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Following the events of "The Mane Attraction," Coloratura has decided to give up on her "Countess Coloratura" persona for good and focus on her tenure as a singer/songwriter. However, she is visited by her former manager who begs for her forgiveness.

*Continuation of Saint Luna

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Comments ( 19 )

I like that the ex-countess didn't forgiveness him straight away... Sometimes true reconciliation takes time and effort, from all parties. Have a like.

I love this story, an upvote and a fave.

Loved this story, although shouldn't it have a Other tag thanks to the presence of Rara and Svengallop?:applejackconfused:

Not bad, not bad at all :twilightsmile:

This is a very good one-shot.

very nice story, have my upvote :twilightsmile:

Good, though my only nitpick is that if Coloratura is gone, then you might want to say that her name is Rara. Though that's about it.

7443867 Well, Rara is technically a nickname.

7444018 Maybe, but if it's what she wants to be called, then folks like me, Silver Quill, or Applejack, can call her Rara, regardless if it's a nickname or not. But hey, I guess it's your opinion and I'll respect it the best I can. I'm out, PEACE! :rainbowwild:

Good to see that Svengallop is still the sort of manipulative shithead who would use contemplated/attempted suicide as a means of pressuring people into giving him what he wants. Not so great to see Luna actually join in that bullshit. :applejackunsure:

7444396 I only included Luna in it on account that she was the one who talked Svengallop out of killing himself in the previous story.

7444627 Curious that you didn't mark this story as a direct sequel to Saint Luna. That might have avoided some confusion.

Nice little aftermath for an episode

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Manehatten to Fillydelphia would have been better in hindsight

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Next time someone does something unforgivably wrong and tries to change I'm sure you'll be there to tell them to kill themselves after someone else has told them there is so much more than just what they want.

I wonder what he will do.

part the problem is he made excuses the minute he was caught so proving that he cares about others more than himself will show that he really learned his lesson.

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