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TWrath of a Changeling Queen
MLP: FiM
Dark
Queen Chrysalis and her minions travel to Tartarus to teach Lord Tirek a lesson for trying to absorb all the magic and love of Equestria for himself.
Chrysalis
Tirek
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.1k words · 19 4 · 1.1k views
TSecond Princess of the Night
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
With King Sombra gone, is Equestria truely safe from harm? Or will another foe as old as the Crystal Kingdom itself appear now that the dark unicorn's position of evil is vacant? What new danger will threaten the land and the Elements of Harmony?
Twilight
OC
Main 6
Senyu · 325k words · 1,010 53 · 19k views
EAn Overdue Apology
Equestria Girls
Slice of Life
Sunset Shimmer apologizes to Twilight Sparkle for exploding in anger at her during the Tri-Cross Relay at the Friendship Games.
Twilight
Sunset Shimmer
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.1k words · 80 4 · 5.4k views
EA New Outfit for Sunset Shimmer
Equestria Girls
Slice of Life
Rarity helps Sunset Shimmer find a new outfit to reflect her new personality.
Sunset Shimmer
Rarity (EqG)
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.2k words · 85 1 · 4.5k views
EA New Haircut for Starlight Glimmer
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Starlight asks Rarity for a favor: to give her a new hairstyle.
Rarity
Starlight Glimmer
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.3k words · 63 1 · 3.4k views
EFacing his Father
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Shining Armor and his father, Night Light, have a conversation about what happened at the Wedding Rehearsal before his wedding to Cadence.
Shining Armor
Night Light
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.2k words · 41 5 · 5.3k views
TCleave
MLP: FiM
Dark
Drama
Lyra and Bon Bon aren’t best friends, or even real ponies. They’re two thirds of a spell gone horribly wrong.
Lyra
Bon-Bon
OC
BlazzingInferno · 14k words · 149 1 · 2k views
TShame on You, Wind Rider!
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Spitfire pays a visit to Wind Rider after he is arrested for drinking as a result of being discharged from the Wonderbolts.
Spitfire
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.2k words · 45 4 · 3.7k views
ENo Hard Feelings, Rainbow Dash
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Spitfire apologizes to Rainbow Dash for calling her "Rainbow Crash."
Rainbow Dash
Spitfire
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.2k words · 73 9 · 4.8k views
TWind Rider Goes Drinking
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
After he is discharged from the Wonderbolts, Wind Rider gets drunk and makes a complete idiot out of himself.
Other
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.3k words · 47 2 · 2.5k views
EBegging for Forgiveness
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
After the events of "The Mane Attraction," Coloratura is visited by Svengallop who begs her for forgiveness for his actions.
Luna
Other
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.7k words · 48 7 · 1.8k views
EMemories of Tickling Our Daughter
MLP: FiM
Random
Slice of Life
While looking through their family's photo album, Sunset Shimmer's parents remember all the times they would tickle Sunset Shimmer as a filly.
Sunset Shimmer
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.1k words · 39 2 · 4.4k views
EPrincess Luna Gets Her Wisdom Teeth Removed
MLP: FiM
Random
Slice of Life
Princess Luna gets her wisdom teeth removed and it is not an easy process to go through...at all.
Celestia
Luna
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.8k words · 47 4 · 2.7k views
EUnder the Weather
MLP: FiM
Random
Slice of Life
Rarity visits Coco Pommel following the opening of her new store to see if she is feeling better.
Rarity
Coco Pommel
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.6k words · 33 1 · 1.4k views
T‘Til Sunday Do Us Part
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Rarity has an awful idea: marry Spike for the weekend to gain entrance into an ultra-exclusive club for socialite couples. Spike has a brilliant idea: go along with it.
Rarity
Spike
BlazzingInferno · 19k words · 429 18 · 5.9k views
ESaint Luna
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Following the events of "Do Princesses Dream of Magic Sheep?" Luna tries her best to convince a pony to not commit suicide
Luna
OC
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.5k words · 56 1 · 3.1k views
ETwilight Sparkle, You Have Some Explaining to Do!
MLP: FiM
Random
Slice of Life
Twilight is forced to confront Celestia and explain to her former mentor and fellow princess why such an important night was ruined.
Twilight
Celestia
Trixie
Starlight Glimmer
twilightsparkle3562 · 2k words · 73 5 · 4.7k views
TTrial of a Changeling
MLP: FiM
Romance
Dark
Sad
Slice of Life
In this sequel to "Defender of Equestria," a Changeling General goes on trial in Canterlot for numerous war crimes, including kidnapping Cadence and Twilight, while Shining Armor's mentor and predecessor attempts to make amends with Celestia and Luna
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Cadance
Shining Armor
twilightsparkle3562 · 23k words · 36 11 · 1.9k views
EAn Uneasy Reunion
MLP: FiM
Sad
Slice of Life
Sunset Shimmer returns to Equestria for a nervous reunion with Princess Celestia.
Twilight
Celestia
Luna
Sunset Shimmer
Starlight Glimmer
twilightsparkle3562 · 18k words · 194 27 · 6.9k views
EAfter the Rampage
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Scorpan returns to Equestria to help the Princesses and their subjects recover from Tirek's rampage. However, he also tries to help Discord get back in the good graces of those he betrayed by siding with Tirek.
Celestia
Luna
Discord
Other
Shining Armor
twilightsparkle3562 · 17k words · 41 2 · 2.7k views
EMemories of a Destroyed Sanctuary
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
After the events of "The Cutie Remark," Starlight Glimmer develops a new respect for Twilight when she discovers that they both have something in common: that they once had sanctuaries that were both destroyed.
Twilight
Starlight Glimmer
twilightsparkle3562 · 2.1k words · 68 5 · 3k views
EBound By Bylaws
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Soarin goes into a deep depression over what he said to Rainbow Dash about banning her from the Wonderbolts during the events of "Rarity Investigates."
Rainbow Dash
Soarin
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.9k words · 75 4 · 4.6k views
EMidnight Stroll
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Discord and Celestia stroll through the Canterlot Gardens following the Grand Galloping Gala
Celestia
Discord
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.2k words · 35 2 · 2.6k views
EWhy Shining Armor Cries at Weddings
MLP: FiM
Slice of Life
Cadence tries to understand why Shining Armor cried so hard at Cranky and Matilda's wedding
Cadance
Shining Armor
twilightsparkle3562 · 1.8k words · 54 6 · 3.4k views

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