//------------------------------// // Alternate ending (as requested, dash dosent die :)) // Story: The Third One // by Julyah //------------------------------// Well, As my fans (not very many) requested, i shall do the alternate ending. P.S. In the firs and origional one, dash dies from old age, just tellin yah. so yeah. here goes..... (picking it up from just right after the cloud under scootaloo dissapears.) --------------------------------------------- Rainbow Dash Buck. I increased my speed even more. I shoot straight torwards the falling orange and pink bundle. Im going so fast, tears are in my eyes and the tiniest little bit of blood comes from my outstretched hooves. Blinking through the tears, i eage my wings on and go faster, i had to save Scoots, my best and number 1 fan. To my horror, as my wings obey and i go faster, another half circle appears before my hooves as i change from going forward to down. I didint care if i got into the wonderbolts group, or if i did another sonic rainboom. All i had to do now was save her. Tinges of colour start to show in the demi circle as it turns into a cone, and i feel my body being sucked into somehting, making me go even faster. No, no, no.... i dont want to do another sonic rainboom! No! Stop! Aaaah! I know its too late. But time seems to slow down. Only you slow down, though. Scootaloo falls even faster. Maybe a sonic rainboom isnt such a bad idea, after all. Go fast enough to save scootaloo from a very painful and slow death. Maybe even impress the wonderbolts. And thats when it happened. When i decided for it to. The third one. It was way too much pressure. It hurt. But, i zoomed forward, a trail of rainbows behind me. I caught scootaloo and she landed on my back “yay Rainbow Dash! Ohmygosh im actually inside a sonic rainboom! This is so awesome!!!” "i know, right?" "no i don't." I flew, silent for a second and then bursted into laughter. Scoots joined in. I shooted all around ponyville, taking me about only a minute, at this speed. "oh my gosh, Dashie! you have to go and see what happened! if the Wonderbolts will take you!" The filly on my back gushed. So i flew back to the amazed wonderbolts. I landed neatly infront of them, scoots hopping off my back and joining her friends, them asking how cool it was to be inside of a sonic rainboom. "so Rainbow Dash." Spitfire began "without a doubt, you are now part of the wonderbolts." Reaching behind her, soarin handed her a costume that looked just like the ones they wore. "ohmygoshohmygoshohmysh" i gushed, the familiar feeling of thrill overtook me. I swear that if i wasn't in front of the wonderbolts, I would have cried. That evening, i stood infront of the mirror, admiring myself in my new wonderbolts costume. It fit perfectly. Like it was made for me, like the second i was born, spitfire knew i would be one of them. Now, all alone in my bed, i cried. I cried my heart out, i was sad, and mad, and frusterated, but of course, you could tell, from reading this story, i was happy. I finnaly reached my goal. But, as i lay there in my bed, thinking, I thought, what now? i reched my goal of becoming one of the wonderbolts. That is the thing i wanted the most, right? so what now??? will my goal be to....? to....? But, as i lay there in my bed, thinking, I thought, that dosent matter. Ill leave that for future me to decide. And so, as i lay there in my bed, in my cloud castle, hugging myself, with the wind howling outside and the rain coming down hard, I thought about how happy i was, and that that was all i could ask for at the moment. And that, was all that mattered to me at that moment. The End. hope you liked it!!! And for the millionth time, sorry for the spelling mistekes, i was sooooo eager to release this chapter. All comments Appreciated, even nasty ones. Seriously. Even nasty ones. But seriously, tell me what you think. peace!