratification.
Spike
Bad Dragon · 10k words · 34 39 · 1k views
EFire-Breathing Cupcakes!
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Slice of Life
Pinkie Pie and Spike spend time together for Hearth's Warning Eve, baking cupcakes that shoot fire - to the equal concern and delight of everyone. They then realize that Pinkie is a professional baker. Whew. But why are Pinkie and Spike...KISSING?!
Pinkie
Spike
Kikio3000 · 8k words · 14 1 · 604 views
TZipp Wears a Furtight Bodysuit
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Drama
Zipp is forced to wear itchy, uncomfortable, clingy, entrapping, dumb fabric.
Second Person
Sunny Starscout
Zipp
Bad Dragon · 2k words · 40 16 · 1.1k views
TApropos of the Sinners
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Slice of Life
(Featured on EqD) A dark and tragic event occurred some years ago in Ponyville, and it involved an equally dark and dysfunctional family. They are still discussed among us to this day.
Violence
Sex
Death
OC
SpitFlame · 194k words · 20 1 · 762 views
TThe Wife of the Old Draconequus
Equestria Girls
Romance
Drama
The legend of how the rare Sleigh Beggy became the wife of the mage that is neither fae nor human
Alt. Universe
Discord
Fluttershy (EqG)
misskoifishpony · 52k words · 70 4 · 1.8k views
TThe Changeling empire
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Sci-Fi
Starlight and Twilight must work together to save Equestria from Queen Chrysalis's army led by terrifying cyborg, General Eclipse.
Gore
Violence
Death
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Pinkie
Chrysalis
Changelings
Starlight Glimmer
red reaper · 6.4k words · 19 15 · 857 views
TThe Shadow
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Dark
Thriller
A new 'hero' appeared in the city and he kills every criminal or monster with equestrian magic.
Gore
Violence
Suicide / Self Harm
Death
Alt. Universe
Main 6
Flash Sentry
Main 7 (EqG)
Pony of Shadows
red reaper · 7.4k words · 24 18 · 1.6k views
TMetal and blood
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Sci-Fi
As the ponies took him from his family, tortured him, and replaced his flesh with metal, the only thing that kept him alive was revenge.
Gore
Violence
Death
OC
Other
Changelings
Griffons
red reaper · 4.6k words · 15 18 · 771 views
TOur Lives Among The Equine
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Anthology
We "animals" never get to speak in your language, Equines, but we do have some interesting tales to tell. Some perhaps disturbing. (And also, some Equines have disproportionate say in this, which I'm highly against)
Death
Violence
Fluttershy
Applejack
Angel
Octavia
Other
Fabian Corcair · 9.1k words · 560 views
TPinkie Pie becomes Jackson Pollock
MLP: FiM
Phineas and Ferb
The World Ends With You
Random
Pinkie becomes an artist. She attracts some attention.
Gore
Violence
Suicide / Self Harm
Death
Human
Alt. Universe
Twilight
Pinkie
Applejack
Spike
Songbird Serenade Thanos · 1k words · 277 views
EThe Calm Before The Storm
MLP: FiM
Romance
Slice of Life
The touching story of Discord meeting his daughter for the first time
Alt. Universe
Fluttershy
Discord
fluttercordlover232 · 2.2k words · 40 4 · 3.5k views
EPinkie Comes to Town
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Rocked with the dazzling wonder of the rainboom, filly Pinkie's whole worldview is tossed upside down. She's made her family smile a little, but she feels there's more to be done. She has to go, just has to.
Pinkie
Mr. Cake
Mrs. Cake
David Silver · 1.4k words · 32 1 · 1.1k views
EMy Heart Goes Out to Your Father
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Princess Luna attempts to mend the relationship between a father and his foals following an incident at Canterlot Bank
Celestia
Luna
OC
twilightsparkle3562 · 2.8k words · 17 1 · 937 views
EThe Flaming Trash Bag
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Drama
Slice of Life
Lock Down, a member of the prison class royal guards tell the story of an incident that happened to him in his childhood to a prisoner to try and cheer him up.
OC
Other
Royal Guard
Raptormon132 · 4.4k words · 16 2 · 666 views
TA Pop Star, a Princess, and a Prisoner
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Drama
Slice of Life
Tragedy
A once well respected resident of Ponyville has been released from prison for a false crime. But being as almost all of the townsfolk still believe he did it, it maybe a bit more difficult to get this pony back on his feet. Will the Mane Six succeed?
Gore
Sex
Luna
Sapphire Shores
OC
Main 6
CMCs
Raptormon132 · 134k words · 103 27 · 3.8k views
ETwilight’s First Gift
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
The story of the first gift Twilight Sparkle gave to Princess Celestia as a toddler.
Twilight
Celestia
Shining Armor
Twilight Velvet
Night Light
Raptormon132 · 4.9k words · 67 7 · 2.3k views
EThe Stallion in the Suit
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
A grandfather's tale of him passing on a legacy due to him encountering a stallion in a suit that gave him a bit in his childhood.
OC
Other
Raptormon132 · 2k words · 16 1 · 649 views
EInterview with a Heartbroken Princess
MLP: FiM
Drama
Sad
Slice of Life
Manehattan news reporter Hot Scoop interviews Twilight Sparkle about the loss of her library at the hands of Lord Tirek...
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
OC
Cadance
twilightsparkle3562 · 7.7k words · 16 2 · 1.1k views
EInterview with a Monster
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Slice of Life
A young Manehattan reporter is assigned to interview Lord Tirek in Tartarus following his re-imprisonment.
OC
Tirek
twilightsparkle3562 · 6.2k words · 25 1 · 876 views
TSaved from Stoning
MLP: FiM
Drama
Slice of Life
Princess Celestia saves a pony from Rainbow Falls from stoning by her fellow townsfolk and gives her sanctuary in Canterlot. While investigating the matter further, she discovers of laws made without her approval.
Alt. Universe
Celestia
Luna
Cadance
twilightsparkle3562 · 25k words · 85 26 · 3.1k views
TPrincess Celestia Cuts off Ties with Nazi Germany
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Tragedy
In 1939, at the beginning of World War II, Princess Celestia closes the German Embassy and exiles the ambassador and his staff back to the human world after a group of ponies are found murdered at the edge of the Everfree Forest.
Celestia
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.5k words · 32 13 · 1.7k views

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