You are suddenly summoned to the wonderful world of equestria to take part in a study about humans. But will your fate be sealed within Equestria forever when Vinyl Scratch, your favorite pony, becomes "interested" in you?
Update: I'll be releasing a one-off clopfic next week instead of the next chapter of BOWTB. However, it will be relevant to BOWTB. If that makes sense But don't worry, it'll be awesomely awesome (hopefully) and I'll get right back to working on the next chapter of BOWTB afterwards! Love you guys!
Stop. I have 2 things. 1. Stop writing such good storys 2. There is nothing wrong with the story. I can't even find a grammar mistake! Good job no wait excellent job! Oh almost forgot GO CANADANS!
As far as I could see there were no big grammitical errors. Just one or two misplaced speech marks but the awesomeness of the story made me forget where they were.
(I dont know how to do the weird take quote thingy) One the line with "two birds with one stone." you replied with a little laugh." You accidently added an extra one at the end.
Shit, now that's a cliffhanger.... Either way he chooses it's still a major game changer.
To be honest, I'd have to say no in his position. A thousand years spent upon the desolate and silent wasteland of the moon's surface, with only your own thoughts for company as your sanity slowly eroded with the passing of centuries?
Hey guys just wanted to reassure you all that I'm still working hard on the next story. Classes have been very busy lately and, I admit guiltily, Gta 5 and Assassins Creed Black Flag have been distracting me a bit But don't worry, my next one-off clopfic is almost finished and should be done within the next few days. Sorry for the wait, love you guys!
Hey everyone! My next one-off fic "Two Of A Kind" is fully written! It's been sent to my editor for proofreading and such, but as soon as he's done with it then it'll be up for you guys!
Nnngh! I really need to find my old profile pic... Aaanyways, as soon as I read the first sentence of thisdelightful sounding story, I was compelled to read it! I can't wait to start, as it looks like it's going to be a good one!
Update: school is getting really busy this time of year so it's been holding me back from writing a lot...Don't worry, though! Chapter eight is halfway finished and should be finished soon! Stay tuned!
My fingers hurt ;~; I've been writing all day and I'm glad to say that chapter 8 is finished! Just gotta do some passing back and forth with my editor and it should be up for you guys within the next couple of days stay lovely my friends!
I don't know if it was just, but it may have been all that was possible, and it was certainly deserved. You felt unappreciated and unloved, and in response, you essentially threw a temper tantrum (as well as possibly getting possessed by evil, not too clear if that's 100% cannon yet) that culminated in attempting to kill your sister, and plunging Equestria into eternal night. Now while I'm fuzzy about how that would work here, on Earth eternal night would have meant slow death by freezing for everyone on the night side of the planet, while slowly cooking everyone on the day side. So that right there is attempted fratricide, plus treason since Celestia's a head of a nation, topped with attempted planetary genocide.
Assuming the 'possessed by evil' story holds, then you're not technically guilty of those. However, banishment was still probably the only thing Celestia could have done under the circumstances. You're just as powerful as her, and anyone who's seen Man of Steel would know that an extended fight between two superbeings ends in a lot of death and property damage. However, she obviously couldn't use the Elements of Harmony at full power to purify you on her own, so a 1000 year time out was probably her only option other than killing you, assuming the Elements can even do/would allow that.
P.S. ...On the chance that you WEREN'T possessed by evil and that you did everything on your own initiative, you're twice guilty of at least the planetary genocide, since the first thing you did after getting back was do the whole Eternal Night thing again.
(Disclaimer: On the off chance I actually DID meet Princess Luna face to face, maybe even in a dreamworld setting, I PROBABLY wouldn't have the balls to say all that to her face...)
3939616 I have the balls to do so... I speak my mind. Fuck, I'd yell at Celestia! I could care less that she is the ruler of a country and could vaporize me with freaky mind powers. I would say what I wanted to!
"swallowed all of your cum down her throat" Nope. I thought she was gonna swallow with her hoof. Or mabye her tail. Mabye even her ear. Wait no...not her ear... Tat might cause some sort of infection... Jesus.... What the buck is wrong with me lol
Ps.....sparkler looks funny when she mad... Pps.....I know it's twilight... <_>
3939616 My opinion on if it was just is: no. She should have been executed, but seeing as how a show targeting children can't explicitly show dark and/ gory events/ scenes, then I must accept the route that the show ended up taking.
Personally all these dangerous villains and despots should be executed, since otherwise they just come back with a renewed quest for vengeance and seeking to rule the land of Equestria. Honestly, I think it's stupid that they just lock these dangerous villains away, but given the above explanation, I can sort of understand why.
But in my honest opinion, Luna got way less than what she deserved.
Damn cliffhangers.
3369643 Don'tcha love em
Sexy time with Luna incoming :D
Well... That got very intimate very quickly. It made me d'aww :3
Luna her throat before continuing. I think the word cleared should be in that sentence but other than that great job
3369647 Lets just say that for your sake you better have another chapter coming soon
Wow, straight to the loaded question. She really doesn't waste anytime putting him on the chopping block does she.
3369697 Fixed sorry about that
nice chapter my friend
Update: I'll be releasing a one-off clopfic next week instead of the next chapter of BOWTB. However, it will be relevant to BOWTB. If that makes sense But don't worry, it'll be awesomely awesome (hopefully) and I'll get right back to working on the next chapter of BOWTB afterwards! Love you guys!
