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MIKEANTHONY321


"But life didn't throw you sugar or water!" -Me

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An experiment by Twilight lands The Mane 6, Spike, Big Mac and Zecora in the world of Team Fortress 2! Now they are forced to shoot against each other as they fight on opposing teams in the battle for dominance! Who will win the fight, and who will go home bloody?

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 111 )

This is going to be interesting.
Continue.

You know, I am doing something familiar, but mine has 18 characters fighting each other. And takes place in Equestria. But yet is not as popular as this one, how does that work?

2427091 I concur that I second your seconding of the concurrence.

Not bad. Keep it up. :duck:

Could use some help with the triple spacing after each sentence but it's pretty good.

Woooooooooo, i love this story, it's entertaining. :yay:

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Triple-spacing after every sentence is something I've always done. I didn't know it was such a problem. :fluttershyouch:

2429680 It's not bad. Just that it breaks the story to far apart and looks horrid. Just take away the triple space and replace with one, and you'll be set.

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I already started on the next chapter, so I'll take your idea into consideration once the following chapter begins production. :pinkiesmile:

Yes! Continue!

2431389 Alright. Good to see you didn't take it a wrong way. Hopefully that tad bit of info helped ya.

Excellent, I like how you included all of them this time.
Mann VS Machine? FUCK YES.

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That'll be the last chapter, and it'll only be the ponies up against the robots. :pinkiesmile:

And then the REDs and BLUs npticed that the opposing team was standing there, and began blasting the living tar out of each other to claim their new colorful pets.

I am curious; why not just have them be split into two as the others were done? Granted, it'd be kind of strange, but it would add for hilarity as well. Two Rainbows trying to out-speedy each other, the Rarities would have a conversation with one another to sort of self-evaluate themselves, and so forth.

Dovie'andi se tovya sagain!
Time to toss the dice!
-Wheel of Time, Robert Jordon, deceased.

And so the first round is over. And for some reason (yes, I get that a non-permanent death makes murder seem like less of a big deal. I'd prolly set people on fire with a smile in that TF2 position) other than Fluttershy nopony is bothered by the idea of murdering their best friends.
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And the announcer lady is finding nothing whatsoever odd about the new additions to the teams. :rainbowhuh:

I like the rivalry building here.
But it sucks how AJ and Rainbow are on different teams. Sentries are the only effective counter to Scouts.

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The spycicle technically regenerates after a few moments of being melted. It'll be back for the next battle. :pinkiesmile:

Awesome. I can't wait to see the shit that goes down at Gorge.

Jarate and the SMG occupy the same loadout slot. You can't use both at the same time.

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Your profile pic should explain that pretty well.

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Believe me, I know. I play TF2 a lot. :derpytongue2:
I just decided to ignore that, since this is more of a storyline and less of the actual straight-forward game. I was considering putting a loose relationship into this story, if you know what I mean. :raritywink:

Awesome. You're good at writing fight scenes.
Doomsday will certainly be interesting.

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Have you ever heard of Team Fortress 2? Mann vs. Machine is a big hit! :raritywink:

oh man MvM is fun...to bad you can't play it when you have a paid verson

She turned around, and noticed Red Engineer giving her a thumbs-up from his location at the rocket.   She returned the favor.


sorry to point this out but applejack doesn't have thumbs

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Well of course! They want them as hats!

2663524 i'm nether angry nor happy i am

2663584 alright sorry thats creepy even for me

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I planned on it. :D
(This is coming from my iPod, so I can't use the pony emoticons)

Ok, awesome chapter.
However Rainbow seems a little OOC (Out of character)
I know she's pissed off, but I don't think that she'd go that far as to push Twilight off and nearly kill her.
Looking forward to the next chapters.
Oh, and the next Twilight's Experiments sounds good, Mario Kart is awesome.

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Everything should be peaches-and-cream by the end of the story. I planned that to be Rainbow Dash's climax in behavior anyway. :pinkiesmile:

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