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A Pony Typewriter


I create ponies literature that is fueled by bottled tea and canned lemon tea. Yes these things exist.

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They're out of job, out of ammo, and out of New Mexico.

When machine replaced their job, they retaliate the only way they could. Shoot 'em all. Like any other plan made by their helmeted friend. It backfires. The flames burned them to another problem, and another land. A land that shares similarities to their Badlands. Dead trees, scorched sand, and exchange of gunfire. Equestrian Wasteland.

There, they walk a road to intervene an old grudge. The same hatred that sent the realm they reside into the hellhole it is now.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 45 )

ok i've read in and let me say you exicution of this is flawless
i love the way you introduced the story
and the way you tell the story is very gripping.
just watch you spelling and grammer and you got the makings of a very interesting original story
liked and faved:pinkiehappy:

The Spee!!! Where is he! XD
Liked this. Loved it.
Cannot wait for more.:rainbowkiss:

wait scout's name is Jarvis?

3920019 well the comic or wiki don't mention anything about his name, gotta come up with something

3920027

why not his voice actor?

Nathan kinda fits scout

Bonk! The atomic cola, good memories of using it whilst playing on Harvest and Hightower. But I really didn't expect his name to be Jarvis.
Now I'm going to imagine his voice like the one off Iron Man :rainbowlaugh:

Anyways, I love the names you came up for the mercenaries. Soldier was actually surprising, unless he still thought they were still under contract.... :rainbowderp:

3920130
Scout does look like a Nathan.

What will the Spee do now? Will the Bushman be praised for his success? (Obviously) Does the Pyro love children? (Of course he/she does)

Only time would come for the mercenaries.

Yes! My favorite classes arn't dead. :pinkiehappy:

Sniper: JARATE!

Red Pony: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

Zebra piss mixed with human is best jarate.

Or just a decent can of Mountain Dew.

I don't see how soldier become unconcious

4151815 Radiation poisoning do that to ya' first the taste of zinc then everything went black.

A Soviet cameraman experience this during Chernobyl when he shoot the inside of the reactor from a chopper.

You show them soldier!
That you can use any rocket to fly!!

And I think it's gonna be a long, long time!
Till touch down brings me round again to find.
I'm not the man they think I am at home!
Oh no, no, no. I'm rocket man!!
Rocket man burning out his fuse up here alone!
:rainbowkiss:

That's one way to end a chapter. . .

Oh man, if Soldier turns into a pony from radiation mutation..... That would make my day.:rainbowlaugh:

"Family," Heavy translated, "Zhanna, Bronislava, Yana, Mother..."

I named my minigun Bronislava. Funny to find that name in a TF2 story.

4183914 The name's cannon to the TF2 storyline a few days ago.

4184529 Just read the new comic. that pretty crazy that I named my minigun to Bronislava a few months ago and now he has a sister named that. I dont know what to say.:pinkiehappy:

imma go play tf2

and fallout 3

and watch mlp

at the same time




ftw

Is good, but needs some editing in the typos that pop up.

"You've been quite lately. Anythin' botherin ya ?" Dell asked.

By the way, it's Quiet, not quite. :pinkiesmile:
But other than that, it's pretty good!

let me tell you this story is dam good, tf2 is my favorite video game and Fallout Equestria is my favorite fanfic, who knew these thing would come to together so well?

Anyway i do have one gripe.

your grammar isn't bad its just,...... weird. your #1 problem is you often forget to make things plural.

like here

doctor fiddling with one of the body

pretty sure you mean "Bodies"

and here

crane on the middle, any volunteer?

could be engies accent, i just wanted to point it out.

is English not your first language? im not being mean i just wanted to know, my friend also writes fanfics and hes russian and also makes very similar mistakes.

anyway you pacing is perfect, the way you describe what going on is awesome and you capture the nitty gritty atmosphere of Fallout equestria and meld it very well with the humor and personality of tf2

i CANNOT wait for the next installment.

"If it wasn't for clop this sh*t would get featured."
-HWB

4185406 i names mine the "tutti frutti point and shooty." Descip "standard issue equestrian military bass cannon"

Soldier survived being dusted? How in the- wait...... The 'kill me come back stronger' pills!

Radiation changes body features in Fallout: Equestria.....
So.... You get to keep the cosmetics when you use Rad-away?
HECK YEA!! Even better then opening a crate!

Wonderful as always. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait for them to meet Mr. New Pegas....

MERASMUS
M: Yes!
SCREW YOU WIZARD VOODOO
M: WIZARD SURPRISE

Nothing can stand to these mercanaries
Is Merasmus going to appear? I hope so

All about how my life got flipped upside down

the platnom chip i can only guss

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