After he is discharged from the Wonderbolts for attempting to frame Rainbow Dash, Wind Rider gets drunk and makes a complete idiot out of himself.
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Very good.
A few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that a good story.
Good fanfic, reminds me why I picked him for a Robert House stand-in.
Not half bad, Wind Rider brought his punishment down on himself and I can totally see him not getting that. Still, brings one to wonder if anyone has written a fic with him figuring out he deserved everything he got?
Just one suggestion though and a friendly piece of advice from a fellow author, perhaps you could have made the title of this story something interesting? Might help you get more readers that way.
7443602 What title did you have in mind?
7444021 Wouldn't know, that would be up to you, but my suggestion would be to make it something more eye-catching.
I'm not sure if you intended it to be funny, but "second banana" had me laughing out loud.
7444440 Hey, when you're drunk, you tend to say inappropriate things like that.
Fighting force? More like a show team.
I was hoping for hilarity to ensue when I clicked the link, but this is fine as too. Nice job.
"I ain't your friend pal,"
Missed opportunity for a South Park joke.