Rainbow Dash's signature move doesn't work so well when she tries it amongst the Apple Family's orchard and hurts herself badly, with Applejack and Applebloom away in Appleoosa and the town Nurse away at a convention who will Big Mac turn to to help him care for the wounded pegasus?

Ah am looking for anyone with experience to review this and point out any obvious flaws with the spelling. grammar or story! So help me if y'all can!

Cover pic was graciously provided by the wonderful 0r0ch1, who can be found on his furaffinity site here:http://www.furaffinity.net/user/shin0r0z/

She had always been a pony that could be looked up to. Someone who seemed to know exactly what to do in any situation. But history tells time and time again that nopony is invincible.

Rainbow Dash notices that Fluttershy isn't enjoying herself quite as much as she used to, so she persuades Fluttershy to fly some rounds together with her.

Things dont go as planned, and a dreadful incident occurs.

Fluitterdash shipping , because I love it <3

Sad ending? Happy ending? You will just have to see "muahahah"

I'm rewriting the story. To my fans, I'd say it'll be worth re-reading.
Minor tweaks in some events, such as extension. I want this to be featured on EqD at some point, and they demand 3,000+ words per chapter. That'll be easy on everything but Ch5 which is currently 1,100 or something. I might combine it and Ch4.
Thanks for all your devotion, and keep in mind that I love your comments and PMs!
Oh, and Jecht finally has a cutiemark, and I'm coming up with names for her parents. Yeah.

Scootaloo has never been able to fly. Everypony is laughing at her, so she decided to give it a go. You've got to run before you can walk. How will she ever learn from her mistake? Will she ever forgive herself?

Rainbow Dash finaly gets her chance to show the wonderbolts her stuff. but, an accident happens, and Dash needs to save someone dear to her. will saving the filly get her in the group? will she be able to do it?

When Dash wakes up and discovers that she has been killed. She watches as her friends carry out her own funeral.

Pinkie Pie plays a prank on Rainbow Dash which goes horribly, horribly WRONG. Now she has resorted to making a deal with the devil himself more or less to save her life....DISCORD!

A SPECIAL NOTE REGARDING THIS STORY:

It occurs within the fanfiction universe from The return of Nightmare Moon, A filly's tale and the secret to mah success but is not in any way directly connected to it. there will be references but i do not plan on making this a confirmed continuation of the series! this event simply occurs within the universe i have created.^^

Rainbow Dash has just passed away and is survived by her marefriend, Twilight Sparkle. Twilight is broken by the loss of her lover, and believes that she will never smile again. Will one last message from her true love be enough to pull her from her misery?

This story is inspired by the poem "Do not Stand at My Grave and Weep" by Mary Elizabeth Frye. A super big thanks goes out to Tyranasaurus0.0, TheStarsGuide, Magiccolt808, and Word-Sight for pre-reading and editing this!

The cover picture was drawn by hombre0 on deviantart. You can check out his page here http://hombre0.deviantart.com/

He says not to give him credit, well too bad. He's a talented artist and he deserves all the credit he can get.

This story is similar to another story I've written so I expect to get flack for this one.

As always thank you for reading, and I appreciate any criticisms that you give!

EDIT: A member named Dimondium created a piano concerto for this story. You can find the video here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l4uxdzoF6sA&feature=youtu.be

The song is very beautiful and, in this author's opinion, this story does not even compare to the heart tugging power of that song. Thank you Dimondium, you have no idea how honored I am.

After an aerial accident during the end of the Summer Sun Celebration years after Rainbow Dash perfected the Sonic Rainboom, something goes wrong. She now finds herself experiencing the journey through the afterlife told through a written account by Rainbow Dash herself. What will become of the Element of Loyalty?