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In this followup to Wind Rider Goes Drinking, Spitfire pays a visit to Wind Rider after he is arrested for drinking as a result of being discharged from the Wonderbolts and admonishes him for his actions.

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This was great! Nicely done!!

So good.

"Maybe you should do this with all of your newbies. Y'know, before letting them be part of your shows. Then they might not be so tempted to screw things up."

"What's your point?"

"You shouldn't have been so in a hurry to have Rainbow Dash in your squad. You were so eager to bump her up to the top of your list that you didn't think about anything else. And that first show she did with you? I bet you didn't completely level with her, either."

"About what?"

"About how you welcome your new flyers. I can't imagine it being easy to concentrate with her constantly being called Crash every other time. That's why she screwed up your show, because she only found out about it after the fact. I'm surprised she forgave you so easily after all you guys put her through. Almost anypony else would have chewed you out, and rightfully so. I've actually witnessed some of them."

"Why, you -"

"Well, since I'm never going to be a Wonderbolt again, I've got nothing left to lose. Thank you for nothing, too."

ANW

*Over the top cough sound*
"You do realize that we are still here, and can hear everything you say. You are to follow us to an one hour holding cell. We'll get you your mini probation papers. You should not have said that you'll 'get your revenge'. You could have just walked out. Now get moving"

Cells have guards. Cells do not have privacy.

Oh PUH-LEASE! All the Wonderbolts are as shameful and Wind Rider. Spitfire was a hypocrite for throwing him and Lightning Dust out. Spitfire should've been arrested after at least three episodes she appeared in.

Why is Wind Rider shamed? He is par for the course of the typical Wonderbolt.

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