You are suddenly summoned to the wonderful world of equestria to take part in a study about humans. But will your fate be sealed within Equestria forever when Vinyl Scratch, your favorite pony, becomes "interested" in you?
3503783 the way octavia wakes up vinyl is similar to how my mom woke me up as a kid. No lie she would take a wet wash cloth and drip water onto my forehead.
Update: Sorry guys but the next chapter might take a little longer than usual for me to write...Next week is dead week for us and I have two papers to write, so it'll be hard to find time to work on it So sowwy guys but ill get on it as soon as possible!
Should have brought a fire-arm; The old saying "You brought a knife to a gun fight" could have turned the Changelings into literal examples of Swiss Cheese.
Update: -finals and final papers still getting in my way -still making good progress - next chapter should be finished by tomorrow -should be posted within a couple of days depending on how long it takes my editor to edit -
Comes in to save the day, gets deathly injured in the end. Saw it coming as soon as Octavia said changelings were attacking, but still a good thing to add, so good work my good sir.
This is like the PURfect(cat pun haha!) example of why growing up with 3 brothers isn't fun. I can't say how any times I've woke up to one of them dumping water or something on me... Though I have woken one of hem up with a safety pin to the ass so I guess were even... *snicker*
Your first few thrusts loosened her up a bit, but it was still much tighter than any pussy you had ever entered. One thousand years of abstinence made Luna into a super-virgin, and the effects that her marehood was giving you were heavenly. You knew that at this rate, you wouldn't last long, and neither would she. If she was this tight, it only meant that you felt just as huge to her. Your thrusts became faster and more fluid as you braced yourself against her back and leaned forward slightly. The slapping sounds of your balls hitting her upper pussy and clit filled the room.
The fight gave me the vibe of the Left 4 Dead 2 Intro.....Which i hail as the best intro cutscene in gaming history
Woah
What the fuck just happened
... Damn. 'Nuff said.
3499757"this used to be a nice neighborhood"
3499933 Yep,That solid fucking thwack,Is the one thing that came to mind first
3499938this came second
3499955 .....Actually that just makes me think of the n64 mario party games....
I had Octavia wake one of my character up in one of my storys. I guess that's her thing.
Also loved the chapter.
3501093 I wouldn't mind Octavia waking me up just saying.
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the way octavia wakes up vinyl is similar to how my mom woke me up as a kid. No lie she would take a wet wash cloth and drip water onto my forehead.
Well, fuck. This is likely going to be bad.
Super Awesome Amazing story of Fantastical Greatness!
If I do say so myself.
But damn that cliffhanger...
Update soon pls
OOOOOH MAAAH GOOOOD! HEE DEEEAAD!
NOW This is why they need to create a military.
Update: Sorry guys but the next chapter might take a little longer than usual for me to write...Next week is dead week for us and I have two papers to write, so it'll be hard to find time to work on it So sowwy guys but ill get on it as soon as possible!
Should have brought a fire-arm; The old saying "You brought a knife to a gun fight" could have turned the Changelings into literal examples of Swiss Cheese.
Good story. Check.
Amazing detail. Check.
The main character saves the day. oh damn
3549404 Sorry, I know that's a bit trope-ey and cliche Oh well
3549728 No that's the reason its good
3549832 Ah I see...Well in that case, thank you
Update:
-finals and final papers still getting in my way
-still making good progress
- next chapter should be finished by tomorrow
-should be posted within a couple of days depending on how long it takes my editor to edit
-
3552952 Ok and I can't wait for the next chapter can't stop reading it even after I read all the chapters
damn. good chapter
LEEROOOOOOY JEEENKIIIIINS!!!!
Comes in to save the day, gets deathly injured in the end. Saw it coming as soon as Octavia said changelings were attacking, but still a good thing to add, so good work my good sir.
this is why i would never NEVER go to equestria without my minigun sasha, heat, changlings, and other monsters i better bring plenty of ammo
So Luna was distracted dream-fucking Alex, and that's how the changelings invaded without detection?
Shiiiit.
Alex seems to be a cheat...I enjoy the fic but I was hoping he'd be better than that, even if it was Luna herself requesting it.
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4296919 well buck
4351118 It fucks me up how your name is 'gleaming sword', and yet your avatar is probably the most adorable thing that I've ever seen.
Lil' Mac!
*grabs Alex by the collar* WAKE *slap* THE *slap* FUCK *slap* UP!!!!
This is like the PURfect(cat pun haha!) example of why growing up with 3 brothers isn't fun. I can't say how any times I've woke up to one of them dumping water or something on me...
Though I have woken one of hem up with a safety pin to the ass so I guess were even... *snicker*
3808022 LEEROOOOOOY JEEENKIIIIINS!!!! Indeed
again, my reaction when reading the middle of the chapter: i0.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/original/000/008/491/dafuq.jpg
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did you get that from the deadpool game
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