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Pretty nice first chapter can't wait for the second one to come out
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My man, I have A LOT of work to do. Managing all of my fics is... let's say time consuming and making me experience stress akin to the stress that characters from Darkest Dungeon get after one of their long expeditions.
I wonder why he doesn't use magic to fix his vocal cords.
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Is that possible? another question can he even use magic?
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What isn't broken couldn't be fixed.
Those guards are just arrogant and upset that they failed there job and stranger able to do it for them
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Not just that, there is another reason. Remember - who are in guards and who is Val? He's considered a magicless lowlife that could be shoved aside just for fun.
I like this alternate-universe here, that's not ruled by some of the main princess characters from the show.
Nice start, and an interesting way of dropping readers into the world you have crafted.
So, Vals is a trader by day while living in the evergreen (interesting version of the Everfree). I can't tell what's gonna happen next, and that's a good thing.
So far so good!
To be honest, I think most of the info here could have been explained in a conversation somehow, or at least in a way that flows...because it was REALLY hard to read most of this chapter (until we got to the conversation between Val and Anna, then it was smooth sailing.)
Still a good chapter, just notes for future times like this
This reminded be of the Tusken raiders from Star wars lol
So, this is this world's version of nightmare moon huh? Cool beans
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I'll post new chapter in a couple of hours. Stay tuned and thanks for reading.
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No problem man, it's a solid story!
Oooo, love a good mystery mixed into a story, especially if done right.
I usually don't read stories like this, but this actually has my attention
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I'm already halfway trough the next chapter. Expect it in a couple of days.
This is nice to know, but what actually happens in this story?
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About the forest itself and what's happening in it.
I thank thee for the new chapter