IT'S HERE!!!!

Commence read.

This can only turn out well....right?

Well worth the wait, Mr. Axe!

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Snips, Snails...

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Yeah, I'm such a hack. It's not like I wrote a 50k word novella's worth of plot set before this story, or a story-based gay romance sequel to it, or two short character-based clops set in the same universe.

After narrowly missing out on an orgy between the teenaged Cutie Mark Crusaders, Spike, and himself at Diamond Tiara's party

Wow...That fuckin' suuuuucks.

2331281 Very good , but now I need a hard liquer and a good can of dip to forget this ..

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This story is a clop sequel. Clop sequel. As in 'the plot of this story is contingent on the story that proceeds it, but the pornography within can still be enjoyed regardless of your knowledge of the storyline so far.'

It's always entertaining to get dismissive writing advice from morons with one (!) 2000 word (!!) cancelled (!!!) story, especially ones who have time travelled here from the year 2006 (Paris Hilton joke srs?). Especially ones with such a stilted view of writing that they can't tell good pornography from bad, have no concept that pornography can be good, and think the goodness of pornography is contingent on the amount of not-pornography in the story.

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wow i really hope your comment is a deep and intricate satire because it reads like one

I understand that people don't all like the same fics

but using personal attacks like

What you have here is a projection of yourself into a possible scenario where you might get laid. Such things will not happen.

in addition to unsubstantiated generalization tends to create a mockery out of one's own argument

you speak from the perspective of some holier-than-you paragon of writing, but in reality we're both nobodies browsing a site that offers nothing more than a few moments entertainment

your comment is so hilarious, immature, and pointlessly vitriolic that i hope it's preserved in a museum somewhere, perhaps saved in a best-of collection

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Holy shit, who is this guy...?

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Uh, teenagers can be over the legal age of consent. You moron.

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See above. Teenagers can be over the legal age of consent, and in this case, they are.

*cough*dipshit*cough*

Golfman and the other one have gone from an interesting diversion to clogging up my comments like pondweed, so I've removed them.

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I'd like to point out that this is the end of the fic, which means you read it all. We didn't make you read it, thats on you. If you didn't like it, why did you finish?

Now for my thought: fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/171/3/0/rarity_is_horny_by_yoshiman1118-d3jgzmg.png

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Actually, comments are posted on the final chapter if you post them on the main fic page, so it's more likely they didn't read any of the fic, got mad at the description, and then continued to be mad.

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I'm leaving this comment up because it's lulzy and also wrong, thanks to a one-sentence disclaimer in the description.

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If you think my fic is breaking any law (hint: it isn't) go PM a mod. Otherwise, go find some soothing cream for your butthurt.

I'd just like to say that I'd totally listen to a band named Gratuitous Dildos. That is all.

2331607 It makes total sense. I did ask questions, and they weren't meant to be totally sarcastic and rhetoric. And thank you for telling me I have maturity, as my friends definitely don't think so.

Sometimes I just find random flame wars and cool them down. You see how my avatar's hat is blue? It symbolizes calm (actually it doesn't [TROLOLOL], he wears a blue Christmas hat because of a long and annoying-to explain backstory so I'll just say It symbolizes my love for cooling off flame wars).

2331623 By the way, don't insult people on the Internet, that makes you an annoying troll. By the way, why'd you delete my comment? I actually derived pleasure from your work and all I was doing was trying to end a flame war. Seriously, I don't understand why people argue about things like this. I'm sorry they annoyed you, but don't fight back, if you do, they will, and it'll just get worse inside a vicious cycle that no one benefits from.

Okay, synopsis of that last paragraph: I like your work, I'm sorry they hated on you, don't be mean

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I apologise, I deleted your comment by accident and then didn't post a comment saying 'I deleted your comment by accident'. Won't happen again

Also, as a douchebag, I reserve the right both to troll my own comments and to delete comments when the inevitable troll-skirmishes bore me.

Glad you liked it, check out Pipsqueak's Day Off if you'd like to read my... less controversial works in this universe.

2331703 Fair enough, it is your own story after all. I honestly don't really care though, it's just nice to know that someone actually cares enough to reply back. I'm kinda lonesome in real life.

BUT ON THE INTERNET I'M LIKE THIS.

2331503 And yet it was deleted for the story-writer's thought process.

I'm afraid it's lost forever.

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I'm the authorial equivalent of the dudes in white suits who burn the Mona Lisa in Equilibrium.

Welp. You did it. You made the feature box.

Scumbag...

Damn it Chuckfinley, now I have porn on my "Read it later" list.

I hope you're happy.

lol Perfect fit.

WHOOOOOO!!! BEST! CHUCKFINLEY CLOP! EVAAAH!!!!!

....

Was it good for you?

Damn that was hot. Just a bit unrealistic but that's what makes a sex
story good. please write either a sequel or another like this.

I'm going to have to go with a quote from Diamond Tiara for this one.

"Well that's fucking hot,"

Also one last question that will probobly receive some hate,but why is it lleagal to write a story like this with foals? Wouldn't it just be loli since the characters are not real? but whatever like I said earlier damnable good story.

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Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't Pillar a Christian Rock group? O_O;

Chuck, I'd like to both congratulate you on writing a really good clopfic... and ask you why the heck you haven't moved onto other genres. Don't get me wrong: when you find your niche, you do it to it whole-hog. My niche is horror, yours is pron.

I also know you attempted an action adventure with Banishment Decree.

But I mean, isn't it time to just move on to something huge? I'm actually thinking of dropping out of the fanfic scene after I finish My Little Castlevania to write my own books. I think you have the chops for something bigger than pony porn. Like, way bigger. PDO was proof. This was proof.

In short... seriously man. Go get your shit published!

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All it was is the name of the song. lol it just hit me when I read the title.

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You don't get hate it just means you can't read