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What do orks, chaos worshiping warlods, insane doctors and your average man have in common? absolutely nothing
Join Kaptin Bluddflagg, Eliphas the Inheritor, The Medic from tf2 and your every day family man Mike as they try to work together and set their differences aside so they can find a way home while also dealing with the strange inhabitants

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 33 )

Okay, I like the idea. A lot. Quite a few spelling and grammar errors, though that is completely understandable due to the fact that this is your first story. I am a huge Warhammer 40K fan myself, and I like the way this is going so far. Also, make the story more descriptive. Just fix up your spelling a bit, and I'll keep on reading!:raritywink:

The grammar mistakes were imminent, and I don't get half the refrences, but seems very interesting! I await the next chapter. Also, erm, I have a friend who's an editor, Tyreese-le-Tyler43, that could help you. :twilightsmile:

(Hey... I live in Kansas! :rainbowderp:)

40k, tf2, and some guy in the real world, what could possibly go wrong? Love it, though you might need to work on your grammar a little bit :derpytongue2: also, perhaps a (or a few) editor could help you.
Basicly what I'm saying is:
1. this is a REALLY good idea.
2. you might need an editor
3. Anticipating a longer, newer one.

IT BEGINS!!!

BOLTS!!! NOT BULLETS!

I'm definitely tracking this.

Coool. Great story man!!!

That editing job looks familiar... :rainbowlaugh:

Enter Eliphas! Wonderful. Wondeful indeed.

EDIT: By the way, according to Abaddon his cabal of sorcerers can project his voice to where ever and whoever he desire; and Eliphas' soul is bound to him. Will we be seeing some of that? Because I'm good with it.

Good, good. Just please try to publish the chapters faster! I can't wait much longer!

Gork mork and Khorne


GORK MORK AND KHORNE!?

ALLITERATION FUCK SHIT WHORE

"…and that’s why I like stomping more dan daka,"

Wrong, dakka is spelled with two k's. I just love that word.

Next: Rainbow Dash charges in.

By the way, it's called a "sign", not a "sing".

Editor for hire!!! would you like one?
funny story... god how i love the Kap'n... wonser if theres the mention of sum sturmboyz

Well so much for first contact.

This will be interesting.

Celestia and the royal guards vs Eliphas and Bluddflagg. Well this will end quickly.:pinkiecrazy:

???

ORKS ORKS ORKS ORKS ORKS!!!!!!!!!

Hell Eliphas alone could probably take on the entire royal guard and win especially when he is dedicated to Khorne and carries the fully upgraded mark.
SWEEPING DOOM and whats left of the guards can be picked up in the next town lol.

uh...uh... BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD, SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE, MILK.... FOR KHORNE FLAKES!!!
nice to see a new update. kewl beenz. btw, im so fukin scared of the outcome... duz... wait, what blood was spilled? i dont rmember that happen ning (tablet typing, excuse the mistakes) if you need an editor/pre-reader or anything i'm glad to help.

lets go practice medicine imagine an uber charge eliphas or ork

something tells me Nailbrain is a chaos-worshipping ork

oh god i love this so much! YOU MADE MY DAY!

FINally! I waited fo'eveh!

Eliphas serves chaos undivided, not khorne. Chaos undivided is all the Chaos gods. otherwise I have no qualms with this chapter.

My sanity HAHAHAHAHA:rainbowlaugh:

Medic, eliphas and the best Ork capn? You sir have earned a like and follower!

"Because zog the logic, I'm an ork!"

sounds about right

MILK FOR THE KHORN FLAKES BOWLS FOR THE BOWL THRONE!

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