God damnit,You made me squee all over the bed from sleeping vinyl....This is gonna take hours to clean....
That feeling when you get a dislike on a story
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3370768 NOOOOO! I missed it by 12 minutes. you know how to rustle my jimmies.
3370768 That post made me legitimately LOL
Stop. I have 2 things.
1. Stop writing such good storys
2. There is nothing wrong with the story. I can't even find a grammar mistake! Good job no wait excellent job! Oh almost forgot GO CANADANS!
It was not deserved or just, but it was necessary
As far as I could see there were no big grammitical errors. Just one or two misplaced speech marks but the awesomeness of the story made me forget where they were.
3373342 You mind telling me where those were so I can correct them?
3375074
(I dont know how to do the weird take quote thingy)
One the line with
"two birds with one stone." you replied with a little laugh."
You accidently added an extra one at the end.
Its near the end just after you meet luna.
3375160 Okay thanks I'll go take care of that
AWESMAZING STORY!!! You sir, earn alllllll the moustaches
3379113 Yay moustaches!
AVI NOPE
Shit, now that's a cliffhanger.... Either way he chooses it's still a major game changer.
To be honest, I'd have to say no in his position. A thousand years spent upon the desolate and silent wasteland of the moon's surface, with only your own thoughts for company as your sanity slowly eroded with the passing of centuries?
Even death would have been far more merciful.
3389936 I agree But I'm not sure how Alex thinks of it...guess you'll have to find out
3390908 Touche.
great story so far.
can't wait for the next chapter
Yo bro I just read another story that had the name Alex in it! Oh and awesome story!
Hey guys just wanted to reassure you all that I'm still working hard on the next story. Classes have been very busy lately and, I admit guiltily, Gta 5 and Assassins Creed Black Flag have been distracting me a bit But don't worry, my next one-off clopfic is almost finished and should be done within the next few days. Sorry for the wait, love you guys!
Hey everyone! My next one-off fic "Two Of A Kind" is fully written! It's been sent to my editor for proofreading and such, but as soon as he's done with it then it'll be up for you guys!
"Two Of A Kind" is now posted! Be sure to check it out and I hope you enjoy. I'll get started on the next chapter of BOWTB asap!
Feels so good to finally be working on BOWTB again
3468096 Check your PM box for my reply
Nnngh! I really need to find my old profile pic... Aaanyways, as soon as I read the first sentence of thisdelightful sounding story, I was compelled to read it! I can't wait to start, as it looks like it's going to be a good one!
3485517 Oh wow thanks!
Update: school is getting really busy this time of year so it's been holding me back from writing a lot...Don't worry, though! Chapter eight is halfway finished and should be finished soon! Stay tuned!
My fingers hurt ;~; I've been writing all day and I'm glad to say that chapter 8 is finished! Just gotta do some passing back and forth with my editor and it should be up for you guys within the next couple of days stay lovely my friends!
My answer:
I don't know if it was just, but it may have been all that was possible, and it was certainly deserved. You felt unappreciated and unloved, and in response, you essentially threw a temper tantrum (as well as possibly getting possessed by evil, not too clear if that's 100% cannon yet) that culminated in attempting to kill your sister, and plunging Equestria into eternal night. Now while I'm fuzzy about how that would work here, on Earth eternal night would have meant slow death by freezing for everyone on the night side of the planet, while slowly cooking everyone on the day side. So that right there is attempted fratricide, plus treason since Celestia's a head of a nation, topped with attempted planetary genocide.
Assuming the 'possessed by evil' story holds, then you're not technically guilty of those. However, banishment was still probably the only thing Celestia could have done under the circumstances. You're just as powerful as her, and anyone who's seen Man of Steel would know that an extended fight between two superbeings ends in a lot of death and property damage. However, she obviously couldn't use the Elements of Harmony at full power to purify you on her own, so a 1000 year time out was probably her only option other than killing you, assuming the Elements can even do/would allow that.
P.S. ...On the chance that you WEREN'T possessed by evil and that you did everything on your own initiative, you're twice guilty of at least the planetary genocide, since the first thing you did after getting back was do the whole Eternal Night thing again.
(Disclaimer: On the off chance I actually DID meet Princess Luna face to face, maybe even in a dreamworld setting, I PROBABLY wouldn't have the balls to say all that to her face...)
3939616 I have the balls to do so... I speak my mind. Fuck, I'd yell at Celestia! I could care less that she is the ruler of a country and could vaporize me with freaky mind powers. I would say what I wanted to!
3797128 nope
"swallowed all of your cum down her throat"
Nope. I thought she was gonna swallow with her hoof. Or mabye her tail. Mabye even her ear. Wait no...not her ear... Tat might cause some sort of infection... Jesus.... What the buck is wrong with me lol
Ps.....sparkler looks funny when she mad...
Pps.....I know it's twilight... <_>
3939616 My opinion on if it was just is: no. She should have been executed, but seeing as how a show targeting children can't explicitly show dark and/ gory events/ scenes, then I must accept the route that the show ended up taking.
Personally all these dangerous villains and despots should be executed, since otherwise they just come back with a renewed quest for vengeance and seeking to rule the land of Equestria. Honestly, I think it's stupid that they just lock these dangerous villains away, but given the above explanation, I can sort of understand why.
But in my honest opinion, Luna got way less than what she deserved.