Hmmm, I was rather hoping he'd remain a Human. Oh well.

Well, now I can't wait to read the sequel. Great writing.

3687167
Yeah, I agree. I too was hoping he would remain human or find a way to control his transformation.
If I didn't know he was human before it would seem just like a regular pony OC story. Regardless, we'll see how the sequel pans out.

~8chill

Amazing to the end :D You can never have too much clop, and you can't let good clop moments go wasted. Amazing story! And it's even better since there's a sequel.

When I saw this come up, I screamed in exitment so loud that my neighbors came over to see if I was okay.MAKE THE SEQUEL!

*tears run down my eyes*.....you fucking amazing asshole....you made me feel...i only feel when the story is amazing....this is a christmas gift ill never forget...thank you...i need that new story link tag it to this story in a chapter so i can get it in a email

3687167 Or,I dont know,Just go with a Minotaur,Or a Gryphon,Or,I dont know,Let the fucker die in the body he's grown used to?......I mean really,No sane human would want to give up the natural abilities we've spent millions of years perfecting,Or the more unique ones we've spent our own lives trying out,I mean,Sure i can understand a few minor things,But losing hands?.....FUCK THAT SHIT,I mean,I can get shit like Corruption of champions and such,Wherein any transformations that happen to you tend to not actually alter the fundamental basics (Well.....Baring the Naga and the Centaur,But even those have hands),But actually becoming a completely different species,With none of the perks we had our entire lives?.....Yeah,If tia had done this to me,Id have said this "Turn me back,Or kill me now,I dont care which,And if Option A lead to Option B,Then so be it,But i WILL die in the body i was born in,Not this.....this ABOMINATION!"......Sorry for ranting at you,Im just extremely pissed at people who abandon all semblance of humanity

Best story ever! Can't wait for the next one.

is the sequel going to have a good ending?(and more clopping?) looking forward to it

3687570 }:-| stfu this is canadianbrony91's story. Make your own if you're gonna rant at people on how to make a story better.

3689080 Look,I know i seem like i absolutely hate the story,But i dont,for what its worth i find this story amazing,And considering what i previously said,I find this to be a slightly guilty pleasure,What with me hating Human turn pony with a passion,Yet still loving this story.I can understand that this is The authors work,And as such wont cater to everyones whims,And bloody hell im glad it doesnt,I was moreso ranting at fimfic and bronies in general......Im sorry for making you angry

3689751 Don't worry, I'm always open to criticism and new ideas But yeah, if you think there was something in the story that could've been better, by all means I'm glad to hear it! After all, if i was completely ignorant to what you guys thought about my story, it would suck pretty bad Don't be afraid to express your opinion

3689751 no prob.

3687570 Okaaaaaay, I'm just going to assume that you missed your coffee this morning....

Okay guys, Book one is done! Never thought I'd make it this far and I gotta give a big thank you to everyone who helped me reach this many views
Book two is already in the works and I got some great stuff planned for it
If anyone has any questions about this book (not the second one, I can't divulge anything yet), now's the time to let me know. Don't worry though, I won't spoil anything so let me know!

Again, thank you everyone who helped me get this far Book two will be just as great as the first! I promise I won't let you guys down

I am so glad I found out about this fic. It's like a dream come true.

got tunnel vision from reading that last part, that was beautiful.

"What's up with my horn?"
"Oh, that?" She gave your horn a puzzled look. "I think Princess Cadence did something to it in the middle of the transformation; said it had something to do with a reward for saving the princesses or whatever. Looks cool, huh?"

pretty horn, wonder what Cadence did?

Hey I loved the story. I can not wait to read the next, but how will I know when it is out?

3702780 Im really not sure, if you're following me then it'll probably send you a notification when I publish it. If not, then I guess you'll just have to keep checking my channel every once and a while sorry, that's my best guess. I'm also going to try and feature the next book on equestriaafterdark.org , so that's another place you can monitor

Hello I just made this account just to say this : this is most i have read in my life, I never so happy to see a new chapter pop up on my screen, you are amazing and i hope see much more from you. P.s The last chapter DEAR CELESTIA THE FEELLS

3702972 Thanks , and thanks for replying as well

When exactly will the second part be coming out? I'm checking this page every day! Good job by the way, this story is top notch.

3728060 I'm still working on it, don't worry To be completely honest, I had to take a break from writing for a few days because I was getting major writers block, but I'm fine now

It's all good man, take your time.

The last episode nearly shocked me! I just couldn't figure out the ending. I was shouting in myself to 'Alex': "Stay! Stay! Stay! STAYYY! I WILL KILL YOU IF YOU DON'T STAY!!!" God... Awsome story... Good job!

This story was so good! I'm just so happy I found this story and I can't wait for the Sequel

For those of you who didn't already know, Becoming One With The Beat: Assimilation is now up! I hope you all enjoy it and again, I'm sorry for the long wait

3783305 The person in my avatar is not crystal Rarara, it's Butt Stallion.

3784637 That's why this is a story and not real life silly butt

3784637 I'm sorry to hear you didn't like it tho... To be completely honest I'm still learning better writing techniques as I go along so if there's anything wrong with the first few chapters then that's why. Of course, Thank you for the criticism tho, it actually helps a lot

3781059 Geez I wish I would've noticed that sooner... Thanks

3783875

That's queen butt stallion.

3788052 That's good! I'm glad you're thinking for yourself, the last thing I wanna do is make people feel like they have to write one way or another and if they don't then they're bad writers

3790926 See? I'm not a heartless bastard after all

3789081 Whoa you're right I haven't looked back at those earlier chapters in a while and to be honest that was back when my writing skills were... in need of improvement... Thanks for pointing those out, I'll be sure to take care of it

i loves it

3792279 Kinda both I know its a weird POV style but it's how I like to write

beautiful, dude

3798149 Um...I didn't intend it to be rape, and I'm sorry if it sounds like that but I assure you it isn't

3798625 ikr

Cool.

This is probably the only "Human in Equestria(sp?)" story that I actually like.

Well I'm off the read the next one!

3799747 Please don't spam mah comments

3799762 If you don't like "beastiality", you're probably not going to enjoy 99% of the stories on this site

3800568 Um...there isn't clop in every single chapter... I don't know what story you're reading

3800587 Yeah, if you read through it, you'll see that the clop is spaced out adequately so that it doesn't get in the way of plot And no, its 12