Rainbow Dash finaly gets her chance to show the wonderbolts her stuff. but, an accident happens, and Dash needs to save someone dear to her. will saving the filly get her in the group? will she be able to do it?
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once again, im sorry about all the errors. my editor didint do such a good job
Very good story. Also alternate ending please.
Alternate ending
Definitely do that alt ending. Good story otherwise.
ALTERNATE ENDING PLEASE?! This made me cry. I'm a bit emotional.....
I also wish for alternate ending . . . determined and Derpy'd Rainbow Dash demands it!!
Dammit, ALT. END THAT BIATCH.
i request that you end it alternately.
Every comment: ALTERNATE!
Yeah, don't want Dashie to die
alternarte ending please,
also, I think this ending was a bit fast. maybe tell a bit more about it of what happened after?
at least i would like that.
good story otherwise
Alternate ending please. Everypony wants a happy ending.
That was a little awkward to be honest, I haven't seen a first person PoV death. It would better if you had told R.D's death from Scootaloo's PoV instead.
I liked the original ending but a alt. one would be nice
Alternate Ending!!!!!! She can't die she was going to be a Wonderbolt!!!!
okay... okay ill do the alternate ending
dont worry dashie wont die, shell get into the wonderbolts... as for scoots, she might die.... kidding 
but seriously. 
we'll see.
HAPPY ENDING/ALTERNATE ONE RELEASED!
its a tad short, but...... well i have no reason but....
okay hope you like it.
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wow im actually super glad it made you cry. SUXESS. HUZZAH!
An excellent alternate ending. Thank you for writing it.
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Love the alternate ending ideas
at the risk of sounding twisted, I think the dash death one would've benefitted with a bit more detail and more elaboration on Scootaloo and the Wonderbolts reactions, apart from that I loved them both 
great story and nice job 