You are suddenly summoned to the wonderful world of equestria to take part in a study about humans. But will your fate be sealed within Equestria forever when Vinyl Scratch, your favorite pony, becomes "interested" in you?
:/ How did I know there was gonna be a small portion of clop???
Nice story overall. I figured Chrysalis would have kidnapped him...
And I imagine those memories will make a huge impact on his decision. Really, he has no friends, his parents bicker...yep, tough choice. (stay in equestria with once-a-year chances to go back home)
da feelzez. . . they ache and writhe in my gut, and i missed them so dearly. you, dear author, have brought back my feelz for this chapter. i respect and revere you.
On dec 2 i started reading this at 10pm it is now 2:41 am...i well be a zombie in school but it was all wlrth it to read such an amazing story...plz...if you are ging to end it put a wolf in..for me like a pet or something or a talking wolf that tells him a big ass secret that leads to a sequl
3572683 I'm not sure if a wolf will fit in to the plot anywhere but hey who knows lol. Although I can say, and I'll go ahead and spill the beans now, that I'm thinking about making a sequel after this one is said and done with
3573088 how about alex going into the everfree and a timberwolf tells him something as he is looking for the old casle that would be nice plz i need a wolf somewhere to make me feel importent there is never any wolves in anything plz
Sorry for the delay guys, the next chapter is done but my editor is really busy and is having some trouble finding time to edit it. I'll have it posted as soon as possible
Twilight thought long and hard before she spoke her heart. "When Princess Celestia told me about the kind of world you live in, when she told me how horrible some of the people were... I was afraid that you'd be the same. But... you risked your life for ponies you didn't even know. Why?"
6186709 To be fair, the wars and atrocities of man stick out long before the acts of kindness. We remember the wars, but many acts of kindness are forgotten to the ages.
Many thoughts raced through your head. Your body was still in recovery, but you had to admit that Vinyl's kisses were a natural aphrodisiac and if just one of could get you in the mood. The itch was already there and if left unscratched, your bulge would still be there when Twilight and the others arrived.
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"Are you kidding?" Rainbow Dash's voice echoed from behind the group as she flew up enthusiastically.
"Alex,
I am happy to know that our best doctors were able to save you from your mortal wound.
I, as well as my sister and every resident in Ponyville and Canterlot, wish to humbly thank you for your incredible act of bravery during such a dangerous event.
I speak truly when I say that many more lives would have been lost if not for your actions.
Luna and I have discussed this issue for quite some time, and we have both agreed that you deserve a reward.
First, to help you have a speedy recovery, here is a vial of our rarest and most powerful healing elixir reserved only for royal emergencies.
Please pour one to two drops per inch on the wound."
Just then, a blue vial literally flew from between the lines of the letter, landing with a *thwump!* on the pillow next to you. It had a royal crest with the letters "C&L" inscribed in gold on the side. You placed it on the nightstand carefully and kept reading.
"The magic that keeps you here in Equestria wears off more and more with each passing day.
I am sure that you have felt some side effects of this.
The time to make a decision is soon at hoof.
We both know that the circumstances involving the choice you have to make are not easy ones, and they could be better.
Luna and I have decided, in an attempt to make our terms easier for you, to change one important detail as your second reward.
Instead of having to stay in Equestria forever, should you choose to do so, we will instead allow you to return to your home world once per year.
You will retain your equine form whilst here, but will lose it temporarily once you have made the journey between worlds.
Knowing that this may not be enough to thank you for your sacrifice, we all thank you again for your act of bravery and selflessness.
Blessings be upon you, my faithful student. Your Highness, ~Princess Celestia~"
If your gonna spread it out after each sentence I think it should look like this. 0:23
this might sound like a stupid question but is he in pony form?
3564003 Nope
This chapter brought up all sorts of feels man can't wait for the next one.
:/ How did I know there was gonna be a small portion of clop???
Nice story overall. I figured Chrysalis would have kidnapped him...
And I imagine those memories will make a huge impact on his decision. Really, he has no friends, his parents bicker...yep, tough choice. (stay in equestria with once-a-year chances to go back home)
Looking forward to every chapter you make :)
3567225 3564650 I'm glad you liked it however, don't jump to conclusions too quickly heheh
da feelzez. . . they ache and writhe in my gut, and i missed them so dearly. you, dear author, have brought back my feelz for this chapter. i respect and revere you.
3569664 Awh thanks
3570911 I'll try not to Although...next week is finals week so that may delay me from writing for a bit Sorry about that in advance...
On dec 2 i started reading this at 10pm it is now 2:41 am...i well be a zombie in school but it was all wlrth it to read such an amazing story...plz...if you are ging to end it put a wolf in..for me like a pet or something or a talking wolf that tells him a big ass secret that leads to a sequl
3572683 I'm not sure if a wolf will fit in to the plot anywhere but hey who knows lol. Although I can say, and I'll go ahead and spill the beans now, that I'm thinking about making a sequel after this one is said and done with
3572683 like Ajax McCriot? (The Angel of Equestria chapter 41)
Thank you everypony for helping me break 2,000 views! 31.media.tumblr.com/e79849516e8a87b87bb599aa0b79856a/tumblr_mx93z8V2eN1skw3qpo1_500.png
3573088 how about alex going into the everfree and a timberwolf tells him something as he is looking for the old casle that would be nice plz i need a wolf somewhere to make me feel importent there is never any wolves in anything plz
3576091 Okay okay I'll think about it
so are you done with this story or is there more chapters coming(or a sequel?)
Oh nonono, this story isn't quite finished yet. You'll know where the ending is when you see it, trust me
3576634 thank you!
When Can we See the Next chapter? This is Gettin' gooooood!
3582938 Finals and other things are getting in my way, but I'm still working on it, don't worry
Nooooo what happened to the layout? Why can't I get my Twilight night background no more? This is the. Worst. Possible. Thing!
(P.S: Very close to finishing chapter 10 )
3592742 :-| eeyup
Hey guys, whats up? How's everypony doing? Did y'all like "Daring Don't"?
Sorry for the delay guys, the next chapter is done but my editor is really busy and is having some trouble finding time to edit it. I'll have it posted as soon as possible
sweet
nice
Cool
4297064 I'm gonna be a dick here and ruin the trend of the three people below me by saying more than one word.
4439762 genocide
Winning
This story is awesome!! The once a year thing would definitely get me to say yes!!
Stereotype much? Friendship and tolerance my ass.
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To be fair, the wars and atrocities of man stick out long before the acts of kindness. We remember the wars, but many acts of kindness are forgotten to the ages.
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If your gonna spread it out after each sentence I think it should look like this.
0:23