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That pic, and your description! I'll have to check this out! *added to read later*
Didn't read it yet. But I just had to comment on that pic. it's nice, BTW.
Adding that to my NSFW file
That was...interesting. Its a good story, just not my type. I don't like seeing ponies turned into whores, esp Applejack. She's just too strong for that. Good writing though
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I enjoyed this story, you get a thumbs up
1766498
Anthro as stated in the description
Sad applebloom is sad
AJ is a whore 
and the others don't know 
and spike is kinky 
, on a side note, molestia 
You got some errors in your sentencing but I still liked it regardless. I liked the characterization with Applejack the most sine it seemed to fit her perfectly.
1766515
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An interesting take on what would happen. I also loved how you used a mirror on a bunch parts in the story and it ending with her punching her own reflection in hatred.
I noticed a few spelling errors in it and a quick read over will fix those right away, but other then that this story is something I would read again just for the sake of reading it.
I don't like reading sexual stories, they sually make me feel uncomftorable but I do say, bloody good job mate, that was some good story I tell you, thumbs up indeed
I love this. It's really good. I love you. You're really good. I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU, YOU SICK BASTARD!
Not bad indeed. One of your more serious stories, which I love. I really wish you would put that much detail behind a few of your other one shots you write.
Man, I love the story, but no so much the anthros...
I'm not much of a fan for anthros but this is nicely written. Excellent job with this.
A little.. odd, but still good. Thumbs up from me.
You always have a knack for writing good stuff. Excellent work RTE
You're always improving in your stories it seems.
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How could you do that to Applejack?! She wouldn't resort to that! It was hot, but still!
This was very well written.
AJ becomes a reluctant whore who's has too much pride to ask her friends for help? I can believe this.
Very well written. Despite being a bit dark it totally deserves it's place in the feature box.
Best pony becomes a lowly bathroom whore!? OH THE HUMANITY!!
Out of all the stories you have written, this one is clearly one of your best ones.
That was...better then I thought it would be. I want to see more of this.
1766515 Has anyone ever told you,"There aint no brakes on the rape train!"? I penned that myself. Did it a few years ago. And some people have started using it. You may also do so, as I find your name humourous.
you really , really need to proofread this, soo many typos.
Oh, oh my god. What made you do this?
1766515 Good story, however one sentence problem and I think that is it for accidental mistakes
You messed up here
But seriously well done. A few grammar slips here and there, and its anypony not anybody (unless the anthro makes it body. Idk
)
Now...
... TIME TO FAP 
I don't know if I'm going to read this story but I just feel I should let you know that your picture creeps the shit out of me.
As soon as it got to the bathroom, I played this: (Ignoring the beginning)
It fits the scene almost perfectly. In my opinion.
I.......I...I feel so dirty
YOU SICK BASTARD.......................LOL
Well ... at least it's not that Past Sins thing you were talking about or your My Little Dashie parody.
This actually managed to make me feel sad. That's a hell of an accomplishment for a clop-fic
You know, I read it... and honestly?
I didn't like it. It just... wasn't...
*taps chin* Ugh. I can't even put my finger on it. -why- I didn't like it. It's not the premise, though I have to admit, the premise in and of itself was definitely something that I didn't really enjoy about the fic, it's not what makes me dislike it.
So even though the writing and such is... ok, all I can really say is that I dislike this for a reason I'm not sure of, and you're a magnificent bastard because I'm gonna be stuck thinking, trying to figure out -why- I disliked it, for the rest of the day.
Only good part. "Considering the panties were actually edible yet somehow washable at the same time."
I smirked at the joke.
This was just awful... What the story is about, not the story itself. I can't exactly judge the story itself considering that I am already very biased against it, I generally can't stand anything that puts one of the main six in such a bad position.
As for the writing, it was mostly good, but I noticed quite a few grammatical mistakes and wrong words. I would recommend getting a proofreader for future stories, ask one of these fine gentleman.
Oh, and a side note about this: the whole point of the fourth episode of mlp was Applejack learning to ask her friends from help, and she displays this in the very episode that you broke off from for this AU. While AJ does have a stubborn personality, she would not stoop to this before asking for help. The premise for this is faulty.
I'm sorry if I sound critical, I don't think that this is bad, but there are definitely problems.
1766573
We call that "uncomfortable feeling" a boner. It happens when you read 'sexual stories'.
ANTHROSNOES!
I really liked the story. I can really feel the frustration with AJ, about the way her life is going, which really attests to how well the emotion translates into the story. I really hope you continue this somehow. So much potential here!
Thanks for the story!
Good story, good premise... though I believe in the multiverse, so thanks to you out there somewhere Applejack is fucking some disgusting fuck so her family can survive
and for that I can sincerely say that I hate you 
Have a nice day, and think about what you have done
I like it. It's one of the better clopfics I've read, that's for sure.
I hope you'll fix those minor grammar and spelling issues. The story deserves that much.
Ewww Anthro, probably won't read this one, but I'll give it a like anyway.
........
AJ noooo....
Anyone want to form a possee to fuck up Pigpen?
I got some knives and a 45 revolver.
Good Gods that picture is perfect! Where you find it?
Though I have yet to read it. Cause I'm lazy. Though the Flim-Flam brothers did win on a technicality. They did end up making the most cider. Even if it was terrible/horrible, they did make the most amd that folks is called a loophole or a technicality.
1766515 I've always wondered what the result of applejack losing would've been like. You kept her in character with the show's applejack and I like it.
as we cry for applejacks sorrows
molestia clops and clops
faust do not blame her
for she knows not what she does
o wait she does?
nevermind then
You win, Rape Train. You beat me... in this one sided race we were competing in, you fucking won.
ARE YOU HAPPY NOW?
Are you... happy?