I'm a 15 year old girl who loves CoD, Minecraft, football and My Little Pony. I QUIT.
Scootaloo has never had any family, but Rainbow Dash was the closest thing to it. Now she is a Wonderbolt, and she is recalling all the memories that help her get to where she is today. Some are happy, some are sad, but they made her the talented mare she is today.
**More chapters to come**
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Wow, that's quite the chapter ending. Damn.
I'll be honest, I had to stop reading half way through to stop myself from crying.
Normally I don't read short stories, and I really don't know why, but your picture for the story tugged at my heartstrings a little.
Really glad I read this. There was a few grammar errors that I noticed, but still great work.
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Or maybe this isn't a short story? My bad. Bookmarked.
It's good, keep it up.
I must be messed-up in the head, because the whole time I was reading this I was laughing, then the end came, and I was rolling 'round on the floor!
So yeah, I bet not the expected reaction, but I am now demanding the continuity of this! Onward, good sir!
WHY DID YOU KILL DASH?!?!
My god, I don't know what to say. Not Dashie...
This was a very touching story. It brought me close to tears, you narrated it all so convincingly.
anypony else get an ad for air saftey? oh the humanity
70185I got one for idolizing your hero
Bwaaaaaah!!!
At first I was like
Then I was like
And then
Then finally
Hoping to see more come of this, very good writing
but...but...why?
Bit hard on the eyes, with the flashbacks being so light. The story itself though is intriguing!
I never once cry at something so simple as a character dieing in the movies or books, but with this story, RD's death... its... wow...
well done my good sir well done.
I really love how you switch between present a flashback, so that we get to experience what Scootaloo is remembering instead of just being told about it.
Minor grammar errors here and there, but overall pretty solid.
Nice work Pegasistah, I enjoyed it very much.
Dammit, now I must read my entire dawww collection and I don't have time for that.
am i soulless monster if i didn't cry?
Very nice, it works as a one-shot and as a lead-up for further stories.
Just double-check your spelling and stuff, and I would suggest not putting the flashbacks in light grey on a white-background website - it's a right pain to read. How about italics?
whoa. Manly tears have been shed
but still a really good read, I hope you'll be doing another chapter 
*Howls to the sky like a wolf at night*
I am at a loss for words....
... I can't believe it... I'm crying... That means you did something right...
This is a great story! Keep it up!
I really wanted to cry but Apparently I am a heart and soulless bastard and I didn't get so sad..
I can't stand it when someone kills Dash
! Celestia damn it all! 
^ That being said means that this was a good fic, by the way.
Back to manly despair and raging:
! Brings back those terrible memories from "Decay". . . Dear Celestia. . . 
GGGRRRAAAHHH
As if it wasn't enough. . . Dash is the epitome of hopes and dreams, youthfulness and life, and best pony forever to me. *Sob* My heart gets shattered every time I read a fic that she dies in. . . Rainbow Dash honestly means something to my life, to me as a person, and though that's a little sad, imagining Dash dead wrenches my heart open in a way that an imaginary cartoon character shouldn't. . . . which is a good thing (lol, I'm confusing myself now).
WWWWHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYY!?!?!?!
Gaddamit
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I don't cry at stories. Ever. I just don't. But I came damn close here.
*BF3 RANK UP*
Private First Class biatches!!!
Dash died...how?
70254 Just fixed it I noticed it was light. Thanks!
i came real close to crying. i need a 21 gun salute and a picture of dash saluting to the American flag
Seeing all these comments... Thank you for liking the story!
There are definitely more chapters coming! 
i,mnotgonnacrynotgonnacryNOTGONNACRYNOTGONNAC-UUUUUUUUUUUUUEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Why, Rainbow Dash.
2 
1 
D'AWWW 
I love you!
D'AWWW in 3
It is said that all of the tears shed by this story travled back in time and created the Atlantic ocean.
y u kill dashie wtf she was 20% cooler than most ponies
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(Squeaky Voice) That Was Beautiful!!!!!
(Squeaky Voice) That Was Beautiful!!!!!
Your awesome!
'scuze me... gotta wipe somethin outta my eye.
What?
Me?
Crying?!?!
...you caught me, ya bastards....
Read it again... thrice.... four times... each re-read is funnier than the last! It's probably just me. I cry tears of joy, not sadness. Sadness makes me crack up. Keep writing!
can't say that I cried, I love it, and hate it. FimFic writers know just how to depress us, and that is by killing off our favourite character. These stories have not made me cry since i read Blue Feathers, but they tear me apart. It puts me in pain just thinking how the death of one of the Mane Six affects the others, and I just can't bear it. Though life does work in these mysterious ways, I never want to see a funeral on my favourite TV masterpiece, or about it, but I just keep getting drawn in. How do I cure this sorrow?
WATCH MORE MLP:FIM!!!!
OH.... easy
This...really made me...sad...
I didn't cry, and I don't cry easily, but this brought me close to it...
Dash may not be my favorite pony (look at avatar) but it seems many people have her die in their stories, and that is kinda depressing...
That said, this is very well writen and I hope to see more coming from you soon!
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*Ment to say look at bio, not avatar.
First Response: Yay, Scootaloo made it!
Second Response: Ah, happy memories.
Third Response: ..Oh no!
Last Response: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beautiful, sad, and depressing. Overall, that was some great 1400 words.
BUT
I can't help but feel that RD would act that way (Yes even at death)
Might she have had some life-changing things happen to her at her old age?
By the way, there's a line where Fluttershy calls Scootaloo "Scoots" not very Fluttershy-like to me :P
Anyways, this is looking amazing. Keep it up!
Why did you *sob* do this!?
TOO MUCH TEARS HAVE BEEN SHED BY US!!! *cries* 
Stupid tornado! 
Why did you have to kill rainbow dash!? *cries for 1000 years* 
*wipes tears from eyes and continues crying*