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Sagacity


Dec
1st
2013

Woo Shitfics! · 11:45am Dec 1st, 2013

Unforeseen Anomalies (by Dark_Night)

My life sucks... I lived a rather normal life... my life, quite literally flashed before my eyes

I do not have much plan for this story

Tell me about your life.

New in Ponyville

Theres a new pony in town.

Blaze is owned by my brother

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873339 Want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

The shitfics, man. God, that takes me back. Good times.

I want to thank you for pointing out the mistakes in my title :scootangel:

873137
Writers must master the basics before worrying about more complex issues like plot and theme. Your fic has capitalization, spelling, and punctuation errors in its title and description. I pointed out the most egregious of these to encourage you to edit your work. Fix it, along with any others you can identify, and then ask for a more comprehensive review.

You know, when you say that you review fanfics, maybe you should?
You commented on one of my stories, and did nothing but moan about a single spelling-error.
How is that reviewing?
Where is the feedback on the story, the message and the (no pun intended) plot?
You didn't review it, you found 1 thing to bitch about =)
I do not mind being told about my mistakes, but don't call it reviewing.

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