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Peridork


Sometimes you lose yourself in your own narcissism. That's when you find out you might be the bad guy.

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The Alicorn Sisters relationship has become strained. One prefers to rule through sheer strength, the other prefers gentle pushes. Their differences in ruling style have created a split Equestria. The Celestials follow Celestia and use weapons that make ponies into abominations. The peace of Equestria has been shattered.

The Ponyville Free Zone is a neutral zone between the Celestials and the New Lunar Republic. The Cutie Mark Crusaders will have to find their way in a world where their livelihood is marred by war. One day, Scootaloo finds one of the crystals that make ponies into shades of their former selves and through its infection becomes one of those abominations. Now she has to find what her crystal seeks and train to fight for her life. She will meet many friends and enemies and she'll realize that the world she knows is not the kind place she believed it was.

A Xam'd: Lost Memories Crossover. Alternate Season 2.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

this is actually good. The only bad thing about this is that apparently flutter shy is a stallion because she/he is a father. more explanation needed for this strange occurrence.

Sorry, I might change that I must have replaced the words that I wanted to say with the "Dad" because in the original, the character that she is playing is originally male. Thanks for the feedback. It's very much appreciated. I shall continue this and I will watch my pronoun usage. :pinkiehappy: 2321447

Edit: fixed. It was easy to do. Thanks for telling me because that would have been a thing that would have bugged a lot of other readers.

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btw What is Xam'd rated? and what for? it seems interesting, But I do have guidelines that must be followed.

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I don't think its like FF13. Never played it so I wouldnt know. It might have similar themes though.

Here's the japanese trailer for the anime. I can't seem to get an actual episode to load from youtube, but I know that the full season is somewhere on the internet. (I also heard it might be on Netflix maybe)

2324455The way you described it, it sounds exactly like FFXIII.

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I'd think that the anime is teen rated. There aren't that many scenes of actual gore and I plan on trying to stick faithful to the source material. There is only one point in the anime where a characters death comes out of left field, but I will try to explain how that will done when I get to it. (Either Chapter 13 or 14) In terms of actual violence, I have seen much worse. It is an anime with robots and giant monsters, think of what that might mean.

Let's just say that on some chapters more than others the sad/dark tags are more important than others.:raritydespair:

2324490Yeah, the xam'd sound like the l'cie from FFXIII.

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That is not my fault. Lots of stories have something like that. It might just be random coincidence. I also wrote the description before I went to bed yesterday. Trying to differentiate between a Xam'd and a Ponyform weapon (which the first one will be seen in chapter 2) is difficult because the anime never really describes what the differences are. At some points the terms are almost used interchangeably depending on the character.

It is frustrating to have to figure out how the war started, it never really completely says until the last couple chapters where the plot is kicked into overdrive.

When Applejack comes in the story I might have to create a back story of a never completely explained battle and they reference the battle constantly whenever the character is on screen. It is only hinted at in later episodes what really happened.

These reasons are why it is difficult to create a long description of the story without giving away plot points that won't come in the story for a decent amount of time.

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thanks for telling me, its just that, rated t could still have a part in a bathroom that's just barely within the limits. Im going to watch the first episode now. thx :derpytongue2:

Damn, I was gonna do a story like this. Not exactly like this, but close.

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Sorry. I guess I just posted this a bit earlier. You can still do the story, I know I'd probably read the thing. Thanks for checking this out. :pinkiesmile:

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No prob. This most likely a lot better than what i was going to write. Newby writer, and all that. Anyways you sir or madam deserve a moustache. :moustache:

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Just wanted to point out that ya missed one: Dad said Changelings have green blood and it makes sense, they are bugs right?”

And I'm just gonna take a guess and say that Applebloom's Furuichi, and Sweetie's Haru.

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, I felt like I might have missed one. :facehoof: Thanks. Will get right on that fix. :pinkiehappy: Hope you enjoyed the first chapter.

I DEMAND AN UPDATE!!!

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Forgot about this crossover lol. Guess I might think about it. Definitely not my main stuff now, but it'd be fun to maybe finish a crossover. Definitely think about it when I'm stuck on something. I've always wanted to come back to it.

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You demanded an update, I updated.

I WAS JUST TALKING TO MY BUDDY ABOUT THIS SHOW! We were watching a video about anodes where people turn into monsters and I brought up xamd.

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