Follow the tail of Endless Night. A young Alicorn who come from nothing. to being the most be love pony's in all of Equestria. This story is base back when Equestria was still young. before Nightmare moon. Before Ponyville. Before Celestia battle with discord. Before Canterlot had a castle. The tail of Endless Night. start after a two warrior pony's fall in love on the battle field. One a lovely Pegasus. the other a powerful Unicorn Battle mage. They leave the Battle's behind to start a family. but soon the battle find's them. This is my first story. i don't care if i get a good or bad post. this is just my story. it here for anyone who what to read it.
Chapters (26)
Oh dear. Bad spelling, bad grammar, self-insert and an alicorn.
That's the fastest strike-out I've ever seen. You literally lasted two paragraphs and a sentence.
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That's the shortest you've lasted? I'm impressed.
Sorry, but this is awful. If you were intending to make a trollfic, you've succeeded, congratulations.
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Soon as I saw 'horn and wings' I launched the escape pod.
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I've seen worse than this that was completely on the level. Csquared, show this guy what you showed me.
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That's cruel and unusual punishment. I wouldn't wish that fate upon anyone. Except you
So-so troll 7/10.
That it for the night. tomorrow i'll post the next set of chapter. now that i know what i was doing wrong.
this is bad. really, really bad.
Look, we will literally pay you to stop.
2165363 i don't need money. lol i'm still going to post tho.
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Funny comic go with story.
Up Date Made. Look For Word Fix# that mean i had it repair. so it not that bad anymore.
i think it better now.
It is pretty decent just needs a some edits
I will gladly help 
I FUCKING LOVE THIS!
2315173 thank you. your is the first real good comment i've gotten. check out my other fic. you may like them. now that i've started to fix them.
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Ya, it is a good story but you have to look through the grammatical errors to see it. When they are all edited up and pretty I'm sure I won't be the only good comment you'll be getting.