Human's have to get used to their new dimensional neighbors showing up in unexpected places.
Total Words: 287,797
Estimated Reading: 19 hours
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After pranking her commanding officer one too many times. Night Wing decides to get back at Echo with the one thing that will sure cause chaos: The Laser Pointer!
He's going to have so much fun with that thing.
It's gonna suck for the maid ponies that will have to clean up all that mess afterwards.
Please read below this before moving onto the story
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Edit: Sweet! This made it to the Popular Stories section (10-31-2016)
Finally! I do a story that's not human-to-pony.
1. Why am I doing this? Well, it's because I have an Echo page and very randomly throughout the last three to five months, I've been posting random pranking moments between myself (Since I run the Echo page) and Night Wing or just having fun with him which is Here , Here , Here , Here , Here , And Here
But, it was this post that gave me the idea of trying my luck at doing this laser pointer story with Night Wing getting back at Echo with said item with the post being this one.
Also, Night Wing is a commanding officer bat guard that I briefly mentioned in First Night on the Job
I also know there are other laser pointer stories which I've read and loved which are these The Laser Pointer and Princess Celestia and the Laser Pointer
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2. I'm super happy that I was able to get a fan that likes my Echo page to help edit the story for me because he added stuff that I never thought I would have added.
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3. What's my expectations? For a story that's not human-to-pony. I just hope that people can just love this silly/random story. If this somehow got 50 likes then I would call that an accomplishment since I'm not asking for much.
I'm just curious if anypony that normally be on the bat pony thread, Echo fans or maybe Zee66 read this, would they like it? Only time will tell... I'm pretty sure I got Echo's character down well enough I think.
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4. I guess to end this. If you happened to see any errors that my editor missed then just let me know and I'll go to fix it.
Hopefully you'll enjoy this.
Fluttershy has been given a remarkable device. If only the sound it made when the toast popped up didn't frighten her so much.
"It's called 'Shh'," said Fluttershy. "It's a game about who can be quiet the longest. Sound fun? I'm the world champion."
Fluttershy is not a pony who makes things up. She really is the world champion of "Shh," or The Quiet Game. And now it's time for her to defend her crown, with Twilight Sparkle and Rarity along for the ride.
Shining Armor hates being dragged along on Princess Cadence's decorating sprees. However, when he hears that she's planning on transforming his prized game room and military offices he realizes he has to put his hoof down and may have to resort to unorthodox tactics to convince her otherwise.
Will Shining Armor prevail or will he wind up mired in a world of apricot bows and possibly other frou frou designs?
Tagged sex for the assumptions of certain characters
The song lyrics follow the music of The Dead Kennedys' Holiday in Cambodia
Applejack expected a lot, when she got an invitation from Cherilee to talk about Applebloom.
But not this.
A little One-Shot, I had to get out of my head.
Edit February 12th, 2014: Major props to Frission, for proofreading the story and making it more readable. You rock!
I don't plan to add something as of now, but maybe I will in the future.
Fluttershy, eager to try the beverages the newly open Starbucks has to offer, gets her first taste of coffee.
Shenanigans ensue.
Here's my first attempt at writing comedy! Hope you enjoy.