You are suddenly summoned to the wonderful world of equestria to take part in a study about humans. But will your fate be sealed within Equestria forever when Vinyl Scratch, your favorite pony, becomes "interested" in you?
Screw that! Be a human! We humans like having thumbs and not I very large tounges..... I mean no! This is a hietiap human in equestria turns into a pony story... FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
3270879 That's a good question. I probably shouldn't say too much about it because I don't want to spoil anything, but this topic will come up later, trust me There will be more discussion about the whole ordeal between Alex, Luna, Celestia, and Twilight further along so don't worry if some concepts seem a bit vague so far, they will certainly be expounded upon in the future.
Rather interesting story. Ill have to keep popping in every once in awhile. Hopefully more chapters shall be out at said moments of searching for an interesting story to take my time. Great story filled with interestingness. I tip my imaginary hat to you.
3272638 Thanks! I'm actually gonna be finished with the next chapter probably tomorrow night after I'm finished proofreading it and making any final minor corrections. Other than that, I try my best to make a new chapter each week. The only thing that interferes with that of course is my 6 college classes, so if I'm ever late uploading a chapter, that's probably the culprit
...it saddened you a bit to realize that most of these events were all negative and only a handful were positive...
It hurts me that I'm not 100% sure which one of those you believe the top line falls under.
Also, why do most people dredge up WW2 as a negative thing? Yes, it was a war and lots of people died, but would you rather we have left Europe(or beyond) under control of people like the Nazis? I remind you that these were the people who decided to slaughter an entire ethnic group for no reason and probably wouldn't have stopped with just Jewish people had things stood as they were.
The main negative point to this chapter is that you think most of the major events of the 20 century were negative. Many were, but ignoring the multitude if good that happened is some really unfortunate ignorance.
Would he really have to think about that..... Let's see here. On one hand you have the option to live in a magical lace as a magical creature with magical friends on magical adventures. On the other you get to go back to your shit stain of a life..........as a human...
4439663 well when pinkie babysitted the Cake twins the unicorn fillie levitated herself up to fly with her brother, so it wouldn't be that farfetched. But your right it is a typo he should have wrote Alicorn
You couldn't blame it on alcohol since you hadn't had enough to make you want to do something like that,
These chapters require a lot of concentration to keep focused on, so with that in mind, please message me (preferably privately) and let me know if there are any grammatical errors or anything like that that I need to fix.
Oh crap.
You stared at her attentively as she continued. "For every human that comes to live with us here in Equestria, we offer each one a deal, of sorts. One that could possibly help you 'fit in' with everypony else. The deal is this." You could tell she was nervous about how you'd respond to whatever she was about to say next. "Twilight can transform you into a pony of your liking, abandoning your human form and taking the form of one of us. You can be a unicorn, a pegasus, whatever you like, and have all the prestige that comes along with it. However, if you choose to keep your human body, you cannot stay here forever."You stared at her attentively as she continued. "For every human that comes to live with us here in Equestria, we offer each one a deal, of sorts. One that could possibly help you 'fit in' with everypony else. The deal is this." You could tell she was nervous about how you'd respond to whatever she was about to say next. "Twilight can transform you into a pony of your liking, abandoning your human form and taking the form of one of us. You can be a unicorn, a pegasus, whatever you like, and have all the prestige that comes along with it. However, if you choose to keep your human body, you cannot stay here forever."
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That has been my dream for over 6 years, 4 months, 1 week, and 5 days. Hoping to get some more progress soon on 3/32020 either that on the full moon on March 9th and then three weeks from that.
moar plaeseand great chapters
3263184 Thank you ^^ I'm working on the next one now so I'll try and finish it asap!
3263385no rush here longer the wait the better the chapter
3263535 Mkay thanks ill keep that in mind :3
3263590npand nice pic of vinyl :3
Screw that! Be a human! We humans like having thumbs and not I very large tounges..... I mean no! This is a hietiap human in equestria turns into a pony story... FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
3264665 Hmmm I'm not sure what'll happen Guess you'll have to keep reading to find out
Ermegerd 500 views!!! Thank you so much guys I really appreciate it!
And now 100 favorites You guys are the best
If he gets turned into a pony, can they turn him back into a human? Good chapter dood!
3270879 That's a good question. I probably shouldn't say too much about it because I don't want to spoil anything, but this topic will come up later, trust me There will be more discussion about the whole ordeal between Alex, Luna, Celestia, and Twilight further along so don't worry if some concepts seem a bit vague so far, they will certainly be expounded upon in the future.
Rather interesting story. Ill have to keep popping in every once in awhile. Hopefully more chapters shall be out at said moments of searching for an interesting story to take my time. Great story filled with interestingness. I tip my imaginary hat to you.
3272638 Thanks! I'm actually gonna be finished with the next chapter probably tomorrow night after I'm finished proofreading it and making any final minor corrections. Other than that, I try my best to make a new chapter each week. The only thing that interferes with that of course is my 6 college classes, so if I'm ever late uploading a chapter, that's probably the culprit
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Well then good job of at least trying to be frequent. that will be the thing that keeps me as a follower. Keep it up please.
3272703 Will do
How I thought the meeting was going to go:
So Alex, how is your visit going?
Good. Met a lot of ponies, made some friends, met my favorite pony, and I fucked your student silly. Y'know, the usual.
yes. one of us. one of us. the choice is obvious.
whoa, so that's the big choice? epic
3793908 I thought the same thing.
So... Twilight is a rapist.
3793908 I disagree Yes yes yes Yes yes YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!
3793908 I disagree Yes yes yes Yes yes YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!
3793908 I disagree Yes yes yes Yes yes YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES!!
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>Me During the bedroom seen during Twilight's advances:
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I sense a BIG loophole in her deal hue hue hue
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ya know what? im good
3793908 NOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPENOPE!!!!
It hurts me that I'm not 100% sure which one of those you believe the top line falls under.
Also, why do most people dredge up WW2 as a negative thing? Yes, it was a war and lots of people died, but would you rather we have left Europe(or beyond) under control of people like the Nazis? I remind you that these were the people who decided to slaughter an entire ethnic group for no reason and probably wouldn't have stopped with just Jewish people had things stood as they were.
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The only issue I had with it was that Twilight was drunk, so it makes me question his morals that he didn't even try to stop her.
3924116 He was drunk too, Dipstick.
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"Your new unicorn partner"
Weren't they talking about Twi's flight mishaps on the train?
Huh. Flying unicorns...
3898640 query: what was so bad about that comment that it was deleted?
I you'll say yes in a heart beat
The main negative point to this chapter is that you think most of the major events of the 20 century were negative. Many were, but ignoring the multitude if good that happened is some really unfortunate ignorance.
Would he really have to think about that..... Let's see here.
On one hand you have the option to live in a magical lace as a magical creature with magical friends on magical adventures.
On the other you get to go back to your shit stain of a life..........as a human...
I'll take Equestria.
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She's drunk.
at the beginning of this chapter i was like: weknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/03/what-the-fuck-am-i-reading.jpg
6069617 lol same here...
*reads twilight sex scene*
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> rape
4439663 well when pinkie babysitted the Cake twins the unicorn fillie levitated herself up to fly with her brother, so it wouldn't be that farfetched. But your right it is a typo he should have wrote Alicorn
Fuck it I'm getting my TARDIS
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TAKE ME WITH YOU!!!
Oh crap.
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That has been my dream for over 6 years, 4 months, 1 week, and 5 days.
Hoping to get some more progress soon on 3/32020 either that on the full moon on March 9th and then three weeks from that.
I forgot this HAD a MATURE RATING AND I WAS READING THIS WHILE EATING DINNER