It's the little things that make this clop work so well. It's heartwarming to see the bully getting along with the CMC's, enjoying a nice rut. Plus, that negotiation sequence makes it feel more complete.
Degredation & pain have never been part of my kinks, but despite that this was still an incredible chapter. Even if it's not really my thing, the detail put into the negotiation and the acts themselves made for a vivid experience that felt real and brought out the sexual act that much more. I have no doubt that if that were my kink, I'd find myself coming back to this chapter again and again.
The early description and use of metaphor with Chowder & Ruby was fantastic, and I was a bit sad that it was so short-lived. I have a massive soft spot for loving sex and this felt like a beautiful thing especially the end, which I shall agree with DT; that was fucking hot!
Nice to see that I'm not the only who has a kink for buttplay, whether that be rimming or anal. Would've preferred to see more of that in this chapter. Also, I'm not the only one who likes the idea of Sweetie Belle being fat? Dude, I like you a lot!
Comment posted by Silver Malice deleted Sep 28th, 2019
Very hot, and an excellent depiction of the negotiations you find in SM scenes.
It's the little things that make this clop work so well. It's heartwarming to see the bully getting along with the CMC's, enjoying a nice rut. Plus, that negotiation sequence makes it feel more complete.
Degredation & pain have never been part of my kinks, but despite that this was still an incredible chapter. Even if it's not really my thing, the detail put into the negotiation and the acts themselves made for a vivid experience that felt real and brought out the sexual act that much more. I have no doubt that if that were my kink, I'd find myself coming back to this chapter again and again.
The early description and use of metaphor with Chowder & Ruby was fantastic, and I was a bit sad that it was so short-lived. I have a massive soft spot for loving sex and this felt like a beautiful thing especially the end, which I shall agree with DT; that was fucking hot!
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I disprove of orgy's, drugs, and alcohol use, and never plan to be in/use any of those.
But that hasn't stopped me from enjoying your writing!
Nice to see that I'm not the only who has a kink for buttplay, whether that be rimming or anal. Would've preferred to see more of that in this chapter. Also, I'm not the only one who likes the idea of Sweetie Belle being fat? Dude, I like you a lot!