Sometimes you lose yourself in your own narcissism. That's when you find out you might be the bad guy.
Cheerilee gets a new student because of a new law that the government created. Her new student just so happens to be one Pinkie Pie. Cheerilee has a task ahead of her: Teach the pink mare enough for her to be a "functioning member of society" and help her keep her job in Sugarcube Corner. Difficulties aside, Pinkie is going to have one busy time catching up.
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Did this really have to be a romance? What with the description of it and all.
Now here's an idea I've never seen before. This should be interesting to watch.
No Flutterdash? Oh well.... Interesting way to set things up there... This will be most interesting to watch.
This will surely be a magnificent tale.
Hmm, looks promising
....So funny!!
Oh and this part....
"Filthy Rich had told Cheerilee that his daughter was an angel that could do no wrong. Yeah, can’t wait to see how he takes her teenage years."
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It might change. Depends on how I feel though probably going to change it to just slice of life. I'm entering it into a crackshipping contest and I just read the rules, and they don't have to be in such a strong relationship as romance.
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This story will focus on the things Pinkie and Cheerilee do. And there might be hints of Flutterdash, but it is just too early to tell.
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That was my favorite part to write. I just thought that would be something that Cheerilee would think about in the privacy of her own home.
When I read this story I was instantly reminded of Billy Madison.
2575755 i know. But just a tiny hit would most certainly make me super happy
Well hope for more soon anyways as its a fun read and you seemed to come up with it quickly.
Hmmmmm, well, she did live on a rock farm.... but than again, Applejack never went to school either.
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Yes, that is true. For the sake of the story though, I thought that Applejack would have had some education and such.
because she was born and raised in Ponyville.
Since we are unsure about much of Pinkie's childhood in terms of the canon of the show, and by how old she looks when she leaves her family on the rock farm; I took it as she has a very young mentality when it comes to school in general.
But really don't overthink this. It's just a cute story that I came up with because of a contest prompt.
2576637 Ok, I won't. Funny story, this is. Keep writing, you must
Well events went by abit quickly but overall this promises to be a funerific story.
Yes. Quite.
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I know events went a bit quickly. Probably once I submit it to the Crackshipping thing, I'm going to add more to this chapter because I like writing this story like all my stories. Unlike my other stories there needs to be some more added. There is something missing in this chapter. Glad you like it though.
oh god, why do I get the feeling that Cherilee is going to find some scary stuff?
yeehar! Flutterdash
Im happy. It was nicely done too...
THe pinkie and her split personality is going to make things difficult for Cheerliee i think
teaching a part psyco at school each day. And it seems the two already have a small thing for each other...
keep up the work, and I look forward to moar.
This is interesting but it's throwing waaay too much at the reader way too fast. You need to slow down and introduce things slowly or at least give more description. I know you entered this for the May contest but I think you'd be better off doing a short one-shot rather than trying for a multipart.
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Thanks for the comment and
yeah might do something like that when I actually finsh the story. Thanks again.
Wow, I'm 100% for this story, damn, feel real bad for Pinkie Pie though, but this is serious, shit I can't wait to see how this progresses
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Cool. Thanks for commenting. I have been having writers block as of late in this here story. Though I might have a few ideas about how to continue. I've been thinking about how the Equestrian school system is made. (Blame my writing cycle of working on stories until I run out of ideas and then working on other plot bunnies. Though when I get comments I seem to write faster. . .
) I know I want to have a chapter about magic. 
Glad you liked and dude I seem to see you everywhere.
A dark half of Pinkie able to come out of her metal thought into her physical body? Gods, this is going to be awesome, a little quick on the romance but very enjoyable, alcohol does wonders it seems
Shit, this makes for an impressive dark story, I bucking love it, NEXT! Also, FlutterDash for the win!
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Thanks. I try to write drunk characters from experience. (And yes anytime there's a alcohol or drug reference I think of how I acted while under the spell of whatever I was on.)
but... it's shown in the show that Pinkie can already write, albeit using her mouth like most other non-unicorn ponies... brain overload commence...
Yeah I know it's a bit late but ...
When did she make that diary, considering she just learned to write?