Elma corn live a normal live. she spend her time in ponyville like any other unicorn. but little know to her friends. she has a dark secret. She over a 1000 years old and is curses. for the last 1000's she had try everything to cure her curse. One day she try to cure herself and get an answer to her problem. A Spirit answer her cry for help. he tell her his name. Night.
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Is this supposed to be English?
your English isn't very good, is it?
I would give you the advice to get an editor. Your english skill is sadly not good enough to write a fic. Editors could help you there.
I Know. i move to usa when i was young. the charter are base of people i know in my story. i have an Editer to but he working all the time. so give him time to fix stuff. he said he get around to it when he has time. but until then. just try to graps the story. by the way i'm
of all these crap comments about how bad it is. i know. i'm not writing them to become the #1 writer on the site. i'm just writing them for fun. as it is The Tail of Endless Night was wrote out way before i join the site. i just wrote the speaking lines wrong and had to fix them. the Return is the same way. but i only into it 18 chapter and need to fix all before chapter 15. keep in mind. in school english was my weak subject. math was my strong. 
but more to the point. Yes i know i need a better Editer. but i don't trust anyone else to do it yet. i'm looking into someone else. but she don't like mlp fim so i don't know if i'll get her.
If anyone tell me to use google doc. we'll no. my computer old and can't handle it. i'm working on up dating it. 
but if your all can wait and i'll post when the fic's are fully update. grammer, spelling, ect... 
now leave me along on that subject. plz
P.s i'm also going to start reading other storys and see what mine lack in the grace and flow of words
pps. one like and it wasn't me wot.
2177451 thanks for the advice. but i have an editor. he just has to work all the time. so he can't always work on them.
You need more commas, fyi.
Yes, this is HUGELY in need of editing.
I thinking I like story.
i'm getting things edit very soon. just finish the editing for the tail of endless night. just starting on the return of night,
Fuck your name choice. Dreamynight is the most fucking awful name you could have pick.
There it athena now. keep in mind. i now have new plan for that charter. even if it only a small part.
Change her name back you asshat.
sorry but no more name change. i'm sticking with it. I never really like dreamy night. and I already got her set up in another fic. so it staying that way