I'm rewriting the story. To my fans, I'd say it'll be worth re-reading.
Minor tweaks in some events, such as extension. I want this to be featured on EqD at some point, and they demand 3,000+ words per chapter. That'll be easy on everything but Ch5 which is currently 1,100 or something. I might combine it and Ch4.
Thanks for all your devotion, and keep in mind that I love your comments and PMs!
Oh, and Jecht finally has a cutiemark, and I'm coming up with names for her parents. Yeah.
Chapters (4)
spelling was nifty here and there but cool
I know this story is special to you and I will follow it because I enjoyed reading the other one. But please don't get too distracted from 'Tale of a Cross-Eyed Mare'
pretty please. I really like that story
Looking forward to updates from both stories
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Wait, what? There's someone who likes my stories because they're my stories?
All my cries of gratitude go to you and others in similar spots ;~;
I promise to keep going with TToaC-EM :3
I'm back at school now, so I need something to keep me occupied during free lessons. NOT HOMEWORK, JEEZ!
I haven't started reading it yet, I will, but I don't know how you're going to beat the original :P
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I don't know either. I'm not even trying to :beat" it, but I know it will. I'm only rewriting it to touch up the staggering amount of small errors that nopony but me even notices.
I'll be adding in more jokes, extending the story to be long enough for EqD, and removing the AppleDash ship to be almost imperceptible unless you want it to be there. Those are my only plans so far. All I've been doing is reading 1-4 paragraphs at a time, then editing them and resaving in a different .docx, haha.
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Haha, well, as long as you don't change the story to an amount of epic proportions, I will be happy. I really hope your fic can get onto Equestria Daily because all of my friends I have reccomended it to have loved it. :D
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Y... You recommended... my fic... to others?
Oh sweet Luna, I never expected that...
I'm going to expand on stuff and change the dialogue, but I'm going to keep the story the same.
Thank you. Sincerely. You just made my day :'3
First!
Also this is Awesome!! I love it!
I did see, however, some misspelled words but I will gladly over look them! I have an idea of what's to come, but time will tell!
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>First!
Leave. Never come back.
>Misspelled words
Please point out any misspelled words you find, I want this to be perfect. However, if by "misspelled", you mean "non-US spelling", I will ignore you.
First chapter and I want to see rainbow with a huge gun and a medic behind her......
Can't wait to read the next one....
The only thing that I could find that I did not like was the insert of the medic. At first it was really funny but then I got to thinking that it kinda shot the mood. It was really sad and everypony in the story was in a really sad a scared place within them self. But then out of no where is this really funny TF2 ref. Don't get me wrong, I love TF2 but I don't think think that it was the time or the place. I think a better Doc would have been a really serious mare that had a really quick and get to it response to Rainbow. It would have given a little jolt to the story and made the reader a little more concerned with the sate of Rainbow's heath. But, that's just me being me. I really like the story! Props.
-Oct (formally known as Jolttix)
P.S. MORE! GIVE US MORE!
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That's actually a pretty good point, I guess. You may have guessed from the title that this is, y'know, a rewrite, so I'm looking for any and all input.
And if you want MOAR, check out the original. I'm only rewriting this to get it up to the level of EqD. Thanks again for the review, I'll go back to the original bit for that. I'm only writing this when I get bored with everything else, but I'm trying to get on with Operation Luna. I guess... I might work to getting this done by May.
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I'm happy to help man.
As you post new things I will be reading and thinking of things. You are a great writer and would like to see you on EqD. 
211497 But.. But.. AppleDash is one of the best ships!
Wow, I waited so long. But still:
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good story so far.
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If you get impatient, I never deleted the original...
Sorry, I would have had this out a couple' hours ago, but I got sidetracked by Tumblr and the following gif.
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"Owls confirmed to be the creepiest birds ever. LOOK AT THE FUCKING THINGS. If you fail to notice the one on the left fucking SWALLOWING a rat, then you have the dude singing some satanic chant or something next to him, and then you have those two other fucking psychos synchronized to make you feel creeped the fuck out with their soulless dance of FUCKING DOOM."
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And that's why I like owls.
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Dude. Those owls are freaking awesome
Great update! I for one would love to read the happy ending and again thanks for rewriting the story and keeping up the great work
"The rebel-rouser"
this story is sad but true, it really deserves to be in eq daily website, and in my opinion you are a great writer, writing from the heart is hard to do in most cases, but you pull it off beautifully.
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Thanks... it sincerely means a lot.
I somehow managed to circumvent my initial illiteracy and put emotion behind the words. Comparing my more recent work with the original of this... it just looks like a completely different writer.
I'm glad you like it. Comments like this are what make me write to begin with.
Oh, and I may be somewhat in love with Scootaloo...
Hmm.. why not, guess I'll reread this. Also, +9001 on the Meet the Medic reference. Gold.
I think I'll read the good ending second. Also, Satan Bird FTW
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Satan bird...?
605235 Owls.
How the fuck hasn't this embodiment of epicness gotten more likes/faves/views/etc.?!?!?! I mean seriously. Even my fanfics have gotten more of those things listed than this has, yet even I feel that my stories should bow down to this one. It...seriously boggles my mind, and I mean that. This story is amazing, but it isn't getting the attention it truly deserves. At this point I'm considering adding random linked allusions to here in my own stories, but I digress. Just because it isn't as 'popular' as other stories doesn't mean it's worse. Because it's a lot better in my opinion (just in case you couldn't tell by now). Keep up the great work, and hopefully the rightfully deserved attention will follow.
P.S. I love you
Oh, and I'm also sorry for the paragraph (I tend to write a lot in comments at times when I should be sleeping, in this case it's 3:30 AM, yet I'm still wide awake).
P.P.S. The urge for the above pun on the Beatles song was far too great. Sorry.
P.P.P.S. Yes, another one. If my only EqD-worthy story (so far) ever DOES make it, expect to find one of the aforementioned 'random linked allusions' within.
~Brendan Kirk "Da Beejees" Julian
EDIT: Weren't you expecting this? Anyway, the same goes for the original, too, except in its case it really only needs more likes. Regardless, I'm surprised that many of the views from that one didn't make it over to this "remastered" version, if you will.
YES, AGAIN: I swore the original was in my favorites... Huh... Well, it is now. Maybe I accidentally clicked the favorite button twice when I first read it? Or maybe I just forgot to. Oh well. I still swore I did, though...
..........and I really should shut up, now, too.
I found it.... I have been looking for your story for about two days and your user icon has been staring me in the face. It's been a long time coming but you got a fav and track from me.
Hey, where are the other two endings to this?
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HOW DID I MISS THIS COMMENT? Dude, you're a legend! Thank you.
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I've had writer's block on a massive scale for a few months now, unfortunately.
The good news? I'm getting a little sick of FFXIII-2.
I'm going to get to rewriting the endings right now~
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Yay!
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I have no clue how you missed tha--my GOD that was a long time ago!
And "a legend"? If you insist. Honestly, I just see it as what happens when I make comments when I should be sleeping, haha.